Date: 05/22/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
loving thestory but I love most of your stuff...can't wait to see how you redeem Spike.
Author's Response: It will come, I promise, but it's far away. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/21/2005 - 09:53 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
I like it so far...i agree with you all the way about body reactions......
i just home you come with Spike's feelings for Buffy sooner that later.....and Buffy trusting him....well good luck
Forever Luv
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/20/2005 - 03:45 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
I hope Buffy doesn't become this cold-hearted bitch or else she wouldn't be any different from the other girls there that Spike's spent time with. I mean, he liked her from the start for a reason, right? And please don't make Buffy go to the dark side cause that would be really bad. Buf if you're planning something, okay. LOL. I mean, if it's part of the story, well okay no flame. And it's your story so I can't really do anything about it. But still, loved this chapter. Great work, PJ. But why are there flashbacks almost everytime they have sex? Oh, and I'm really loathing Spike right now. LOL. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Sorry Laine! Darkness is ahead! I'll make it better in the end. Thanks for reviewing! (and I'll understand if you stop reading)
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
i wonder if it was Angel and his gang that messed up Spikes two jobs? So Buffy reminds him of Dru maybe? He seems to have a "weaker" spot for the both of them. Great update, def worth the wait and im excited for the next! Good Job!
Author's Response: Glad it was worth the wait! I'll try to be better about updates :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
I know its a story and that Spike is all mean and harsh, but damn, even mean and harsh he melts socks! Great chap, I thought for minute there buffy was gonna try and bargain with her overheard knowledge (maybe next time - might earn her some points with the Big Bad). Still Hate Angel in any characterization (it's a mental block I have). I'm still hoping he doesn't get his hands on Buffy. This tale rocks and I love everything about it so far. Love how all the characters seem to have some of their original (series) personality traits (Darla so "regally" condescending, Faith so cocky and kinda fun (even while being scary), Cordy such a cross between nice and bitch, and Illyria so cold and unemotional... they really fit. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: LMAO. I couldn't stop laughing at "melts socks!" I'm glad you liked the characters :D Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 05:21 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
awww how sadi really dont like that spikes so agressive but i understand its part of the story and that it will hopefully get better. i love this storyt and am so happy that u updated. i really enjoyed reading this chapter. i hope that buffy tells spike of wat she heard lindsey said andi that she learns to love spike and spike love her. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx. also i cant wait to read the update of an alternate attraction i love that story thanx
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! -the happy ending is far away, but it wouldn't be any fun if it came too soon ;)
Date: 05/16/2005 - 03:01 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
loving this fic. i hope Buffy gets to kick some ass soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 02:13 pm Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
I'm happy Spike talked to the girls about hitting Buffy- that's a step in the right direction, I think. That sucks about Angelus' plan, but that just adds more to the plotline. I just don't want him to step in and think he can control Buffy, too. But she's not losing her edge or fighting heart yet, so that's a good sign. She'll survive this, emotional scars and all
Author's Response: She's headed for darkness, though. I guess you could still call that edge ;) Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 11:09 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
Awe, update! You're welcome :) So the attack happened - and nobody knows you did it - except Buffy. And Spike gets a bit softer when Buffy is concerned, huh? ;-) Looking forward to the training.
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:23 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
Aaah, peer pressure does get results :-) Love the title of this chapter, by the way- very fitting. And you can really tell Buffy's slow change and Spike's very subtle feelings. Now, when can we expect the next chapter ;-) I'm sure you'll be hearing from me later today LOL!
Author's Response: Glad you liked the title ;) Took me a while to think of it...repeat after me: beating pj up for chapters is wrong!!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 10:18 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
And the reluctant softening begins......Poor Spike, always the lover never the loved.......LOL
Author's Response: So true! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:57 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
just got caught up and love love LOVE this fic!! but then i guess i'm just a sickie coz I think mean Spike is soooo HOT
lol
Author's Response: Thank you! Don't worry - bad ass Spike IS hot!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 09:01 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
I love it!!! =D Pretty please update soon`?
Author's Response: I'll try! Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 08:46 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
Buffy is toughing up, I like it. ..Stupid Todd dude....and I love Faith :D she's my hero *happy sigh
Author's Response: Here's a mini spoiler, Buffy is 'darkening u' also. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 07:14 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
Poor Spike, he's getting his foot, oops, make that his heart stuck again, isn't he? Tee hee, he deserves it.
I love this story.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: He sure does deserve it! For now anyway ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/16/2005 - 04:09 am Title: The Dark Light at the End of the Tunnel
Spike's quite the jerk in this story - he has some major redeeming ahead, hopefully . . . but anyway this is a really interesting story. I love the way you build up all the tension - great job and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I can't forget the redeeming ;) but it's a long way to there. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/06/2005 - 10:07 am Title: Saving Face
Great chapter, PJ. I think I loved it waay too much if that's even possible. And yeah, Spike is being an ass right now but there are familiar stirrings of concern for Buffy. Really looking forward to more. Good luck on your mid-terms. Thanks.
Author's Response: Can you love it too much? lol. Thanks though!! Glad you liked it :D
Date: 05/04/2005 - 09:39 pm Title: Saving Face
wow, i am so happy that Buffy didnt magically get skills after one fight. I cant wait to find out why she didnt fight harmony. Im hoping its so that she learns faster and better from illyria. I like that Cordy shows small bits of compassion here and there, maybe they have more in common than they think. I also like that you get glimpses of a softer side of Spike, a side i cant wait to see. Wonderfull update and i cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: I think the story would have plummeted if she just magically acquired skills, lol. Good thing you agree ;) Also good that you seem to be noticing the small details, because those are the only crumbs we get from the gang right now. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:52 pm Title: And the Winner Is...
Hey I just wanted to say that I absolutely love this story and I'm so glad that you updated!!
Author's Response: I'm happy that you like it! Thanks for reviewing :)
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:17 pm Title: Saving Face
Tsk, tsk, tsk - thought you were going to put the Spuffy interaction in this chapter *sigh* LOL! Just kidding :-) Expect much prodding for the next chapter when midterms are over *wink, wink* And I think it's expected (or it should be) that Spike is an ass right now- although the little bit of sympathy that was hinted at was a very good decision to leave in. Can't wait for more :-)
Author's Response: LOL, I knew you would be sad! That's what happens when I tell you something ahead of time and then don't get it it :X Anyway, I'm quite sure you'll be on my ass to write ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 06:01 pm Title: Saving Face
Ok, so even this isn't the best situation and there's been mondo violence in her young life - at least she's starting to feel again (too bad it all seems so painful). Hopefully things will get better soon (just keep her away from Angelus until she can defend herself a bit). Cordy seems almost nice in this fic (well, compared to everyone else). I love it and would like more real soon please! Thanks for writing/sharing.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far, but I should warn you it's not looking so good for Buffy anytime soon :( Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 03:11 pm Title: Saving Face
i really love this story. please update soon, i cant wait for more
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 03:08 pm Title: Saving Face
Hank is an ass**** - how could e say something like that to his daughter? He was the next to hurt her. Wonder if Buffy will take long to learn to fight ... and if she'll tell what she overheard.
Author's Response: Funny thing, I tried to see if I could make Hank into a nice guy, but it just wouldn't fit no matter how I thought about it. Hence, elevate him as a jerk! lol. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:28 pm Title: Saving Face
i'm LOVING this fic! Buffy's mix of emotions are perfectly normal in this sort of situation. We've been learning about hostage situations and emotions in my Psychology class, so everytime we discuss things like how hotsgaes feel, i always think about this story. i hope Buffy gets to kick some ass soon! i think Buffy may open up to Spike about what happened to her mother, and this may break through the steel encasing around his heart that Buffy's already made a dent in. Well thats my theory any way! I guess i'll have to wait and see. UPDATE SOON!!!!
Author's Response: You've been learning about hostage emotions? Uhh, want to tell me what you learned? LOL. I'm just making it up as I try to imagine what it would be like, but it's not like I had a gang experience myself :P Glad you liked it though! Thanks for reviewing :D
Date: 05/04/2005 - 12:44 pm Title: Saving Face
Nice work sparky, very nice. I like the interaction between the 2 gangs. I love this story!
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!
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