[Report This]Date: 08/31/2005 - 10:50 am Title: Chapter 18: Night Out
Great Chapter. I know Angel told William not to tell Buffy. About his side affair. I sure hope Buffy Finds out. I sure Hope Buffy catches Angel and Angel can't turn it around onto Buffy. Can't wait to see what happens. Please update soon and often
Author's Response: I'll try to update as soon as I can, I'm hoping to get this story finished (even though there's still loads left to post) this weekend....but you'll stilll have to wait for my updates. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/30/2005 - 05:15 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
I have just realised I haven't reviewed in ages!!! Bad me I know!! I am loving this one and I am sure you know that! You are writting the characters so brilliantly. I can't wait to see how this is all going to pan out! It really is a brilliant story!
Everyone should READ THIS STORY!!!!!
Nikki xx
Author's Response: Thanks for the review sweetie...you're not bad...just not reading my story ;) thanks for the bit of an order! And i have some stuff planned for them...*evil laugh*
[Report This]Date: 08/28/2005 - 12:52 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Angel is just such an idiot! Yay!
Author's Response: He is, isn't he? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Interesting, very interesting, lol. Can't wait for more of this great fic as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment...thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Angel is such a complete dolt. Can't wait for William and Buffy to go on their first 'date'. Love this story.
Author's Response: :D Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
LMFAO! This story just keeps on getting better and better! I can't believe Angel just admitted her was shagging Darla as if it were the right thing to do!
Great fic so far, I love Sam and can't wait to see what happens on their date!
Author's Response: Angel has some pretty messed up logic....I'm working on their date! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 08:36 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
OMG what a fu**ing moron Angel really is!
That he's cheating, then tells William about it!
HOw arrogant is this guy? Angel's so blind to anyone caring about Buffy that he just handed Spike carte blanche to be with her!
Yeah Buffy and Spike...
spuf
Author's Response: Angel's pretty full of myself...he really can't see what's right in front of him with Buffy....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 02:41 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Yeah, I know .. Buffy is married to Angel so it's good that she tries to work on her marriage - I just don't like her doing it *g* But I know why she does it. Oh - but Angel is cheating on her .. What do you think now, Buffy (I know - she doesn't know it) *head desk* Angel wants Buffy to go out with William? He didn't notice anything - which is good. I wonder what William thinks about it...
Author's Response: Now that I've put this out htere, I'm so eager to get the rest of the story posted....thanks for the review hunny!
[Report This]Date: 08/27/2005 - 12:47 am Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Well isn't that a hell of a note.angel has a girl on the side.Darla yet.And wants william to go out with Buffy,and not say anything about his other er activities!"This is heating up,big time.
Author's Response: :-) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 11:10 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Oh Buffy, if you only knew...
Author's Response: If only.....now you just have to wait for her to find out!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Kind of wonder why he ever married Buffy? Is she just a trophy wife? I hope he gets Darla pregnant and all in the open with facts.
Good Chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks and thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
LOL Angel's very stupid for suggesting that plan, but I'm SO thrilled he did. I can't wait to see what type of sparkage results from this:) And thank you for saying you posted a new chapter- I wouldn't want to overlook a chapter or anything because it might've been reposted. Loved the update!
Author's Response: Angel really is an idiot isn't he? Thanks for reviewing sweetie.
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 10:20 pm Title: Chapter 17: Going Out
Glad you updated! What a brilliant idea from Angel, I can't believe he's so much of an ass...(by the way; we're still waiting for that explanation why is is with him in the first place)
Author's Response: You mean I forgot that? j/k...It's coming...I promise
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
You already know I love this fic huni ;) so this is a pimp review--READ THIS FIC!!! It's stupendous and wonderful and lots of other nice words that mean amazing! And also, thanks for the note huni! I'm going to post The Chosen Half sometime tomorrow, just so everyone knows =D
Author's Response: Thanks for the pimp..it's always helpful...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:36 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
Argh! This is my absolute favourite story at the moment and I'm loving every moment of it. They are growing closer so naturally and as much as we want that we all know it's going to bring them soooo much trouble. I wonder if Angel will find out that Spike implied Sam was his daughter and how he'll react. More soon PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: I hope I can keep it up....thank you for your absolutely, wonderfully perfect, fantabulous review! I just absolutely adore it!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
William's slip to one of Angel's co-workers may be problematic, but it's a nice fantasy. I loved Sam's enthusiastic description of the children's museum, it was in realistic kid dialogue. The flirting is picking up nicely.
Author's Response: I tried so hard to ake that sound like a kid...thank you so much for saying that !!!!!!!! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
Oh S....that really was bad luck for William. Wonderful chapter and Sam is so lovely. I especially love that Buffy is such a contradiction in all her thoughts and her actions. Please update!
Author's Response: Buffy is reallly confused right now,I'm trying to get that across...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:35 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
I loved this chapter - it was great! Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
Great update! If Angel finds out, which I'm sure he will, he's going to be very upset. But Sam and William are just so cute together:) And I sincerely loved Buffy's convo with him about his pet names- that was adorable! I'm pushing off studying... can you tell?! :)
Author's Response: We'll see if he finds out...or if there are bigger things about to happen...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 16: Field Trip Time
I love this story but you sure do know how to make a person wait for some spuffy.....ummmmm...its kinda hard waiting like this but anyways great chapter loved it even though i really wanted to bury angel alive tonight by saying what he said to buffy....lol...loved it
Author's Response: Don't want to ake you wait too long...my next story is more immediate with the Spuffy, I promise....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
I'm late... *sigh* you had to remind me that Buffy is married to Angel - that's what I don't like here. William is so great with Sam :) Maybe you can make Angel divorce Buffy because she did wear the wrong dress? A not pretty enough one? Soon? ;-) And you are right - I don't think anybody likes Angel here in this story.
Author's Response: Sorry for reminding you of Angel..and the Angel/Buffy bit..I don't like it anymore than you do :)
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Hehe - I like Mr Hendersen - Angel has said the wrong thing about public schools :) Seems as if Buffy might loose Angel to Darla *looks hopeful*
Well, I hope Buffy used the time on the sofa to think very hard *I'm sorry but I want Angel gone* :))
Author's Response: I think wanting Angel gone is sort of a popular opinion...wonder why that coudl be? ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Ohhhh progress -- I love it! Keep it coming! William with mussy hair reading -- adorable!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Great chapter - stupid Angel is a prat, lol! Can't wait for more of this awesome fic as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Thank you for all of these reviews, they're just lovely!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
does she knows she's not happy ?
Author's Response: She's getting there...Thanks for the review!
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