[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
blah to angel! i can't wait to find out why buffy married such a jerk! What a sweet kiss from william
Author's Response: You'll find out eventually..Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:26 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Thanks for updating! Can't wait to get Angel out of the way. He's really starting to get on my nerves. Why is Buffy with him again???
Author's Response: I'll explain it some time...I promise!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
There was definite contact there!!! Woo hoo!! Can we have more please?
Author's Response: Yes, you may have more..since you asked so nicely and all ;)
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Angel you ass! I hate Angel sometimes. I try to make him nice, honest but... Anyway, another great chapter and I hope William and Elizabeth/Buffy make out soon! LOL! spuf
Author's Response: Angel's not too nice in this fic...which is odd because I don't hate him too much....except when he's threatenign the Spuffy....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Angel is such a prat. Send him to the Amazon and have him captured by female warriors to be a slave. That way we can get to loving time with Spike and Buffy. Liked the chapter anyway.
Author's Response: Sounds like a good idea...but glad you liked it anyway thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Angel's bitchy comments to Buffy and overt flirting with his secretary are a couple more black marks for him. At least Buffy has found an ally in Angel's firm. I hope Mister Henderson's grand daughter is just as nice s he was, Sam needs friends her own age. The tension between William and Buffy is going to be even tauter after the knee patting and kiss, can't wait!
Author's Response: Buffy and WIlliam are getting there....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
See, William is a sweet man- why can't Angel take a page out of his book? And I wish Angel would get the stick removed from his ass LOL The audacity of that man to say what he did and to flirt with Darla sickens me, but I'd love it if he ran off with her instead and let Buffy go for William instead- at least I know they'd both be better suited with their new significant others. Great job!:)
Author's Response: Because if Angel acted like William there wouldn't be a good reason for Spuffy....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:24 pm Title: Chapeter 15: Part II
Aaaawwwww that was good. I'm practically clapping my hands in happiness. : )
Author's Response: :-D Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
This story is killing me. I so want them to be together and yet the whole slow process thing is what keeps me coming back with fingers crossed that another little line will be crossed. They are so going to combust when they finally let loose. One tiny thing that stood out for me though...Why is Buffy wearing a black bra with a pale pink dress? Unless they material is quite thick that baby is gonna show through.
Author's Response: It's a satin dress...not sure if I fixed that here...thank you for these perfect reviews you keep leaving me....Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Oh blackmailing the reader, always works with me. Excellent chapter, things are starting to get a little heated... Please more soon!
Author's Response: Blackmail's fun, huh.....I'll try to have more up soon :-) sorry some of these updates have been a bit delayed. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Yep, Angel sucks ass. He's so rude and mean..but he's picking up on something there? Interesting. Love the whole scene with Spike seeing Buffy in her bra and how he dealt with it lol. More please!
Author's Response: I'm working on getting you more...really I am...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
I'm really enjoying this, and having Spike as a tutor is a great plot device. I love the believeable way Buffy has been included in the lessons. Sam is a good original character, not too sweet or perfect. I'm happy that Spike and Buffy are hyper-aware that she's married, even though they're attracted to one another. Angel is coming off as an arrogant jerk, nice job there, too! I hope you explain their marriage at some point, she seems to smart to have stayed with him for six years
Author's Response: I will explain it at some point, I promise....thank you for such a wonderful review..always love getting reviews like that :-)
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Great chapters! Sorry to miss the last one until now, but it just meant I got to read two in a row, which is far from bad, lol. Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )
Author's Response: Two in a row can be fun :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Can't you drop Angel in a deep black hole? Would make the story flow even easier. Actually a good story and a great chapter.
Author's Response: Just good? ;) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Get divorce for A/B, will be great.
Author's Response: It would be, huh? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
that's short ! I want more!!! ;)
Author's Response: not that short...actually longer than most...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:17 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Great way to let Spike see Buffy half naked! Okay, not very naked but still... You're right, Angel has to be mentioned, he's married to Buffy (sadly). I really like the steady sweetness of this story. spuf
Author's Response: Would anyone really notice if Angel just disappeared? I mean really? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/26/2005 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 15: Part One
Angel's a bastard- no secret in that. He tries to control everyone and everything around him, but he's just an insecure jerk behind all of that. Sam's such a sweetheart, willing to forego a snack because of what had happened. And I love the fact William saw Buffy in a bra- that made me giggle. Great update!:)
Author's Response: Said so in another one of these replies (and probably will again) but I love you for picking up on the things I put in there and hope someone will notice....
[Report This]Date: 08/04/2005 - 01:47 am Title: Chapter 14
Oh my God this is killing me. I don't think I've ever read a story that's managed to make the sexual tension so subtle and so explosive at the same time. Really great work. I feel sorry for poor William, he's trying so hard to be good. Just makes us want him to lose control all the more.
Author's Response: You leave the absolute best reviews ever, thank you so, so,, so, so much!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 14
loving the relationship between Spike and Sam . What a perfect guy for Buffy. Now, let's get rid of Angel!
Author's Response: Perfect, huh? Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 14
Yes, I review for people who review for me:) William is SO sweet to Sam, which I love seeing. And Buffy gets along well with him, too, so if she would just choose him over Angel, that'd be lovely LOL Loved it!
Author's Response: It'd be great wouldn't it...Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 14
Love the cooking sessions :) As does Buffy and Sam *smile*
Author's Response: Thanks honey for the great reviews!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 03:07 pm Title: Chapter 14
He is such a sweetie with Sam, but I also get the feeling that he is too shy to pursue Buffy. I hope she is going to be the one taking the initiative... Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
Well, he's in love with her..so..now what'll happen? They're getting quite close and Angel hasn't been around much....:)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 08/03/2005 - 02:57 pm Title: Chapter 14
How sad for Spike, to sit and watch 'his' two girls and know they belong to someone else. Sniff.
The cooking lesson was really sweet.
spuf
Author's Response: Sorry for the sadness...there will be happiness soon! Thanks for the review!
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