

Date: 04/25/2009 - 05:23 pm Title: William the Bloody
Please continue this. The story is fascinating. I'm enjoying it immensley.

Date: 01/29/2008 - 04:41 pm Title: William the Bloody
Like it. Please update soon.

Date: 12/31/2005 - 01:22 am Title: William the Bloody
i just read your story for the first time and i am hooked!!! i really hope that you are still writing this story and updating it. i am dying to read more of it!!!! please with a chocolate coated spike on top will you update soon?

Date: 07/13/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: William the Bloody
just found this story and am loving it
Date: 06/03/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Unwelcome Surprise
I just sat here and read the first three chapters. I like it. I hope you write more. This is a real good story.
Date: 05/29/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: William the Bloody
beautiful cute fic!!! i adore it...can't wait for next update...you're doing a terrific job...you have me hooked ;) thanx
Date: 05/28/2005 - 01:21 pm Title: William the Bloody
Great story Please update soon, BIG chappy please
Date: 05/28/2005 - 11:11 am Title: William the Bloody
More soon please im luving this xx
Date: 05/28/2005 - 05:01 am Title: William the Bloody
cant wait for more William and Buffy interaction.
Date: 05/27/2005 - 08:30 pm Title: William the Bloody
Please write more of this. I find the plot idea intriguing. I like a good "William" story right along with my Big Bad Spike. This is going to be very interesting, and there are so many directions it can go in. I like how you flash from the past to the future and back. Spike already feeling William's new memories of Buffy as the time goes. Each day will bring more, etc. Nice mixture of Spike as well as William. I wonder what will happen next. I look forward to the next update.
Date: 05/14/2005 - 01:47 pm Title: Slayer Gone
LOL! Spike knows her the best!Lets see what she'll screw in the past.
Date: 05/13/2005 - 08:22 pm Title: Slayer Gone
wow this fic drew me right in. Im so interested in why he's dying (what thecause is). Maybe someone went back in time to screw things up before Buffy got there? I dont know and i dont care because whatever the real reason i know it will be great just like these two chapters where. I cant wait for the next update, this is incredible!
Date: 05/13/2005 - 03:56 pm Title: Slayer Gone
Totally awsome! want more!
Date: 05/04/2005 - 01:04 pm Title: Unwelcome Surprise
This is a great start hope to read more.
Date: 04/24/2005 - 12:11 pm Title: Unwelcome Surprise
i really like the concept of this story...it has so much potential...but you seriously have to do something about the spelling and some grammar mistakes, so you should get a beta...a story like this..you should really consider it...cos otherwise, it wouldn't be the best it can be so...hope you update soon and take my advice, it is for your own benefit and the story, no bad intentions... ;) so please continue...thanx
Date: 04/24/2005 - 02:40 am Title: Unwelcome Surprise
nice one!!! cant wait to read more!!
Date: 04/23/2005 - 06:06 pm Title: Unwelcome Surprise
Okay that was a very cool start I hope you continue I'm excited to see what happens next with spike's sickness and buffy's disappearance.