Reviews For Eternal Champion
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Reviewer: Seraiza Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/16/2005 - 12:37 am Title: 2

wow this is new........ waiting for more!

Author's Response: I'll work on it

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/08/2005 - 09:52 am Title: 2

Huh? Spike claimed the First Slayer? And the Immortal Slayer is not the First Slayer... so he is mated to the first one and there's still the prophcy that Buffy is friend, lover, mate and wife to the Eternal champion. And now Spike thinks Buffy is thinking of the Immortal and leaves her... What will be next I wonder? ... If this story is finished, I think I have to reread it to understand it better. Or it will come with the next chapters. TNX for updating.

Author's Response: There are more chappies to come, when I don't know

Reviewer: Pin Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 - 07:32 am Title: 1

Great start to what looks to be a really intriguing story. Buffy seems a little arrogant about Spike's continuing love, so I hope you knock her down a peg or two. Loved the imagery of Spike and the Dragon. Looking forward to more. Thanks.

Author's Response: Thanks, I realy eed to update this fic. Hope you still like it :P

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 - 07:01 am Title: 1

The first chapter was very good. Wonder why Buffy is with the Immortal this time ... She knew according to Prophecy, as the Immortal Slayer she was the soul-mate of Antonius Lisignolia, the Immortal Champion. Funny though, the prophesy called him the “Eternal Champion”, but the git was boring as drying paint. Prophecy, huh? Seems to me that there is a new not so boring “Eternal Champion” now :)) Looking forward to read on.

Author's Response: Well Buffy is rather dense, thanks for the feedback

Reviewer: Shippy Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 - 06:44 am Title: 1

Sounds promising. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: I hope I can write more soon

Reviewer: Always_jbj Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/06/2005 - 06:37 am Title: 1

Woo hoo.... GREAT start!!!! I hope you will be updating soon... PLEASE!!!

Author's Response: thanks

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