Reviews For Forbidden Fruit
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Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/02/2005 - 12:04 am Title: Sweetest sin

now u have to continue it another chapter!

Reviewer: Kitdane Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 - 01:38 pm Title: Forbidden

You did a good job. Yes there were spelling errors but not enough to make it hard to understand. You should continue the story.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 - 01:46 am Title: Forbidden

Oh, dear girl......you can't stop there......unless he just really like the fact he was doing sisters and one was jailbait....LOL

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 - 12:49 am Title: Forbidden

just wanted to let you know that you did a fantastic job with this story

Reviewer: dreamgirl4eva Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/01/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Forbidden

for a first time it wasn't bad...were some missp. but other than that it was pretty good....in fact ive read much worse!

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