Date: 06/14/2005 - 12:21 am Title: God help him
Oh sh**!
Okay, I don't mind William being turned, no.
But I detest Drusilla and I will finally say why.
She's a skank, a ho a weak mindless dweeb and a useless piece of female. I guess I just always hated her weakness, not matter who caused it.
She's such a 180 from Buffy who is strong and defiant. Sigh...I suppose it was the time and all.
Anyway, the bitca (Drusilla) grated on my nerves as, sad to say, did the actress.
(I won't even go into that)
Anyway, please keep updating, and please have Spike and Buffy together, soon.
Luv, spuf
Author's Response: Honestly i hate Dru too, which is why i have her end already planned out teehee. I dont like writing her in but i thought i would stay true to who turned him....homage ya know? No worries though, everything will be okay lol. Thanx so much for the awesome review, i really appreciate it!!!XXXhope you like the next chap
Linz
Date: 06/14/2005 - 12:07 am Title: God help him
there goes Willaim and here comes Spike.... waiting for more!
Author's Response: Good to hear and thanx so much :)
Date: 06/14/2005 - 12:02 am Title: God help him
Lol…why do I get the feeling that Willow’s “resolve face” is as effective as my “metro glare”?! Hehe..I absolutely adored how you had both Buffy & William in a constant high throughout the whole day after. It made the ending to your chapter that much more emotionally desperate! Eeee…if I didn’t know just how enticing Spike could be I would be oh so desolate right now over William’s turning. Hehe…you got Dru’s random thought processes down to a T. I guess you can’t really hate her completely for being so attracted to his light and wanting to possess it. Eeek…I’m going to miss William though! *sigh* poor Buffy, I can only imagine what comes next….! xxx
Author's Response: lol i forgot about your metro glare teehee! But yes, it is similar lol. Thanx so much for the nice words shan, its good to hear cause i had such a hard time killing William to bring Spike in!He is full of light and alive or undead youre absolutely right, any girl would want it! Thankx again xxx
linz
Date: 06/13/2005 - 11:54 pm Title: God help him
oh my god!!!! i know it had to happen soonner or later. i was actually hoping for later. it was a great chapter. i know buffy isn't gonna take this well. please post soon. you did really good. great job.
Author's Response: I know but all good things must come to an end, so new good things can start :) She will not take it well but doubly so, youll find out why in the next chappy :)Thanx so much for the wicked nice words!!!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 11:35 pm Title: Everything we do is perfect
*sweat drips off brow, skin flushed, and eyes dilated as she re-reads this steamy chap* Dammit girl, you just can’t read this type of stuff in the summer heat we’re having without provoking an empathetic response in your readers!! Hehe…it was very well done, I’m still revisiting all the sizzling sessions in my mind! I love that you had Buffy be the one in control over her first time. Great job on the descriptive detail…it sure did help the whole visualization process! Hehe…*grins broadly* Reading this fic has definitely become one of those decadent guilty pleasures we all love to indulge in! xxx
Author's Response: Jesus shan lol. Um...thanx :) I thought it would be nice if she had the power in their first time, to show him how much he really means in some way.....so this is a pleasure to you mmm? So glad to hear it, love ya sweetie:)xxx
Date: 06/13/2005 - 11:02 pm Title: God help him
I knew this was coming but I was still screaming noooooo! Cant wait to see how William (or Spike now I guess) will turn out.
Author's Response: I was too sniff!!! It wont be all that bad, some angst is coming but sooner then later well have Spuffyness!!!xxx thanks for the review!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:42 pm Title: God help him
wow totally didnt see that coming but i wonder how buffy is going to take the news
Author's Response: Not very well but something will happen to make the shock of his death that much worse........dum dum dum.....(creepy music lol) Thanx for the review and i hope you keep reading :)
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: God help him
I knew it was going to happen eventually but i really didnt want it too!! i love william! he and buffy were so cute together! Buffy is going to be so heartbroken! I can't wait to see what happens now! i REALLY don't want him to be Dru though! u hope he isn't! But i trust you to make it ok! :-p
Author's Response: I didnt want it too either but everything happens for a reason right? The title is my promise to the readers so no fears :)She will be heartbroken but do you really believe spike wont? (winks) hes not the average vamp as we all know so this will be okay, i swear!!!There wont be too much Spike and Dru, i dont even want it, thanks again for the review!
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:34 pm Title: God help him
Very cool. Love how you did that whole scene. And now the plot thickens...Buffy is going to take this BAD
Author's Response: thanks so much. I was worried that people would be pissed and not supportive...so your kind words mean a lot, thanks again.xxx
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: God help him
NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHY!!!!!!!!! im so sad right noe i cant believe that happened even though i knew it was coming. i love this story so much and am so happy that u updated. this update was so sad, im so sad that he got turned. i really hope that him and dru dont get together that would destroy buffy and that wen he wakes up and is a vampire that he still loves her and that he doesnt harm or hurt her. i really would hate if he was with dru thats just cruel but if u do it make it short okay. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and am dying to read wat happens next with will/ spike and buffy. thanx
Author's Response: Im sorry im sorry im sorry.....Im sad that he got turned to but i wanted a fic where Buffy knew the man before the 'monster' so that she cant treat him the way she did in the show, ya know? It is gonna be hard on them and there wont be too much of him and Dru.......i promise :) thanks for the kind words and i hope you like the next chap too. It's gonna be rough for awhile and im hoping i dont mess up, im trying to write in a twist i had in mind from the start but its tough, sigh. Ill keep trying though,thanx so much again xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 09:31 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
Ahhh-Spuffy goodness!! I loved it. You did a great job of combining sweet and tender with just plain HOT--just like our favorite couple in this ficlet. The whole injured bad boy line at the beginning, another great glimpse of our beautiful vampire. ***sighs*** I could totally picture him in my mind. Ok, having a moment there. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please update soon. I'm hooked:)
Author's Response: Thanx so much, its always hard to write those scenes so feedback is great. Its funny cause you dont wanna seem like a perv but at the same time how the *beep* else are you supposed to describe their lovemaking lol? Im about to write the next chap now so i hope you like it, xxx thanx again for the great review!!!
Date: 06/12/2005 - 09:07 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
Great chapter! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanx so much i hope you like the next :)
Date: 06/12/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
Well, I certainly liked it!
It's tough, to write sex scenes, huh?
You did very well indeed.
Luv, Spuf
Author's Response: It really is lol!!! It's a fine line between sweet and perverted but the more i write the less i start to care lol, i still find it a little embarassing though lol! thanx so much for the kind words and im glad youre enjoying it :)xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 07:18 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
Very hot. Love it. The foreshadowing is killing me lol.
Author's Response: Thanx very much, the bad moment is gonna come up soon, after the next chap actually and im dreading it lol! I hope you like the next chap and thanx for posting a review, i appreciate it!
Date: 06/12/2005 - 04:36 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
awww huni ur a star! thanx for the update this chapter rocked! cya xx
Author's Response: wow lol, i dont even know what to say to that, thanx so much and im uber happy that your liking this!!!!xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 04:24 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
so hot and sweet !!! bravo !!
Author's Response: (blushes) thanks very much, its always nice to know when someone likes your work, makes me all warm inside lol, xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 02:47 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
AWWW i thought it was sweet very cute chapter cant wait for the next update.....all my love christina
Author's Response: Thank you very much Christina, so glad to see your liking it!xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:45 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
absolutely loved it
Author's Response: Thank you so much xxx
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
great update, waiting for more!
Author's Response: thanx so much :)
Date: 06/12/2005 - 01:34 am Title: Everything we do is perfect
awwww how cute im so happy that they finally did it. i loved the gift he gave her thats so sweet also i loved that she wanted it a pushed for it, normally its the other way around. i love this story so much and am so happy that updated. this story kicks ass. i really hope that hes there in the morning and that everything works out. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and am dying to see wat happens next thanx
Author's Response: Thanx Sarah :) I thought it would be sweeter if William was the one who wanted their first time to be special....glad you thought it was too! Hell be there in the morning but his turning is coming close, sorry, but i promise that it will have a happy ending:) Thanx so much for the kind words i really appreciate itxxx
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:42 pm Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
extremely hilarious! love the ending of the chapter with all the 'anya bunny' poop on it. waiting for more!
Author's Response: lol thanx for the review, it made me laugh. Thanx for leaving your op, i appreciate it :)
Date: 06/10/2005 - 12:34 pm Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
i loved it. keep up the great work. please post soon
Author's Response: Thank you and ill try my best to keep you liking it and ill post as soon as i can xxx
Date: 06/10/2005 - 08:28 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
“You claimed me even though you where this big bad vamp. You still wanted me!!!" I love that line. William was so right about only Buffy finding the "yay" in that situation. Trust me--there was no mess in this chapter. I love how you cut back forth with Buffy and the Scoobies. And again, I think I might've been drooling a little when Spike the vampire came out to play. So does the claim still exist even if he was a vampire because of a spell? I'll let you work that one out:) I can't wait for the next chapter. More soon please:)
Author's Response: Another great review, thanx so much for taking the time to leave this! I was really worried about the chap so thanx for letting me know you liked it. The claim wont exist anymore because hes human but it did exist when he was a vamp.....the claim might make a second appearance later but thats all im gonna spill for now lol. Thanx so much again!xxx
Date: 06/10/2005 - 06:44 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
LMAO!!! :D :D thats great LOL :D i had this vision of him making her a vamp. *shudder* glad u didnt, wudnt have our lovely spuffy couple then wud we? LOl :D more soon huni cya xx
Author's Response: Thanx so much, glad you enjoyed it :) I wont turn her in this fic, some people do great jobs writing her as a vamp but its not my thing really :) Ill try my best to post as soon as i can, thanx so much!XXX
Date: 06/10/2005 - 04:28 am Title: They did the monster mash/ Graveyard smash
great updates
Author's Response: Thanx so much its always great to know!xxx
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