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Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:59 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

LOL Loved the name to this chapter. It so fit.. Awesome ch can't wait for more

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

Well, honestly, the only weird thing about this chapter is that it really doesn't make sense having Spike sleep in Buffy's room rather than on the couch.... Other than that, good chapter!

Author's Response: Aha..someone noticed lol well dont worry...i will explain that in the next chapter, but basically...joyce doesnt believe making a guest sleep on the couch. shes a nice lady and thinks that all guest should be treated nicely...make sense? lol if it doesnt..sorry lol but i hope it does lol

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Future Husband?

Yay! Spike!! Good chapter!

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Date: 06/13/2005 - 10:18 pm Title: Have Faith

Good chapter! Has good potential.

Reviewer: brandi Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 09:49 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

this story is awesome please keep writng. i liked the encouter with buffy and spike. good job. love the story

Reviewer: hazel Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 09:39 pm Title: Have Faith

ohhhh god....please update tonight that would just make my day

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

damn i cant believe that spike was that mean she was trying to be nice and he was all rude. i think its funny that buffy called faith a slut, she deserved it after saying all that stuff about her after all buffy did for faith. i love this story SO much and am SO happy that u updated. i really cant wait to see how the relationship evolves and wat happens next. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read more and see wat happens next thanx

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 06:41 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

Great chapter - it's really terrible to see Spike with Faith, though, instead of Buffy, as we all know, since this is a Spuffy site, lol! Can't wait for more, so please update as soon as you get the chance. Take care, C ; )

Reviewer: Anne Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2005 - 06:40 pm Title: Future Asshole is More Like It!!!

Wow, good interchange of words betwen Buffy and Spike, more spuffy

Reviewer: alexandrea Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/11/2005 - 07:02 pm Title: Future Husband?

I LOVE LOVE this story and I can't wait for the next update

Reviewer: Raven Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/09/2005 - 10:18 am Title: Future Husband?

I really like this story so far! It has a great plot. I can't wait 'till Buffy and Spike meet eachother. I'm so excited to see what happens next! Please, please, please update as soon as possible?!?!?!? I really like this story! Thanx ~Raven~

Reviewer: ally Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 09:18 am Title: Future Husband?

awwww... you cant do that! its not fair :o( i wanna meet spike! lol it sounds good and i've read 'why me' and i thought it was fab

Reviewer: Panta_Rei Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/08/2005 - 06:15 am Title: Future Husband?

OK, you have to update FAST, cuz I wanna know what happens! Especially since Spike's 10 years older than Buffy...which really isn't all that bad except when you factor in the fact that she's only 16...so update soon please! *puppy-dog eyes*

Reviewer: FaintlyRememberBreathing Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Have Faith

Great start. I like how you're true to the real characters, Faith is all reckless and slutty, and Buffy is the responsible one. Can't wait to see where Spike fits in but I'm pretty sure I've got a good idea.

Reviewer: Mac Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 05:28 pm Title: Have Faith

Seriously? Then okay, I can accept that. But when it happened twice now you can see why I would start to think you were up to something else. I stand corrected. Thanks.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/2005 - 02:16 am Title: Future Husband?

absolutely loved the update and cant wait for buffy and spike to meet

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 11:47 pm Title: Future Husband?

aww thats so sad that she had to clean faiths roon and that she has to protect her and help her. i really hope that everything goes well and dinner. i love this story so far and cant wait to see wat happens next. i hope that spike and buffy get together. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read the next chapter thanx

Reviewer: DK Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 08:51 pm Title: Future Husband?

Rich can only cover up some problems, drop dead handsome like Spike you can over look a lot of problems

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 08:14 pm Title: Future Husband?

loved it ;) she doesn't even imagine what's going to happen next :P lol he he he, is it going to be love at first sight between both of them, or she's gonna fall for him and with the time he'll start liking her? ;) lol. Val.-

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 07:57 pm Title: Future Husband?

i love this story!! can't wait to actually meet spike...well your version that is...it was a great chapter!! you did an awesome job..keep it up!! thanx!!

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 07:51 pm Title: Have Faith

Loved the first chapter!! there was something weird though, with the verb tenses. Maybe instead of using so much present you could use past simple :) lol. It was kind of weird, maybe I'm just used to read in the past simple, but I'm just saying 'cause you're telling a story and it's different to when you write a dialogue. When you tell a story it's more common and used to write in the simple past, otherwise the style's not that good. But in the dialogue it's different, although, you don't use present tense either. Did i express myself well? :) lol, all these lines just to tell you that siple past for when you're telling something about someone, is better ;) lol. Instead of saying "Her sister does this every night...", you could say "Her sister did it every night..." :) lol. Anyway, loved the first chappy ;)

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 07:14 pm Title: Future Husband?

AWW you left it before the first glimpse you big meanie!! LOL great start can't wait for more

Reviewer: Smitten Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 07:04 pm Title: Have Faith

WOW I love this story!!! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: kerry Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Future Husband?

Ok.I'm not meaning to sound to critical.Buffy should really pull her head out of the sand and quit covering for Faith and being her lacky.Yes, you should cover for your siblings,it's the sibling thing to do ,But it gets to a certain point where it has to stop,espeacially when the said sibling is 25,and espeacially when it starts making you miserable and effecting your own life so much.You can only do so much,and as much as you want to you can't change and help someone unless they want it for themselves.I loved Joyce's little speech about growing up,because that's exactly what Faith needs to do,get out there and grow up,and stop acting like an immature teenager.Really loving this new fic,think your doing a great job.

Reviewer: Caitie Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/2005 - 05:40 pm Title: Future Husband?

Great chapter - I can't wait for Buffy to meet Spike though, so that the Spuffy sparks can start a-flyin', lol! Please post the next chapter as soon as you can! Take care, C ; )

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