

Date: 02/10/2007 - 12:47 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
You are evil, I am in tears right now.
History is very sad, like the song, but I loved both. The way that you focused the history in is great. Congratulations for that.

Date: 07/02/2006 - 03:32 am Title: Whiskey Lullaby
Oh, wow, spikester! lol, way to break my heart so quickly :P
I love there's something about major angst that just ties me in and makes me want to cuddle up to my old stuffed animals and cry my heart out, all the while reading and reading :)
The only thing I would suggest is that you put this story into past tense to help with flow a little. It works fine the way it is, just a suggestion :)
Great job with this story, now on to read some more :P

Date: 11/19/2005 - 10:33 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
WOW ^_^ it's awesome. I really dont know anythign about buffy my friend sent me this, this is really intense and it keeps u on the egde of ur seat. its wonderful. good work. keep it up.

Date: 07/16/2005 - 01:22 am Title: Whiskey Lullaby
Very good short story. I found myself getting excited with the "Willow" character, when he found the bodies and had to call Xander. Having the lyrics of the song in there is a nice touch as well.

Date: 06/20/2005 - 01:15 am Title: Whiskey Lullaby
I loved it! Like all your other storys! :)
Date: 06/17/2005 - 09:38 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
Poor William dying cause of the slut.If everyone saw the video you would know that she cheated on him and he walked in on them.
Author's Response: Yeah...i saw the video...its so sad, but i just had to write it. even though the song is very sad, it still makes ppl think..i love it..
Date: 06/17/2005 - 06:30 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
good story
Date: 06/17/2005 - 04:22 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
If you like those kind of songs, you should listen to George Jone's "he stopped loving her today" and Dwight Yoakam's "Johnsons love song" (i think that is what they are both called)
Date: 06/17/2005 - 04:01 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
it was good i liked it alot but i really want you to update behind these hazel eyes
Date: 06/17/2005 - 02:07 pm Title: Whiskey Lullaby
good very good and u know what i am lissening to the song