

Date: 11/18/2005 - 07:17 pm Title: Deal
I love your arrogant, malevolent Spike, throwing lewd remarks around like confetti. You did a good job setting the scene, I could see the action atop the theater. Buffy came off surer of herself than she has in past chapters.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 06:09 pm Title: Deal
He really is a top psychiatrist, isn't he? The best therapist Buffy ever had. This Spike's gonna get his Slayer back on top form. I just hope she comes to realise how much she likes him before she drives him away. And what's the what with this Joshua vamp?
Great story. Could have turned out all kinds of dark angsty, but I like the undercurrent of optimism you have going. Thanks for another cool update, pet.

Date: 11/18/2005 - 06:07 pm Title: Deal
Sorry I have no time. Loved the update. So Buffy knows now to cherish 'grey areas'. Hopefully Spike will become more greyish than black ;-) Loved this: "I'll kiss you when you earn it, Spike" That was one think Spike didn't see coming :)

Date: 11/15/2005 - 12:41 am Title: Stranger
Hmmm very interesting. Loved it. And I can't wait for more.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:26 pm Title: Stranger
Jeremiah was fun - but so was the chapter. And good to see the update. Sorry that your computer doesn't like you. I wonder if we will see more of Jeremiah because Buffy let him live (un-live).

Date: 11/14/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Stranger
I love this fic. Jeremiah is a fantastic character. Now all it needs is for Spike to be nicer to Buffy and for them to get together. Please update soon..................

Date: 11/14/2005 - 10:11 am Title: Stranger
Well, the lines between Buffy and her calling have really blurred now. Jeremiah is an intriguing original character. He certainly played a head trip on Buffy, I hope he sticks around. These wacky vampires keep Buffy reeling.
Author's Response: I think we'll see him around again. He is, after all, my first OC that I actually like :P

Date: 11/14/2005 - 05:13 am Title: Stranger
Interesting little interlude. Love how Buffy was comparing the two and coming to conclusions. More please.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 04:58 am Title: Stranger
Well that's an interesting addition to the mix - with or without Spike's knowledge or 'blessing' ! Your story is not taking a predictable route, and it's good to see that neither Buffy or Spike have fallen into a lovely slushy heap because they've done the deed ..... you've kept them true to character, with now Jeremiah to shake things up. Great story.
Author's Response: I don't like to be predictable and I find myself disliking fics where Buffy and Spike get together way too easily. Jeremiah's a shaker, alright. Thanks for reading.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Stranger
Okay, that was odd. New guy's pretty different.

Date: 11/14/2005 - 01:20 am Title: Stranger
I loved this chapter. I liked you bringing another vampire into the mix

Date: 11/13/2005 - 11:07 pm Title: Stranger
Great update... a little confused as to where this is heading... but I love the way you write... so I'm game. Update again as soon as you can. Thanks

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:47 pm Title: Stranger
I'm so glad to see an update of this story. I'm completely confused as to who Jeremiah is - I can't tell if he's working with Spike or what. Can't wait to find out.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 10:40 pm Title: Stranger
You have to post.. like now!!! LOL! I loved it! Great Chapter. I wonder if Spike is a greyish hue! LOL! Please update soon! :) Lighter
Author's Response: I think Spike's hue is very ambigous, heh. I'll try and update soon.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Stranger
YAY!Update!YAY!
Author's Response: I thought you'd be pleased.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Stranger
Interesting....You better get someone to perform a computer Excorcism, because this story is too good to leave alone for that long. Great job.
Author's Response: "The Power of Bill Gates Compels thee!" and all that? ; ) thanks.

Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:21 pm Title: Stranger
Oh, I love it! I rival for Spike! He deserves it, yes he does, really.
I've always loved Spuffy, from the day I realized Joss was going that route, but I still wanted Spike to have to work harder for Buffy. She deserved it; her life was shit really, it was. Who goes out and saves the world, night and day then gets nothing but heartache and lonliness for it? That's right, Buffy.
I've always felt that it was Buffy, not Spike that got the raw end of the deal and in this story? I want Spike jealous, seethingly jealous and worrying over this Southern gentleman vampire!
Thanks, I needed this vindication!
spuf
Author's Response: I agree Buffy had it much tougher than a lot of people in this fandom give her credit for.
As for Jeremiah being a rival...only time will tell :)

Date: 11/13/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Stranger
great chapter hoping that we see them together in the next chapter
Author's Response: Maybe, if we're lucky.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:37 am Title: Different
more please

Date: 10/22/2005 - 09:10 pm Title: Different
So sorry for your computer troubles. It's a great fic and I can't wait to read more when you can post again.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 04:47 pm Title: Different
Great chapter. I'm wondering if the Scooby is still going to get involved. I'm really enjoying this story. Awesome job!

Date: 10/21/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Different
I hope your computer will be good again soon. TNX for the update - being a filler or not. I can see what problem Buffy has. I wonder what she'll do.

Date: 10/21/2005 - 09:10 am Title: Different
I'm really enjoying this dark portrait of a damaged, disassociative Buffy. Spike's obvious zeal for being an evil badass is a good counterpoint to her depressed state. The dialogue is sharp and the story is moving briskly. I don't see this ending well for Spike, but his unrepentant evil is great fun to read. The post-coital banter was especially funny.
Author's Response: Thank you for saying so. I like exploring the darker side of Buffy and Spike, I like comedy too, but just thought I'd try something different. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/21/2005 - 07:31 am Title: Different
Your story is slipping... I mean, the story line is beginning to look a bit deja vú... the same stuff happens in almost every chapter. Depressed Buffy, Buffy mad at Spike, Buffy shagging with Spike, Buffy depressed again.. sorry, this isn't a flame, but try to make something else to happen to her, or make Spike do something that we don't already know he's gonna do..
Author's Response: I'll take that into consideration. Although, they've only ever "shagged" once, so I don't see how that can be happening every chapter.