I find myself in agreement with Priscilla regarding having this looked over. It's those darn commas. I, myself, have a continual battle with the little bastards. *nods emphatically* I love the premise for this and I can't wait to see what happens when Spike and Buffy meet up. I did have a quick question tho - did Buffy's slayer healing kick in with her previous incapitation that morning? Or did i read the time line wrong? (would not be surprised there!) I'm a registered nurse but have to admit to not having spent much time dealing with burn patients (ER was my thing) so I don't exactly know what it entails. I just wasn't sure if she was having to have her mom dress her that morning than going out that night and kicking demon ass. If you need help finding a beta, let me know. Your writing is very good without it, but a good beta could just give it that flawless edge. And I'm so not trying to be mean here! I hope you don't mind me saying these things, i'm just trying to offer suggestions.

Author's Response: How mean of you! Nah, I don't mind. I could use any suggestions for a good beta that you have.

I like the storyline you've got there and I think your ideas are great. But,I would consider getting a beta reader, if I were you. There are some minor mistakes in your story that need to be fixed. Keep up the good work and please take my comment as constructive criticism. I really like what you've got there so far ,and I believe that correcting the few flaws I was able to see, your story will be awesome! :) ~Priscilla

i love it. i cant wait until buffy and spike meet, its gonna be soo good. please update soon.

I like the story so far. Can't wait to see where you go with it. Poor Buffy! Update soon.

so far, i really really like this story. i will definitly be keeping up with it. please update soon.

Poor Buffy. What role will Spike play in all this? I can't wait for your next update.

Nice start!