[Report This]Date: 09/27/2012 - 11:39 pm Title: Epilogue
This story was very sweet, and the smut was pretty hot. LOVED how you portrayed all the characters, with no one being particularly assy (except for maybe Hank, and he wasn't bad). Especially loved Willow not being all über-innocent. Love her being sassy and worldly (sex with Xander, kissing Spike, teasing Spike about his erection, etc.)!
Does need some editing to correct grammar, etc., as well as some more general errors, for example:
* the Thanksgiving weekend timeline seemed off, unless I misread something. Buffy & Willow did the after-Thanksgiving sales (Friday), and then they went to the strip club that night, or was the strip club supposed to be Saturday? Because they went back to school the next day, and I'm sure that was Sunday. I missed a day in there somehow.
* I'm guessing you are not from the US, as you had the 19-year-olds drinking alcohol in bars in California. In the US, you have to be 21 to drink. Also, you had Spike smoking in the Bronze, and I'm pretty sure California has banned smoking in all bars & restaurants since 1998.
* here in the epilogue, you mention that 6 years have gone by since the prior chapter, but I'm thinking it might have needed to be more. I don't think you specified what year in college they are, but at 19 in the Fall, they were most likely sophomores, meaning as of Christmas they still had 2 years plus 2 quarters left of undergrad (if they finished on time). Law schools is at least 3 years, and med school is at least 4, so... I know, I'm being nit-picky about a fantasy story, but it just threw me a bit! =)
[Report This]Date: 02/12/2012 - 11:30 pm Title: Epilogue
Yayay spuffy goodness!!!!
[Report This]Date: 01/20/2011 - 11:13 am Title: Epilogue
This story was completely fantastic, I've stuck with it for the whole series! A really great read. The sex was hot and not too crass (hehehe) and the plot was funny and engaging. There was just the right amount if angst. I applaud you.
[Report This]Date: 07/14/2010 - 02:42 am Title: Epilogue
What a wonderful story. I really loved it. So inspiring.
[Report This]Date: 05/30/2010 - 10:42 am Title: CH 39
awwww i am SOBBING!!!!! aww i HATE them for beig SO STUPID!!!!!!! bahhh!!!! Love it.....
[Report This]Date: 05/26/2010 - 04:12 pm Title: CH 14 Part 1
ahhhhhhh!!!! They are SOOOO perfect for each other!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2010 - 10:55 am Title: CH 1
this story is amazing!
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2008 - 11:23 pm Title: CH 1
Just wanted to let you know I've read this story about 20 times! i love it! great job!
[Report This]Date: 05/11/2007 - 04:40 am Title: Epilogue
I really really loooooved this story!
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2007 - 07:35 pm Title: Epilogue
Hi there! I loved this fic from the first word to the last!
Its one of the best i read so far . Hope to read more great fics from you !!!
[Report This]Date: 01/11/2007 - 06:40 am Title: Epilogue
Ahh *sigh* that was beautiful.
[Report This]Date: 11/09/2006 - 08:55 am Title: Epilogue
I loved it. I had started reading it a while back - then I guess something happened and I lost it or something. So glad I found it again. Brilliant, fluffy, spuffy story. lol. Loves it.
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2006 - 05:34 pm Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed the story, but I think that contasting the fluffy moments with a bit more angst would have given it better balance and made it stronger. Her confession of love to her while he was drunk did not seem like something worthy of her dramatic response. Also on a side note - to complete her education to be a pediatrician, Buffy would have finished 4 years of college and then 4 years of medical school and would officially be a "doctor" - but she would still need to go on to complete her residency (pediatrics is 3 more years) after this graduation. (sorry if that is too nit picky)
[Report This]Date: 07/01/2006 - 08:33 pm Title: Epilogue
AHHH!!! i love it omg i cant believe how good this is ahh! thanks for the great read...it was worth taking a week lol
[Report This]Date: 03/18/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Epilogue
Sweet fic. :) How can anyone not like a happy ending.
[Report This]Date: 03/13/2006 - 11:33 pm Title: Epilogue
Ok- I have to tell you, I have a final due tomorrow, in about 12 hours actually, and I have not started it yet because I found this fic and wanted to read it all through. I thought I could start it and find a stopping point, but there was not a place I WANTED to stop, so I read the whole thing. Just wanted to let you know that you are so good of a writer that I could not stop reading once I started- literally. Thanks for putting out such great work consistently!
[Report This]Date: 02/27/2006 - 02:45 pm Title: Epilogue
This was such a great story. I really enjoyed it. I liked when Spike surprised Buffy on Christmas, it was really sweet.
Awesome job on the whole thing. :)
[Report This]Date: 02/25/2006 - 10:39 am Title: Epilogue
So I know this story has been over for like ever, but I just had to comment. I absolutely loved it!! You do a great job writing fics, can wait to read more things from you.
[Report This]Date: 12/26/2005 - 05:57 pm Title: CH 27
I really disliked the fact that they had sex on the very same night as Buffy's attempted rape. I don't think that a girl in reality would want to after a night like that. Most girls don't get over it so easy. I think that it was nice that they had sex but why on the same night. You could always wait for a while. It just feel wrong, and also wrong that no one reacted on that matter, I mean Giles should have said something. Othervise, love the story.
[Report This]Date: 12/14/2005 - 01:06 pm Title: CH. 6
funny and all the more nice
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 11:09 pm Title: Ch.3
The do bring out the child in each other. :)
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: CH. 2
Love how its been maybe five minutes and they've begun the verbal sparring. So typical of these two. Can't wait to see what the housing office has to say.
[Report This]Date: 11/19/2005 - 10:56 pm Title: CH 1
Can't imagine a real life college letting that situation go unchecked, but for story purposes, I sure hope they do. A wonderful introduction.
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2005 - 07:45 pm Title: CH 46
Fantastic chapter
[Report This]Date: 10/29/2005 - 07:36 pm Title: CH 45
Fantastic chapter. God Lindsey is such a perve lol