[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter 7
Can I please slap Joyce now? She can be a pain in the ass can't she. Reminds me of my mother. I'm glad I'm not like that, then again, I don't have girls.
Author's Response: I'm not like that, and I have a girl. :) This Joyce is just so scared for her baby and feeling so guily for what happened, she over protective. Good and bad trait to have. Thank you for caring.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
i am glad that they let him go
Author's Response: Thank you for your concern. :D
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 7
well, glad spike wasn't charged. loved it. can't wait for more. please post soon. great job
Author's Response: Thank you. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 7
Another great update! I'm glad they're letting Spike go. Can't wait for more :-)
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 01:08 pm Title: Chapter 6
i'm in complete shock. that was definetly surprising that buffy was going to have a baby and they terminated it without her even knowing it. your doing a great job at showing everyone's emoitions so well and i love how this is going so far i can't wait to see whats in store next.
Author's Response: Hi Jenn. Thanks for the review, and for hanging in there through the tough stuff. I tried to make her experience as real as possible, even as horrible as it was.
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 10:22 am Title: Chapter 6
Great Plot, Great character development, Great Story......can't wait for more.........
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 07/30/2005 - 08:10 am Title: Chapter 6
Okay so I'm confused...He didn't sleep with her. It was only a dream...right? I hope so because I thought it was too soon. This chapter shocked the s**it out of me. A baby...dear God. This story is getting better and better. Please update soon...pretty please
Author's Response: He did sleep with her. Things are just snowballing in their life right now. More will be explained next chapter.
Thank you for all your feedback and support of this story. I appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 - 11:55 pm Title: Chapter 6
Another 'wow' chapter. Man, I know they had to take him into custody, but damn, it makes me mad. Love that Buffy is showing the fortitude to fight for 'her' guy even though she's still reeling from being in the grips of something so traumatic. Anticipating the next update SO much!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of the feedback. I really appreciate your support of this fic, and am also happy that you're enjoying it.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 6
Great update. Poor Spike though - hopefully he can get off the hook since he didn't do anything. Anyway, great story can't wait to read more :-)
Author's Response: Thanks Jess. I appreciate the feedback and your support.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 6
i hope they dont put him in jail
Author's Response: Thank you for your feedback. I"m very grateful and happy that you're following this story.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 - 09:41 pm Title: Chapter 6
that was a little more than surprising!!! loved it though. hopefully spike isn't in too much trouble. after all, he didn't do anything. loved it. Really REALLY loved it. you are amazing. can't wait for more. please PLEASE post soon. great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for all the feedback with all your kind words. Very glad that you're enjoying this fic.
[Report This]Date: 07/29/2005 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter 5
Poor Buffy. Poor Spike. this is a real tear-jerker, but I also think it's an excellent story. more please.
Author's Response: Thank you for all the support on this story and your kind words. I really am grateful that you're here and reading.
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow. Powerful chapter. Again, lot so intense, mixed up emotions at play and your words convey them perfectly.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter 3
This is a heartbreakinly excellent tale so far. I'm very interested to see this develop. I'm thinking Spike needs almost as much closure and Buffy does. more please.
Author's Response: thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 09:23 pm Title: Chapter 5
good update but i thought that she would've wanted to stay with him the whole night
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter 5
oh wow..... i really don't have the words. loved the chapter though. i admire you will and ability to write a fic such as this. i've never read something like this before and i'm really enjoying it. keep up the great work. post soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
Wow, this is an amazing story so far! Very interesting, engaging, and suspenseful. Awesome job, can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2005 - 08:53 pm Title: Chapter 5
What the hell was Buffy thinking? She wasn't ready to go that far with Spike and I don't think Spike should have went there. No wonder it turned out the way it did. Now things are going to be awkward between them as if they aren't already. I hope they get through it. Looking forward to the next chapter and thanks for the quick update
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 09:54 pm Title: Chapter 4
oh yay that was a great chapter. i really cant wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
great update
Author's Response: Thank you!!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 09:29 pm Title: Chapter 4
Amazing chapter. The tension is almost palpable in the air as you read. Then, in the work out room...that stare and what Spike thinks after....you can feel the sizzle. Absolutely amazing writing.
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 4
well, at least he know's he's gonna have sex with her. lol. great job. can't wait for more. please post soon. i'm really curious as to how you're gonna make this relationship progress. loved it. post soon.
Author's Response: Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 07:44 pm Title: Chapter 4
He knew they were going to have sex. Oh boy, this is going to be interesting if you consider the fact she doesn't like to be touched but I'm quite sure she'll make an exception in Spike's case. Things are heating up and now I wonder if Buffy isn't making up this story about another girl just to be close to Spike Enjoyed the chapter and thanks for the quick update
Author's Response: Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 07/27/2005 - 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 4
great so far! can't wait to see where you'll take this and when they'll hook up! post soon pls!
Author's Response: Thank you, tiff. I'm very glad that you're enjoying this fic.
[Report This]Date: 07/26/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter 3
loved it. this is really sad but i can't stop reading it. it's so dark and i cannot believe a person would do this to a child but i do like the story. great job. really!!!! loved it. post soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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