

Date: 08/25/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Four
good update cant wait for more

Date: 08/25/2005 - 09:24 pm Title: Four
The interaction between Buffy and Spike in this chapter is absolutely wonderful. I can't wait to see what happens when Buffy actually finds out about Spike's feelings. Thanks for all the wonderful updates!!

Date: 08/25/2005 - 09:07 pm Title: Four
I'm very glad that you didn't make Spike a womanizer. I like Spike better when he is written to respect women - but still a "bad boy". Looking forward to more.

Date: 08/25/2005 - 08:05 pm Title: Four
This is getting interesting. I find it hard to believe that Drusilla went crazy because of that. Doesn't seem like a good enough reason. I had a feeling though at the beginning that Spike left because he developed feelings for Buffy. I don't really think it's wrong or dirty for Spike to think that. I mean, it's not like they're really related by blood. I do get why it would be weird though because they have known each other for a long time, but I hope Buffy wouldn't get freaked when she finds out. I also think it's cool that you made Doyle Buffy's best friend, I don't see that a lot. The gay thing was a nice touch. Anyway, can't wait to see what happens next=)
Author's Response: Well, it wasn't what drove her crazy. She already was crazy. But Spike feels responsible. You'll see.

Date: 08/25/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: Four
This quote, "It was as if someone pressed ‘pause' on a movie. Then, as quickly as it came, someone pushed ‘play'," describes to a tee this fleeting sensation. It's like trying to remember. It's like a flickering memory that comes to light only to be extinguished before it can show the way. I like your description so much, I had to pause in reading the story so I could review the quote and give my own analogy of that fleeting moment.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it :)

Date: 08/25/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Four
I like this story so far. Is it intentional that Buffy acts younger than her age? I don't why but in the first chapter I thought that Buffy's age was 15 or 16. Anyway, keep writing... :)
Author's Response: Hi! Buffy is twenty at the start of the fic. In the beginning she was saying how she hadn't seen Spike since she was sixteen. Four years have passed since then. I'm trying to make her a happier, more easy going and carefree Buffy

Date: 08/25/2005 - 07:19 pm Title: Four
I am sooo loving this story. How are they going to cope with all this "stuff" between them? I can't wait to find out! Great job. Keep up the good writing.

Date: 08/25/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Three
absolutely loved it

Date: 08/25/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Three
Yipee - a new fic, lol! I've enjoyed it tons and it's only just beginning. I liked you having Doyle in this fic - I always liked him on Angel. Can't wait for more as soon as you're able to update. Take care, C ; )

Date: 08/25/2005 - 01:51 pm Title: Three
I love how Doyle knew so quickly what is off with Spike. It will make for an even more interesting story. Also, I just absolutely love the idea of Buffy and Doyle being best friends. I can't wait for your next update!!!

Date: 08/25/2005 - 01:03 pm Title: Three
This is so cute. I love how Doyle 'saw' right through Spike. Didn't he? spuf

Date: 08/25/2005 - 12:43 pm Title: Three
great to see them slowly sorting out their problems.... waiitng for more1!!

Date: 08/25/2005 - 12:30 pm Title: One
I love "little sister" by Dwight Yoakam but I would never admit that to anybody face to face except my bf, but that's only 'cuz i jam out to it sometimes..........

Date: 08/25/2005 - 01:24 am Title: One
OOH r u getting into the steps gang!

Date: 08/25/2005 - 12:00 am Title: Two
gonna be another interesting step sibling story!! loe it and waiting for more!

Date: 08/24/2005 - 11:22 pm Title: Two
Your the best 2 chapter in one night....You rock...best story ever I love it!!!!!...please update soon!!!

Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:28 pm Title: Two
definitely loving it so far

Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:11 pm Title: Two
yeah, go Buffy go......stand your ground......don't let him think he can just come back so easily......really can't wait now for the next chapter.......

Date: 08/24/2005 - 10:02 pm Title: One
Oh such a forgiving soul our Buffy.....sounds like she thought of him for like family then he did......will be interesting to see the road you and chosen for them to travel......I would of been sitting in the kitchen with a bored expression on my face when he walked in the door. Then say something like I have to meet my friends.....can't wait to see where you are going with it. more please

Date: 08/24/2005 - 08:27 pm Title: One
Love it!!!!!!....cant wait for the next update....love this story I'm so excited i think this may be one of your best ones.....

Date: 08/24/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: One
Hmm, a new story from you? I will have to check it out, of course. This is a cute start, the whole sibling thing. I just hope they don't think of each other as siblings that much, because I'm sure that would make things a little weird later on. Interested to see what you do with this=)