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Date: 02/11/2013 - 07:47 pm Title: Chapter 11

Absolutely lovely. So touching, I cried regularly at the early chapters' demonstration of Buffy's & Dawn's grief. Sweet ending, but an epilogue or just another chapter would be nice, so we can see how Buffy & Spike's relationship goes. Thought the story was marked NC-17, but there wasn't any smuttiness, that I could see, unless it was Willow's tittilation during her magicking. Some grammar errors, but mostly nit-picky. Other than that, extremely well-written.

Reviewer: All4Spike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/11/2006 - 05:50 pm Title: Chapter 11

Oh so sad.. and then so happy. She should have known though... magic always has consequences!

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Date: 09/27/2006 - 05:11 am Title: Chapter Nine

Oh dear, "turning back time". I've got a bad feeling about this. I forsee many more regrets for all of our favourites.
Still, loving the whole story, as always, you've done an excellent job evoking the feelings and characters.

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/22/2006 - 08:28 pm Title: Chapter 11

OMG. I just read your story today and I have to apoligise for not reading it before. It what wonderful. I could not stop reading. Wonderful story, great original plot. I love it.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter 11

Well, wasn't expecting quite that ending. But I really like it. Glad to see all those ends tied up. Glad they have each other. Really did love it. Thanks for sharing.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 10

Wonder what then Buffy thinks of all of this. And Willow, that's not good, either. Another wonderful chapter.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 11:04 pm Title: Chapter 10

"From the way Buffy was behaving, Willow wondered if Spike might’ve been the one thing that was stopping Buffy from going nuts."--Bingo! Finally figured the big one out. Gotta wonder about this spell though.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter Eight

Love Spike talking about when he first saw her. And Willow Magicking her parents. Wonder if they can turn back time and change things.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter 7

Ouch. That sucks so much. And the idea of balance, Joyce dying for Dawn to live. How very tragic. Great chapter.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 6

Oh, good God. When it rains it pours. What to do now. And Anya making Xander have a talk with Willow. Wonderful.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 5

"She is sexually repressed despite being a lesbian. I can just see her, taking notes in different coloured pens!”--Love that. Love Anya and all her awareness. Hope Xander Listens. And way for Tara to have a backbone. Really, such a strong girl... Great chapter.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 4

Such a sweet, tender necessary moment to be ruined by someone who has no business... Or it could be Tara, I guess. And Buffy changing her room into his crypt. Perhaps a tad creepy, but I really like that idea. Wonderful chapter.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 3

Love Tara in this. Girl always saw and understood people. And Willow, she's still on the evil magic train it would seem. Hope she comes round, too. Wonderful chapter. Really captures all the emotions.

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Date: 09/18/2006 - 10:09 pm Title: chapter two

I love that Buffy is taking the chance to know the man through his belongings. So sad that he's gone. Poor little sis. Poor lonely Buffy.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter One

Poor girl. I suppose sometimes you need the absense to make your heart grow... Hope the rest understand.

Reviewer: Hwesta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 11

Very nice story! I liked the ending so much :)

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 11

Very nice ending. :D

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/16/2006 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter 11

Seemed like a bit of an abrupt ending...you could have made it last longer I think. Anyway, I am sure that I remeber this story - you must have posted it elsewhere. Still a good read.

Reviewer: rosie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 10

cant wait to see what happens next!!!

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter 10

Per usual, something goes wrong. Oh, der.

Reviewer: evildeadgirl Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 10

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: Badia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 11:17 am Title: Chapter 10

Okay Buffy is now Insane going to Willow for spell help. That is beyond desperate its outright crazy! I'm so loving this fic cannot wait for more updates, cause I know somethings gonna go wrong.

Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter 10

Lovewd Buffy shaking Willow and scaring her. I'd love to shake her til her teeth rattled also. Looking forward to next update.

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 06:13 pm Title: Chapter 10

Really terrible, sad beginning, but I trust that you'll make it all turn out right in the end, and it does seem to he heading in the right direction, finally. So, like Willow that when Buffy really wants to magic, suddenly she's all 'I can't do that' girl. Great story.

Reviewer: Marianne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 08:42 am Title: Chapter Nine

Just come across this - so much angst!! So what is Buffy going to ask Willow to do?

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