

Date: 09/13/2005 - 04:34 pm Title: Chapter Four
This story is very good and original, enjoying it a lot, please keep updating!

Date: 09/13/2005 - 04:33 pm Title: Chapter Four
This story is very good and original, enjoying it a lot, please keep updating!

Date: 09/13/2005 - 03:04 pm Title: Chapter Four
This is a good chapter. Please update soon. I am loving the story so far.
BTW: I thought Hank's 2nd wife's name was Karen. Its her name in Chapter 1 but Donna here.
Author's Response: The first chapter is set in the future, so Karen is Hank's third wife and Donna is his second. Sorry if that was confusing

Date: 09/13/2005 - 02:30 pm Title: Chapter Four
somehow I just feel like somethings about to come! I keep waiting for this big showdown where there is the fighting the crying the kissing the hugging and the spuffy magic and then the talk after!LOL! great chapter please update soon! :) Dell

Date: 09/13/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Four
Yay. Good chapter.

Date: 09/13/2005 - 12:47 pm Title: Chapter Three
OMG! You're sooo mean, you have to make these chapters longer...I sooo need more than that....I had questions! remember? (pouts - prettily) and begs for more....please.....

Date: 09/13/2005 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter Three
I love where this is going! I can't wait to read more!

Date: 09/13/2005 - 10:41 am Title: Chapter Three
I reaaaallly looooove this story. Did you, by any chance, post the story somewhere else? And if so, where??? Please update soooon!!!

Date: 09/13/2005 - 10:19 am Title: Chapter Three
Kewlio. I liked this one. I was just wondering...the little gril from the first chapter...it's Spike and Buffy's kid right? I figured when I read that, but wasn't sure. Awesome job though.

Date: 09/13/2005 - 09:56 am Title: Chapter Three
I love it!!! I want to see their interaction together!!! I think that its a great fic! Please update soon! :)

Date: 09/13/2005 - 07:39 am Title: Chapter Two
And straight in the deep end...splash! ...this is a great start, my only complaint is there were only two chapters, and I really wanted more...now the questions that's buzzing in my little brain is...did they have sex more than once?...and was that unprotected sex? which resulted in little Sarah....or....did Buffy sleep with someone else (shudder) and that result in the baby? Did Spike ever catch up with her? Did he ever find out she was only sixteen? And what the hell is going to happen next????? Okay, I need some answers...so please hurry up with the up-date....LOL

Date: 09/13/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter Two
Wow..really good start. I can't wait for more!

Date: 09/13/2005 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Two
I would have stay, just to look at his beautiful body. Please update.

Date: 09/12/2005 - 08:18 pm Title: Chapter Two
great chapter. can't wait for more of the story to unfold. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing.

Date: 09/12/2005 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Two
Oooh awesome start! I can hardly wait to read more. Please update soon!!
Author's Response: Thanks!

Date: 09/12/2005 - 06:31 pm Title: Chapter Two
More please!
Author's Response: More soon, I promise.

Date: 09/12/2005 - 04:24 pm Title: Chapter Two
Great begining! I cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter! I wonder how their interaction is going to be! Like, is Buffy going to be mad or upset and is Spike going to feel sorry or mad! Please update soon! :) Dell

Date: 09/12/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Two
good update

Date: 09/12/2005 - 03:57 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One
good so far

Date: 09/12/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One
Wonderful...just wondeful :) More please!!

Date: 09/12/2005 - 03:25 pm Title: Prologue/Chapter One
Yay, you posted here! I am so excited!!! I love this story and just know you will get wonderful feedback here.
Author's Response: Thanks, I've been an avid reader of this site's authors and I'm happy to be a part of it now!