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Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 10:29 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

WOW!.... WOW! LOL! I loved it! YAY! Okay.. I thought that it was hilarious that Dawn and Connor found that book. I wonder how they are going to explain it to them! I especially loved the Kamasutra scenes! I wonder what is going to happen when he wakes up. I hope that their grandmother doesnt wake them up! LOL! And most importantly, the factor of them forgetting this still remains! I hope they dont! I hope they... progress. LOL! I loved the Chapter! And I really hope that you get to update over the holidays but If you cant, I understand. (I havent posted in over a month! LOL! ) I need to do that! Well, Please post soon! :) Lighter

p.s. Happy Holidays and Happy New Year!

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

Wow. My God that was hot. WIth two tt's. LOL. I uh. . need a cold shower.

DYING to know how they're going to be after this. . . What will he say, what will she say? What will they do? They definitely testedt the bounds there...ok, more than tested, they went OVER the bounds. Wow. Hot. With two t's.

I can't WAIT for you to get back! LOL

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 09:08 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

wow.......

that was...wow....

i really hope you can update soon

i may have to reread that chapter i loved it soo much...

holy...okayy
haha
it was really funny when dawn and connor found that book haha.
im so loving that this is heating up!

happy holidays to you!

now i gotta go reread that! haah
loved it!

Reviewer: Niamh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 08:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Three

There goes that line. . . crossed and forgotten. . .

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Date: 12/18/2005 - 07:55 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Great chapter! Can't say I love their mother too much....Please update soon!

Reviewer: Chosen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Omg,Losing my breath here :P..

Reviewer: Califlady19 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Poor Spike and Buffy.How can Joyce do her children that way.Time and Time again she disapoints them,and as it has been stated where are they going to go.What else could happen.Joyce is a no show again.This is getting darker!"

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

that was so bittersweet!
any little touch, any hint of a kiss they share, and i crave more...
i now u shouldn't rush this story (i do think your timing's perfect!)... clearly the only solution is more updates! lol
just kidding... take your own time too... you're doing a great job!

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 08:19 pm Title: Chapter One

WL---

isnt will 16??

not 18....

Author's Response: Yes, he's still 16. He will be turning 17 soon sometime in Feb (around Ch 27). Did I say he was 18 somewhere? I didn't think I did. I'm going back to check that out now. I don't want to be inconsistent b/c y'all be confused come his birthday later.

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 07:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

YAY! I am so glad that you posted! OMG! William is 18 years old!!! I think that he knows that what he did was wrong! But I liked it! LOL! I hope we get more of that! :) I think that there mother is just going out and having fun and forgetting about her kids. I hope Dawn and Connor have a good christmas! Please let us have some good spuffy time! We need it! LOL! Loved the chapter! This is such an awesome fic but, I would like to know more about the whole family situation and whats going on. Please post soon! :) Lighter

Author's Response: William is still 16. Did I say he was 18 somewhere b/c I want to fix it if I did so please let me know. He'll be having a birthday soon and I don't want everyone to be confused. Thanks!

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 07:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

that was soo sweet!

i hope the spuffy love will grow from here?

i know slowly but hopefully it wont decrease..

update as soon as you can!
i will be watching and waiting for more!!!
loved it!

Reviewer: dusty273 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 03:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Oh, poor William and Elizabeth trying to conceal their mother's absence from the twins. Oh, and they kissed! Yay! This story is beautifully written, I can't wait for more. :)

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Yay! Great chapter. Looking forward to things heating up between William and Elizabeth.

Reviewer: TM Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 03:17 pm Title: Chapter One

Brilliant, as usual.

Reviewer: Niamh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 02:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

You know, I hated the mother in the original story, and hey, nice to know nothing's really changed. . . .

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 01:53 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Well, well, well. . . holiday tradition doesn't dictate that you kiss your sister in such a manner under the miseltoe Will LOL. I held my breath at that part, so excited to read what he was going to do and how Elizabeth was going to react. Love it!!

Reviewer: sonia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

I like the story. Honestly, since you started this fic, I remembered the Dollanganger saga, which I had read while I was in my second year of High School, so I read it again in just a few weeks. I love the way you're writing it because even if it's based on flowers in the attic, there're so many different things that it looks another story. So good job. I can't wait till your next update.

Author's Response: I haven't read the book in over 15 years, but I'm dying to read it again since I started writing this too. I'm resisting though so I don't end up copying the storyline too closely. I'm glad you think it looks like another story because I definitely wanted to give it my own spin. Thanks for letting me know it's working!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 12:07 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

So Joyce has Wesley in her net - at last so it seems. But she didn't keep her word. Well... I didn't really think she would. We'll see what will happen now.

Reviewer: Spikes gal pal Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

what a great but sad story,I don't know weather the Mother is a strong or weak woman for keeping her children locked up in the attic while she tries to get back in the good books of Ethan,I'm sure if Wesley does love her like she says he would understand she has kids,poor kids locked up in the attic with only a visit from Adam and the creepy Dru!!
I do hope William finds a way to get them all away from the house.
but I do like this story!! thanks for the update.

Reviewer: gaillee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 12:02 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

Another fine update. You are building suspense quite well (in all areas). Thanks.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 11:48 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

So Joyce had fun without her kids. - a lot. And she started to hurt Buffy too. I don't know how hard she wants her children back - and two weeks top and they will be out? We'll see, right? :)

Reviewer: meli Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 09:50 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Two

The poor kids, not having their mom with them on the holiday. The interaction between William and Beth was sweet at the end. I am looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: Askita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 11:13 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

*grins* I loved it! Loved It!! Can't wait until the next chappy. Things are getting better and better, or worse and worse for them. Great work with the plot! Keep going!!

Reviewer: Mariana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 07:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

great chapter!! i'm starting to dislike joyce more and more each time :S can't wait for more!! thanx!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Great chapter! Looking forward to more!

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