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Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 01:37 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Hey! Oh, I Liked the chapter! I think that there is more than what their mother leads on. I am still wondering how William and Buffy's relationship is going to change in the NEAR future, I hope! LOL! I really cant wait to see what happens in the next chapter so please post soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: sugergirl9 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 09:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

My god,It seems that Joyce is living more and more high on the hog,while her children are tucked away in the attic.Unheard off, and unseen.Its like Spike, Buffy, Dawn and conan never did exist!"And whats up with her not wanting Weisley to know she has children?This is getting darker and darker.I don't think there is going to be any light at the end of this story.There is to many secrets!"

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 08:20 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

So glad to see an update. Now..Mother is either a really good actress or she has somewhat of a heart. Remembering Flowers in the Attic...actress, right? I love Elizabeth the spitfire and the whole part with her thinking of sex and Will calling her on it was great lol.

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Oooooh, the big question. What will happen when they don't get out in two weeks. Looking forward to that time. And I loved the drop about the mistletoe they hung in the attic. I'm hoping it's foreshadowing myself. hehe. Good luck with the awards.

Reviewer: gaillee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 12:02 am Title: Chapter Twenty-One

Really fine story going here...I can feel the tension building.

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter One

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 11:05 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-One

aww cute lil spuffy moment there at the end,
loved it!
hope you update soon!

when will it get more intense....i cant wait,!

Author's Response: You've been so patient and I've been teasing for a while I know. The intensity will build soon I swear. I have to get some of this mom plot out of the way first though. (Damn plot always getting in the way of the good stuff).

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/13/2005 - 04:23 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Great chapter! Please update soon!

Reviewer: sugergirl9 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Nineteen

This is so sad.Yep its me Irishwoman39.I was forced to change my name and my password,because I was once again shut out.God I pray thia new name and passwoed sticks. But at last I got back in and am injoying this fic. Marla

Reviewer: sugergirl9 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/12/2005 - 02:01 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Yep its me Irishwoman39 I had to chage my Penn name and password, because I was shut out again.I hope the new Name and pass word sticks this time.Now getting back to the story at last,more seems to be revield. and its getting more intense.Marla

Reviewer: Askita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2005 - 10:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Ahhh... okay, I can't gaurentee that I'll patiently wait for the next chappy, but I'll wait. Loving it so far. Really doing a great job with the story.!

Reviewer: klylu Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 07:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

ok... you hinted so many things, and then let us wondering? that's cruel, you konw! not sudden as a cliffhanger... but now the seed of doubt is firmly planted in our minds! (ok... that's a typical italian expression... i hope it'll make sense!!)
And i just love the way you are developing the intimacy between them! there will be William pov as well? keep going 'cos u're doing great!

Author's Response: The story will be completely Elizabeth's POV. I think I'd get confused if I started writing William's POV too. Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: flibble Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 02:19 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Ohhhhh. Nice one. Enjoying the slow development of this story.

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 01:51 pm Title: Chapter One

More soon!

Reviewer: Kay Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 07:51 am Title: Chapter Twenty

They are getting closer every chapter it seems.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 05:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty

They shouldn't hear what Drusilla says to them - the way they are treated there I wouldn't believe what they tell me. And the attraction started, huh?

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 04:50 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Poor ones - no father and no mother to celebrate the holiday with and a grandmother that don't loves them. They can be glad they are still together and not separated.. (I don't have faith in Joyce).

Reviewer: Mariana Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 02:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Damn! it's started, hasn't it? there's no turning back... i love your writing, though it's a really touchy subject... but shoot me i love it ;) thanx for the early update!!

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 12:21 am Title: Chapter Twenty

I loved it!!! I really cant wait to see what they find out about their parents! I love it when you post! It makes me want to go post Rainbow in the Dark! I also love it how William is the big brother everyone wishes they have/had. Nice Spuffy Scene! I really hope we get more of this! Please post soon! I loved it! I am so happy that you decided to post this! You are such an awesome author and I cant wait to see what you will continue to give us in the future! :) Lighter

Reviewer: DaniD Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Great chapter...Looks like they are getting comfortable with their touches.
Great chapter!

Reviewer: marstersgirl13 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 10:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

aww that was sooo sweeeeet! i loved it!
your amazingg!!!=]
update soon please!

Reviewer: mellissa Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 10:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

I just love how close they are becoming with each other. Looking forward to the next update.

Reviewer: Brat Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

You really know how to give us UST. I mean, god, I'm drying here!! LOL. Just a simple action and I'm holding my breath in anticipation. My question is . . . Does Willaim know what he's doing? Does he feel things for her in that way or is he just being overly affectionate b/c of their circumstances? I guess I'm wondering if he's aware of his not so innocent touching.

Author's Response: I don't think he realizes it - he thinks he's providing brotherly comfort, but subconsciously he wants her.

Reviewer: Niamh Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

And into the trap they go. . . . like innocent little lambs. . . .

Reviewer: Lana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Sixteen

Loving this story!

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