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Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: Twenty One

hi there....i just got through reading this story all the way through for the first time and i am absolutely loving it so much and i cant wait for more so keep up the great work

Reviewer: katakata Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 09:26 pm Title: Twenty One

Oh yeah...breathe it in folks. That's the smell of a fresh breath of air! It's what you've provided by doing the opposite of what normally happens in Spuffy fics Brat. By allowing our lead characters to make an informed and considered decision to initiate (or is it reinitiate?) intimate relations there are no misunderstandings for them to deal with later producing the 'car crash' morning after scenes ubiquitous to many of the Spuffy fics I've read. I mean, the very process of moving from a friendship based on shared experiences (okay...and a child) to an intimate interpersonal relationship is fraught with enough real-life trials to provide the savvy writer with plenty of material anyhow, so well done. Me likey...me likey a lot!

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 07:54 pm Title: Twenty One

Excellent chapter. Loved Spike's explanation of a family. Just perfect...but kind of waiting for the other shoe to drop. ;)

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Date: 12/02/2005 - 07:48 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

WOOHOO!!!!! YEAH!!!! Happy they finally made love!

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 06:05 pm Title: Twenty One

So close! Of course I can't see her rushing into things with Spike, but it's almost there. Loved the last scene with Lindsay. it was written perfectly. Not sure if Angel deserves his happiness with "Winnie" but I love seeing this family come together. :-)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 04:45 pm Title: Twenty One

Awe - Lindsey is cute :) If I were her I would love Spike more too - he (Spike) let her be a child, not telling her to be quiet or send her to her room. Loved it :)

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Oh- you did two updates? Now I have to hurry. Loved this one - Buffy wants Spike and Buffy gets what she wants :) *on to the next chapter*

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 03:41 pm Title: Twenty One

This is so good. Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 03:32 pm Title: Twenty One

very sweet chapter.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 11:18 am Title: Chapter Twenty

That was sexy. I love Spike being all demanding and desperate.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 08:24 am Title: Chapter Twenty

WOW that was some end to their date. Very Hot.

Reviewer: porophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 08:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Well, honey, that was some fine smut, right there. Woah. The whole mine/yours thing is a favorite of mine, particularly when Spike is so desperate for it, and Buffy so eager to give it to him. I loved it when he asked her if she meant it, afterwards. Perfect.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 01:16 am Title: Chapter Twenty

Wow - what a great ending to a first date! I sure hope Buffy doesn't decide it was all a mistake later. Spike's waited so long to be with Buffy. Great tale - more please.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Twenty

great ! passionate - primal - beautiful!

Reviewer: Smitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/02/2005 - 12:35 am Title: Chapter Twenty

that was perfect!!

Reviewer: megs Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Hooooooooooooooooooooot

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 11:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Well its about time!!"'I was beginning to think they would never get there.But at last they did,and it was HOT!"

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 10:46 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Absolutely brilliant chapter. It started off so sweet and cute. Loved how comfortable and playful they were with each other but when the passion was turned on boy was it hot! No crying this time either. Definite bonus!

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 10:00 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Lovely chapter - very hot. I love how possessive Spike is with her.

Reviewer: Brandy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Wonderful chapter, I am so glad to see them finally together. I wonder how Buffy is going to react when she finds out Spike's secret. Update soon.

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 09:56 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Yowzer! Wish I could write sexy stuff like that!

I just hope that when Buffy finds out that Spike kind of knew? Oh well, we can but dream eh?

Please read the home page chit chat tonight here. I have an important ? for readers of my fic 'To Know The Human Heart.'

Thanks and I love this story.
spuf

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2005 - 09:33 pm Title: Chapter Twenty

Damn, is it hot in here? That was an excellent chapter and well worth the wait. Good work=)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 09:48 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Another playful chapter, but this one had more serious undertones. Fred and Angel's meeting is still hanging over Spike's head. I enjoy the tension that this is causing in the story, even as Buffy is becoming more relaxed and happy.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 03:17 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

A very nice surprise, for both Spike and your readers! Buffy is coming along so nicely in this. She's learning to trust and care all over again. I'm so glad Spike was there for her. More please - I can't wait to see where the night will take them.

Reviewer: Carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2005 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Nineteen

Oh please yes! Let Buffy decide that they'll be very lucky that night...and the next morning!

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