Excellent chapter! Love it! Can see their relationship building little by little in each chapter.

This was one of my favorite chapters...very touching and sad in some respects...Thanks for the update...looking forward to the hot monkey love...LOL

So Spike had second thoughts with Winnie's plan - but it was too late. ~ I'm glad that Buffy is feeling better. (regarding her being hurt because of Angel) Loved it :)

I like the way you're getting this story told through the flsashbacks and the present stuff..you're doing really well iwth that :-) Not that you shouldn't be because, hey, you're you...I just mean that sometimes it can be hard, but you're doing great.

I love that you're updating your stories so much...they're all so great and this one is so sweet, poor Spike though...for wanting her when he oculdn't have her :( But now he does, so :)

That is an enigma in itself.....Great chapter.........(myself, I get sick on rides that are full of gravity (gravitron), YUCK)

God, I hate both!
I do go on some coasters, though, at 6 Flags Magic Mountain, but.....I cry the whole time.

Ferris Wheels are out, out out! Got caught at the top of one once and not with a guy!
I'm afraid of heights.

Anyway, lovely chapter,
spuf

What a cute chapter. I love that he rang the doorbell.

Awe - that was sweet, the first date! A love a ferris wheel - yet a roller coaster I don't like too much. I don't indent to ride one so soon.

lol, yep that's how I am too - terrified of heights, but I love roller coasters (and I think the ferris wheel fright does have something to do with how slow it goes - more time to think about falling! lol) Anyway, that chapter was so cute! They're so sweet together. Loved it, can't wait for more. You're doing a great job with this story :-)

LoL...Yeah, I don't really get that. For me it's the other way around. I don't do roller coasters, it's really not my thing. I used to always love the ferris wheel though. God, I haven't been to one of those fairs in a long time. I wanna go to one now, but it would be better if I had a guy like Spike to join me. This chapter was cute and I'm really hoping that things will work out for them. I'm just a sucker for a happy ending=)

great chapter.Thanks for updating!

lol! dont feel bad i love roller coasters and hate ferris weels i think the only reason i hate them is cuz they stop at the top and there all wobbly....anyways......great chapter

hehe...i knew there to be something behind that roller coaster-ferris wheel part of the story. it make sense but i love the ferris wheel. great update!!!