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Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

*meep* uh oh
wonderful chapter! can't stress that enough

Reviewer: tayhaangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 09:03 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

wow. go buffy. love this chapter cant wait for some more

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

So there! That's actually a great way to tell him..perhaps not the most tasteful, but still a darn good way. Now let's see how he reacts to that...and I do hope Lindsey finds out soon. Great update :-) Hope you're dry ;)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Thanks for clarifying the Angel/Fred situation, not that it makes his desertion any better. It just filled in the back story of their relationship. I wonder what's going to change now that Angel knows Lindsey's not his daughter. I'm sure that bit of news will send him reeling for a bit. Unfortunately, it will be more justification for his affair and desertion.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 01:12 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!! Get this, Angel!!!! :D:D:D

Reviewer: vicki/gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

What a way to the end the chapter! Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: willowmouse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 08:25 am Title: Chapter Eleven

UM wow, fantastic chapter, brillant work, you are a great story teller .... now the 1st chapter makes so much more sense, I've read it like 5 times!!

Reviewer: daisy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 05:56 am Title: Chapter Eleven

ooppps. okay not really the way i'd tell him but hey now it's out there and maybe they can both move on. more soon please.

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 04:46 am Title: Chapter Eleven

o.u.c.h.

Reviewer: Dannii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 04:43 am Title: Chapter Eleven

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT, great ending on that note but i want more

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 04:24 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh! She told! Oh, boy, this could get messy. Well, at least the truth is out there.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter Eleven

D'oh! I can't believe she just came out and said it like that to Angel. That was great!!

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 03:28 am Title: Chapter Eleven

OMG! This is an awesome chapter! I love the way she blurted that out! I love this fic! I cant wait to see what happens next! I hope that Buffy can get on with her life now that Angel is gone and get it on with Spike! (hehe!)
Please update really soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven

ahhhhh bad bad cliffhanger!!! grr this frusterates me... i still love it though. not to worry =] more REALLY soon!!!!!

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 02:42 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Yikes! Buffy spilled the beans! Or is that spilled the sperm?

Okay, that was great. So, it was Angel and Fred that were seperated back then, eh? Clever twist.

I hope Buffy opens her eyes before she loses sight.

spuf

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 02:05 am Title: Chapter Eleven

wow! awesome!!! Angel deserved that! Can't wait for his response

Reviewer: wikkedlilgrrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 02:03 am Title: Chapter Eleven

omg....and just waiting for the other shoe to drop....just read this from the begining and i just have to say i'm lovin it....update soon please cant wait for the explosion that follows that little announcement.

Reviewer: TammyAsh666 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/20/2005 - 02:00 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh, it is so evil to leave it there. I was thinking she was on a role and then you just had to stop...lol! I really wanna know what his reaction was to that. Hope for more soon=)

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 11:53 pm Title: Ten

Your Spike is SO smart: "I want you when you're completely with me. When
you're not smarting from Angel and when you're not worried and confused
and sad—". Why do I think Buffy has used exactly this line on HIM, before?

I love the way you are interweaving the timelines to build the story. And you know I love determined!Spike. But YAY, PROGRESS!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 08:31 pm Title: Ten

With the age and the family comes responsibility... you have to worry more as when you're 18. And Buffy has to worry a lot. But this is perfect - Buffy has a babysitter and Spike will get to know Lindsey better. It's a good solution for them both.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:59 pm Title: Ten

Thank goodness you didn't have them jump into anything. Buffy's already confused and she and Lindsey don't need even more drama to work through. I'm enjoying the slowly building relationship, and having Spike as Lindsey's nanny will be great plot fodder.

Reviewer: pepperatstate Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 04:11 pm Title: Ten

very cute, I think I am falling in love with Spike too!

Reviewer: Suzee Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 02:54 pm Title: Ten

They're so sweet...and he's trying so much to do things right now...even in this messy, compkicated situation they got themsleves into...great update :)

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Ten

have I mentioned lately that I love your stories? 'Coz you're a great author

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/18/2005 - 12:14 pm Title: Ten

Thats what I'm talking about...lets get it started...LOL..Great update...progress

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