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Date: 10/10/2005 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter Six

Awesome chapters - can't wait for more asap!

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Date: 10/10/2005 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter Six

I liked the chapter. It wasnt one of my favorites but it had convinction and the truth in it. Wich is exactly what Buffy needs. I hope she can get over this really quick! :) This is an awesome fic and I cant wait to see what you do with it! Please update soon! :) Lighter

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Date: 10/09/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Is Buffy dense as a post or what? But then, I've always wondered how she could resist the passionate, deeply loving man right in front of her. Not her most shining moments in this chapter, but I think she'll come around if she can stop lying to herself and others. A great update. Keep them coming, please!

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Prologue - Chapter One

Is Buffy dense as a post or what? But then, I've always wondered how she could resist the passionate, deeply loving man right in front of her. Not her most shining moments in this chapter, but I think she'll come around if she can stop lying to herself and others. A great update. Keep them coming, please!

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 09:43 pm Title: Chapter Six

That flashback had to be hard...yep I say it was destiny...they have to be together...good chapter...more please...truly loving the flashbacks

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter Six

Hmmm, she has nerve....unless Angel knew, she betrayed him more then he ever betrayed her by passing not just another man's child off as his, but his supposed best friend.....who had the nerve to still call him friend......not respecting Buffy very much right now. Wow, intense chapter, who I do feel sorry for is Lindsey. And how did her life get so fucked up, she cheated on her husband and has lived a lie since she conceived another man's baby and has lived a lie for over 4 years.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 09:13 pm Title: Chapter Six

I wonder how Buffy kept her relationship with Angel going when she met Spike again before she was married... Things would have gone different. Maybe this was her stubborness too? Looking forward to the next part!

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 09:00 pm Title: Chapter Six

very, very nice update...

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 08:25 pm Title: Chapter Six

Poor Buffy. I hope she wises up soon, but this is Buffy, eh? I like the way you're using the flashbacks to fill in the missing pieces. Great story, spuf

Reviewer: lovesbitca37 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/09/2005 - 08:23 pm Title: Chapter Six

great update, poor Spike, first Buffy chooses Angel over him, then she pushes him away. Can't wait too see how Lindsay reacts :)

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Five

i knew it!! :-p

Reviewer: Whitelighter354 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 02:01 pm Title: Five

I love it!!! I really cant wait to see what happens next! Great Chapter. Please update soon! :) Lighter

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 01:34 pm Title: Five

OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I certainly didn't see that coming. Wow...Brat this was an excellent revealing chapter. Absolutely enjoyed it through and through. Also, thanks for the quick update. Now can I have another...LOL

Reviewer: Brunettepet Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 12:06 pm Title: Five

The plot thickens! Is the pregnancy why she went back to Angel after their affairs? This story is flowing nicely.

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Four

Oh so she did cheat as well....hmmmmm. Turning into the pot calling the kettle black......Oh what a tangled web....especially is she slept with her husband's best friend.....well ex best friend, for a best friend would not sleep with his wife and still present himself to their house.....but then that's just me. Maybe Angel had a reason to leave, for his wife not only cheated but took his best friend away from him as well.....and that is if he knew his wife pulled a wrong not making things right. Oh my and he's right, here is a little girl caught in the middle......more please.

Reviewer: Lizzy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 11:16 am Title: Five

Knew it was comin, but i was am amzing chapter anyway. You felt all of the intensity and passion. Great job!

Reviewer: prophecygirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 11:08 am Title: Five

I KNEW it! I KNEW she was his.Oh god, moe yummy, possessive, determined Spike. I also wonder how Buffy managed to keep it from Angel, since they had stopped making love. What a mess! This little family has a loooong way to go. But, it will be a delicious ride.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 11:03 am Title: Five

So it was Spike with whom Buffy slept (Spike mentioned it - Buffy cheated Angel "back"). But after that he left the city. I wonder why Buffy is so sure that Lindsey is Spike's daughter. Only if they didn't 'make up' like Buffy told Spike. And if she could do the math so could Angel. I wonder if he knew that Lindsey was Spike's.

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter Four

I see I missed two chapters ... will read both now. ~ So Buffy came to visit Spike when Angel cheated on her to ask him about Angel and search for help. This is all a bit fucked up for them. To the last sentence: I think Spike likes what the got from that all.

Reviewer: greyangel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 10:16 am Title: Five

So she lied!...well what can be said about that? In RL this would be soooo bad and would take a lot to fix...Spike had always suspected the child was his but because of his feeling for the mother he stayed away...in the long run this might not have been the best thing to do...but from his POV his hands were tied if Buffy was determined to try and make a go of her crumbling marriage with Angel...if Spike had confronted her at that point with his suspicions she probably would have just denied it, (and that would have been much worse, as he would have destroyed any chance of making Buffy face the truth at the right time) as she clung to the hope of saving what obviously (now) could not be saved...(very RL here)...and a woman in this situation is probably so whecked with guilt, not only for what she has done with her husbands friend, but because she recognized she had feeling for him too...denile is such a lovely place to dwell in, under these conditions...and sometimes, if we lie to ourselves for long enough we actually really do come to believe the lie...and live it as a truth. This is probably what Buffy has been doing...(poor thing...silly thing)...So, clearly a long way to go...to not only bring this damaged family together as a loving unit...but to have the adult parties do some serious soul searching and have them purge themselves of the lies, faults and failings they have woven around themselves in an twisted effot to protect themselves...(Oh what a tangled web we weave, when at first we begin to decieve)...long way to go and I'm sooo looking forward to the journey... more soon please

Reviewer: txjmfan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 03:54 am Title: Five

Wow! Just started reading this one. What an awesome story so far! Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Danniii Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 03:40 am Title: Five

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT. I was thinking she might be his. ILOVE IT

Reviewer: ace Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 03:18 am Title: Five

didn't see that coming...maybe i'm losing my touch, yeah?

Reviewer: spikesbabi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 03:06 am Title: Five

that was intense...i love it

Reviewer: spufette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/08/2005 - 02:31 am Title: Five

I knew it! Yeah...I'm so glad you updated this and hurray Spike for coming in like the fucking army and conquering! I love this Spike, he's so damn forceful (but in a very good way!) spuf

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