

Date: 10/24/2005 - 01:07 pm Title: Chapter One
Hey, good start! Love the beginning of this story and already wish there was an end. Continue like this it's great!

Date: 10/03/2005 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter One
great start - got my interest. more please.

Date: 10/02/2005 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter One
I like the start so far. I hope you can post more :)

Date: 10/01/2005 - 09:57 pm Title: Chapter One
Neat start. Keep updating. One thing though "sequined" not "sequence" halters, different meaning. This is not a put down either, I have trouble with words too.

Date: 10/01/2005 - 09:28 pm Title: Chapter One
absolutely loving it so far
Date: 10/01/2005 - 06:44 pm Title: Chapter One
EACH CHAPTER SHOULD BE AT LEAST '1000' WORDS, UNLESS ITS A DRABBLE, POEM, FICLET, OR BASICALLY STORIES MEANT TO BE SHORT!!!! Break this rule and your story and/or chapter will be deleted without hesitation. Word of advise, combine the two chapters and you will meet the minimum words per chapter.

Date: 10/01/2005 - 05:14 pm Title: Chapter One
I really wanna find out what Spike's gonna do! Love it! Please update! :)