

Date: 10/26/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
"You're mine, Buffy," he said, his voice rough. "Mine."
I was just waiting for him to turn into game face and claim her, lol. Yea, yea, I know, not this story;). Very, very nice chapter. More, please?

Date: 10/26/2005 - 03:33 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Awe :) Spike had almost said he loves Buffy? I bet Buffy would have loved to hear it. I'm very glad you were able in the past to update daily - thanks for that.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
sooo good, as usual! i like a well done pwp, but if u add a little "more", that's great!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
The small shadow of angst makes the lovemaking a little bit desperate and hotter. Good to finally learn the origin of William's mother's illness and Buffy's dislike of her parents.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 08:18 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Sweet but HOT. Loved the conversation in this chapter.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 08:16 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
These two are going to drive me crazy!! Another awesome chapter

Date: 10/26/2005 - 08:14 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Stupid, stubborn people. I wish one of them with 'fess up already!! But I predict much angst to come first, right? Looking forward to more. Please update soon!!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 07:32 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh for heaven's sake why can't one of them just come out with it already! All this dancing back and forth and doubting of themselves and each other is making me crazy! Of course, that won't keep me from reading every update and praying *this* will be the time it happens.
You're a torture master, Addie. I like it. This has been a great read so far and I know it'll keep on being one. Thanks for all your hard work.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 06:59 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Great chapter! Loved it! But I wish Buffy and Spike would get on the same page!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 06:55 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
They are just so damn CUTE together... now why can't they get the rest of it right? Silly people. If they'd both just talk ... really talk... they'd be fine. Patience is not my strong suit... can ya tell?

Date: 10/26/2005 - 06:43 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Ok, I love how William is evolving into sexy, possessive, but still incredibly loving Spike. But my frustration with these knucklheads still knows no bounds. I hope the get over these misunderstandings soon.
Grrr, arrrrgh!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Loving this... thought I'd let you know.
Write more... please... pretty please with naked Spike's on top?
Sincerely,
D.E.S

Date: 10/26/2005 - 04:05 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
That was great - I hope she opens up to him soon

Date: 10/26/2005 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Finally started reading it, all of the chapters so far, and I've got one thing to say....WOW!!! Spuffy loving is FREAKING HOT!!! Love aggressive Buffy and shy William getting seduced....it's what always attracted me to the character when first introduced in 'FFL.' That and I love shy, intelligent guys.....William just happens to be that much hotter. Yummy, and the transformation...perfection cause you didn't completely change him. Oh mama, loving it all, and I really can't wait for more.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Well another nice chapter in this ongoing story. Really good to be able to have daily updates.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:21 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
Oh we are getting close! Even if it was accidental. Loved it to pieces. Can't wait for more.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 01:04 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
good update more please

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:24 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
ARGH! I am so frustrated with them. Their insecurities are driving me crazy! Well, I guess they are teenagers. Other than that, this chaper was fabulous. they are so much together. The angst does give the story that hint of urgency. Can't wait for more. :-)

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
awww how sweet! i can't wait til one of them slips up and actually says I love you!! They're sooo cute!

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
That was the best chapter yet. I look forward each evening to this story. Thank you.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter One
How sad...but so very sweet. Bittersweet in fact. I could feel my chest getting sore.

Date: 10/26/2005 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Thirteen
I liked this chapter. It was a very sweet moment

Date: 10/25/2005 - 11:44 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
William and Buffy are so...arghhh!!! Why can't they overcome their fears and just say they love each other?! You really know how to pull a reader in.

Date: 10/25/2005 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
awesome...dying for their big confession of feeling :-)
great chappie, take care

Date: 10/25/2005 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Thirteen
Consider this fodder for the muse. . . ROAR! *giggles madly* Wow, they actually had a fairly in depth conversation and neither one of them blew up! Nice chapter there. . .so is she going to live there while his mother is gone?? What naughty games will these two get up too???? Inquiring minds want to know. . .