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Reviewer: Carri Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 - 12:57 am Title: Chapter Ten

Excellent chapter! I like how careful both of them are. She's not really telling everything and he's holding back as well. They have to see that's it's not about the sex..

Reviewer: Molly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter Ten

Wow.. Totally Hot. Naughty William is fun! Hope he comes out more.

Reviewer: DK Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2005 - 12:31 am Title: Chapter Ten

This is the best story to read before going to bed. Makes me dream all sorts of wonderful times. Honestly, it is a great story. I know you started it as a PWP and now a slick plot has gotten involved somehow. Keep writing I enjoy it and from the amount of hits the prior chapters have other readers do to.

Reviewer: wolfspider Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 03:34 pm Title: Chapter Nine

so what's a few plot bunnies thrown in for good measure. Everything else is fantastic so why not the plot too. Great chapter. Keep them coming

Reviewer: SpaceLord Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 02:17 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Well I like it alot. It's a nice change from the regular vamp/slayer stuff and I can appreciate he sex stuff alot although I hope the plot moves on a little more.

Reviewer: Scarlet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I love these two characters--they're such opposites and so good for eachother. William's sexual awakening has been so artfully explored in each chapter and at the same time Buffy's insecurity and need for love has revealed her to be more than just an oversexed gal out for a good time. I was worried the story was going to take the usual line of "Buffy gets William the nerd gets a hot makeover and he then takes off to bang Cecily and every other girl in school leaving Buffy in tears, only to later see the error of his ways and try to make it up to her." But what you've managed to do is develop a subtle, realistic plot line that develops the characters more deeply. I truly appreciate that.

Reviewer: Heaven Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:45 pm Title: Chapter Seven

Is it wrong that Iike the raunchy sex scenes? And fuck, or some variation of the word, tends to be on my favorites....Awesome chapters

Reviewer: Niamh Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:39 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Ack! A plot. . . no, not that. . never that. . . LOL. . seriously, there's nothing wrong with a bit of plot hrown in . . . and hey, when you can write plots, that's a good thing. . . nice work. . . very nice work

Reviewer: vicki/gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:33 pm Title: Chapter Nine

A plot, darn. Only kidding. I think this will make it even more interesting. this is the first story I search for every morning.

Reviewer: Spuffy6 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Nine

just read this whole fic, so far i really like it. would like to know more about buffys past that makes her act this way. The whole part where she talks to willow about love makes me think something happened to her. and i like the plot, instead of a total pwp. i can tell buffy does have strong feelings for him even thought she hasnt admitted it, the phone call at the end of this chapter pretty much told me that. Keep it coming, can't wait for another update.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:03 pm Title: Chapter Nine

oh love the small amt of plot sneakin in.... waiting for more!!!

Reviewer: Nadja Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 11:53 am Title: Chapter Nine

Oh, come on! Angel? Seriously. Didn't see that coming.
Well, who's better in screwing things up between Buffy and Spike then Angel? Hope you'll make it better very soon:).

Reviewer: Cas Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter Nine

Very fun to read. I like the wordly experienced (but insecure) Buffy, and William is just, William. Will he become more Spike later on I wonder?

Reviewer: Carmie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter Nine

That was a big twist. How is Buffy gonna explain Angel? Great plot!

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter Nine

I like the plot, and worming "Buffy and Angel 4-Ever!" into a story always makes me grin (it's just so adolescent). Buffy's tear-filled apology was cringe worthy in light of William's reasons for bolting. He needs to come clean about his feelings, but the angst and miscommunication makes the story sing.

Reviewer: Angie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 08:28 am Title: Chapter Nine

More please!

Reviewer: Cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 06:58 am Title: Chapter Nine

I loved the update! These too would have less trouble if they dared to speak, to tell what they are feeling without fear. This takes a lot of courage. I hope they'll find it to do. They could save themselves so much pain... It was an old notebook I think - with the B+A4vr ;-)

Reviewer: Gaia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 06:18 am Title: Chapter Nine

i dont mind the plot to much...just as long as it doesn't get to angsty! another great chapie

Reviewer: Cassiopea Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 05:45 am Title: Chapter Nine

I've read all the chapters with great delight.
I love where you're taking this. A bit of angst is good! ;-)
William's introspective work was so painful, poor young lover who doesn't feel worthy .
It's wonderful ! Thanks for updating so fast !

Reviewer: demona424 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 03:49 am Title: Chapter Nine

That about broke my heart! Poor Buffy! All teenage girls write silly things like that, but I guess he wouldn't know that. I hope William is not ashamed of her. Kinda sucks he doesn't want her to meet his mother.

Reviewer: Megan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Nine

Well damn, you made me get all teary and here I am actually wearing mascara today!

Reviewer: cee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:44 am Title: Chapter Nine

If they spent time getting to know each other instead of slambamthankyoumaam, then William would probably find out things about Buffy, like her likes, dislikes, and maybe about her previous relationships? Hmmm...a though.

Author's Response: Well, yeah...Not something I'm unaware of. Just a point that I haven't developed yet. I am actually pretty observant of what's going on in my own story... *wink*

Reviewer: shelly Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:26 am Title: Chapter Nine

aww! i feel bad for them!!!

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter Nine

Ah, stupid Angel always ruining things between Buffy and Spike! Nice chapter, and if the plots are going to keep this story going I say that's a good thing!

Reviewer: Tahmoe Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/22/2005 - 12:06 am Title: Chapter Nine

Really enjoyed the chapter...poor William so in love and so not knowing what to do about it...Damn plots...lol More spuffy loving please

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