

Date: 04/28/2006 - 02:06 am Title: Chapter 1
No fair, that can't be the end of it......There has to be more!

Date: 04/15/2006 - 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
more please, really just need a little ciggie break, that should give you enough time to write another chapter...right? :)

Date: 11/08/2005 - 03:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see where you go with this story, got a nice start to it.

Date: 10/27/2005 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
good so far

Date: 10/22/2005 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Grat story. I wish you could write a third part .

Date: 10/20/2005 - 01:27 am Title: Chapter 1
better than the first part

Date: 10/19/2005 - 10:52 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awesome chapter. I'm really excited about the sequel! I really like what you have so far and I can't wait for chapter two!

Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
I jumped to the other part too. I didn't think you would make a sequel, but his one looks promising.
Date: 10/19/2005 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, its better then the first part, that much I'll say.

Date: 10/19/2005 - 09:30 am Title: Chapter 1
This is promising to be cute and fun! And very sexy :) More please!

Date: 10/19/2005 - 08:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait to see what happens next.

Date: 10/19/2005 - 03:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start! Can't wait to find out where things go from here.