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Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Three

Gotta love those cliffhangers....so who is our mystery victim??hmmm? Please don't leave us hangin' to long..You have been great with your updates so far..so thanks :-)

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 04:12 pm Title: Chapter Three

grrr you're evil...evily brilliant!! loved it... can't for more...thanx!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 11:46 am Title: Chapter Three

WHOA! I felt like a hurricane just blasted through. What happened? *LOL* looks like buffy and spike went with animal instinct, eh?

Good work once again! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: vitalis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/10/2005 - 08:06 am Title: Chapter Two

interesting! cant wait to find out who the dead girl is and i cant wait to see Buffy kicks Spikes ass in LA! oh the sexual tension!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Two

YAY! New chappie! Willow is so damn cute. ;) So far, so good. Keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 04:39 pm Title: Chapter Two

it wouldnt be too bad if they fell into bed immediately....thats my opinion.....great update

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Two

great chapter!! thanx

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2005 - 01:44 pm Title: Chapter Two

More, more, more please...LOL

That was a short chapter..but thanks for updating quickly. Sounds like sparks are flying between our two favorite characters. Great job : )

Reviewer: jt Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 10:13 pm Title: Chapter One

Very good start. Keep it up.

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 07:32 pm Title: Chapter One

good so far

Reviewer: DaniD Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 05:12 pm Title: Chapter One

Oh I like this Buffy..Ms. in charge girl.. No flames from me sweetie.. So far I love the story..keep going and update often! :-)

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 02:24 pm Title: Chapter One

the beginning is quite captivating... hope to read more soon!

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 01:19 pm Title: Chapter One

I like it so far. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 12:58 pm Title: Chapter One

this was very good for a first fic.. very good...period... though one small thing, it's Xander with an X not Zander... that's all ;) interesting story!! hope we hear from you again...thanx!

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2005 - 12:37 pm Title: Chapter One

I like the idea of Buffy as a crime scene investigator... hehe... my favourite show CSI and favourite couple Buffy and Spike together....mmm... heady cocktail.

Anyway, I know this is your first fic (as you've mentioned) and you did well, but I just have to say that your style of writing is a bit formal... I don't know how to explain it. Just a bit clipped here and there. That, and Buffy gets referred to as "sir"?

But other than that, I wanna see how this turns out, so keep them chappies coming! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really not that conservative, but she's an officer and believe it or not they do talk like that. I'm an officer and my dad was a CSI for 23 years, so the police jargon might be a little strong at first, but Buffy will lighten up once she and Spike start to get to know each other. Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it!

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