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Reviewer: Spiked_Slayer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curiosity and guilt

*Jumping up and down* Ohhh yea!!! That was a really good story and I can't wait to read the rest of it!!! You so totally rock!!!!!!

Author's Response: *Blush* THANK YOU! =D

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curiosity and guilt

Nice! It's a greeat story. I love the little connections you do with Chris, and here parents. Just the whole story is well thought out. It's very Spuffy!
Pleas update.

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/28/2006 - 04:32 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Curiosity and guilt

Oh... please, pretty please !!! More soon !! I just love that girl !!

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Date: 02/19/2006 - 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

Great chapter! Please update soon!

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Date: 02/19/2006 - 06:03 am Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

great chapter

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Date: 02/18/2006 - 10:41 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

cant wait to see what's gonna happen next!!! love it!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

so now the cat is finally out of the bag to Buffy as well. Can't wait to find out what happend to William if you want to tell me and why is she staying with Dawn in the future. Just love that kid.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 08:09 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

this story is really weird. it doesn't make a whole lot of sense and the spelling errors are very distracting. don't apologize for them, just fix them already. get a beta or something.

Author's Response: Then don't read it. I had a beta, but I can't get in contact with her anymore. And I don't get what doesn't make sense to you.

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 07:28 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

Great Chapter. I want to know more. Soon!!!!!

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/18/2006 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter 7 – Hi mum

AAHHHGGRHRRH !! I'm don't want to wait !!! MORE SOON ? Pleeaassee ! *pouty lips* :)

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

waiting for more!!!! love to see her reation to all this!!

Reviewer: akarinacj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 06:29 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

Great update. Please update soon.

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

great chapter

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

good updates

Reviewer: ~*~Tasha~*~ Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 09:45 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

Look forward to more. Glad to see this one had an update. {smiles}

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 06:26 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

Love the story!!! Cant wait for more!

Reviewer: olivia-luv Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

Please umpdate soon, I can't wait !! :)

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 6 - Cocoa story's

Great chapter! Can't wait for more!

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Date: 01/13/2006 - 02:35 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Good update. Look forward to more. Spike pretty much wigged out on Buffy there.

Reviewer: seraiza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 11:57 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

well a least the ben/glory problem is taken care of...... love the update and waiting for more!

Author's Response: Yup, that's one thing that I really needed to get rid of =P Thanks!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 11:41 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Great chapter. I'm a bit disturbed by the ending, but I think I got what you were trying to say with that.

Author's Response: Thank, I appreciate that. I know the end is not that fun, but I just neede to get it out of the way

Reviewer: jenny Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/13/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

please update soon! i can't wait until buffy finds out just what spike was rambling about! i am loving your story!!

Reviewer: letitia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

Now what is she going to do now that Spike has kindof let the cat out of the bag. I just hope that she can fix this... Great chapter.

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 10:21 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

okay, i'm not sure what i think about this. it's a little too weird for me and i have a feeling this will be my last chapter. i didn't like that she killed ben. she's supposed to be buffy's daughter after all and i don't like that you made her a killer, i'm sure buffy wouldn't be proud of that either. even if it was glory, it still wasn't right.

Author's Response: I get that, I do. But this girl had been trough hell and back. You have to understand that she is here to stop that from happening. She doesn't want to kill Ben, but she feels she has too. She had become bitter from all the things that happened in her life, so that's why she isn't a really sweet innocent girl. Her mission is to change that, so she will be =P But I'm sorry you feel that way

Reviewer: frank Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 01/12/2006 - 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 5 – Killer moves

You really need to find a beta. This many blinding errors are very distracting and make it hard for me to keep reading. I don't know what bloodshedbaby helped you with here, but he/she needs to do more

Author's Response: She did not do this chapter yet, but I'm working on it right now.

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