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Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

cant wait for more!

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Date: 12/20/2005 - 07:53 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

good start next chappy!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 12:20 am Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

good update

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 11:01 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

I'm glad to see another chapter and I still think this will be really interesting. I especially liked the bartender's take on their relationship. They really are like two schoolchildren, teasing and pulling hair to show they like each other. Too cute!

Reviewer: theladyofspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:12 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

luved both chaps. i think u should probably get a beta reader, to check grammar n spelling, but i'm really liking the story ;) pls more!! lol ;)

Reviewer: sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:08 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

um, okay, this really needs a lot of work.

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Date: 12/19/2005 - 04:11 pm Title: Chapter 2 – What changed?

Yes now what did just happen?? They always migrated towards each other even back then.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/18/2005 - 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/17/2005 - 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

A promising start. I hope you'll update soon

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2005 - 02:17 am Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

good update

Reviewer: bubble_blunder Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

Oooh, can't wait to see where you take this! More soon, please.

-Lisa

Reviewer: jeanie Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

good start, but you need to proofread. (her punched were stronger ) should be 'her punches were stronger' that could be a typo but tong is the wrong spelling for tongue keep up the good work, I suggest geting someone to beta for you.

Author's Response: Hi Jeanie, I'm sorry for the typo's, I changed them immediately. See, I’m not English, so I hope you can forgive me for some typo’s here and there =P But thanks for letting me know! And thank you for liking my fic =P

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

OK, you've got my attention. This sounds really interesting. I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Michele Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

I'm very intrigued! I hope you will continue with this one.

Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/14/2005 - 03:35 pm Title: Chapter 1 – A wise Christmas wish

Has promise. Keep going

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