Reviews For Broken Betrayal
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/28/2013 - 08:04 am Title: Epilogue

Very cute - I liked this story a lot. Love the premise, that Buffy and Spike had been claimed all along; sure explains a bunch, doesn't it? Pretty well written, some areas are a little too pronoun-heavy, so it can be difficult who's saying/doing what to whom with everyone being referred to as he or she. And just a few grammar errors (most common is the instances of "hadn't of" instead of the correct "hadn't have" or "hadn't've"). Overall, a good read.

Reviewer: nmcil Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/20/2011 - 12:46 am Title: Epilogue

enjoyed reading your story very much -

Reviewer: silverforest11 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/13/2010 - 05:19 am Title: Epilogue

i loved it sooooo much!! i love it when spuffy storys have claims thats probaly why i love your storys sooo much!!

Reviewer: Dawn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/12/2009 - 01:12 am Title: Epilogue

I enjoyed reading this story. It moved along nicely.

Reviewer: yubi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/28/2009 - 10:54 am Title: Epilogue

great story, i really enjoyed it

Reviewer: platinumgoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/01/2007 - 04:45 pm Title: Epilogue

wOW, VERY NICE.

Reviewer: DoWnEr Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2007 - 09:55 pm Title: Epilogue

Was an ok story but you seem to let Angel off pretty easy. He mind raped Buffy and physically raped her.

Remember he knew she was mated and was under spell to forget and yet when he was human he still raped her. I think having sex with someone when they are under mind altering magic is rape. No beat down, no nothing. He caused a mated woman to cheat on her mate with 3 different men yet he gets no punishment. I thought rape is something someone should be punished for.

I would like to say i don't hate Angel but i hate rapists and in this fic Angel was a rapist yet he gets away scott free. I didn't mention Giles because i think getting the woman you loved killed because of his arrogance is enough punishement.

If onyl Angel had gotten what every rapist deserves i would have loved the story. The fact that you let a rapist off without any type of punisment kind of ruined it.

FTFCHRIS@hotmail.com

Reviewer: Alien Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2007 - 06:34 am Title: Epilogue

Itš good I like it realy like it

Reviewer: spk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/03/2006 - 10:38 am Title: Epilogue

This story seems to be ideally set-up for a sequel. Any chance of one? :)

Reviewer: sguelaiche Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/23/2006 - 07:04 am Title: Epilogue

For some strange reason I keep coming back and reading this story, this being the seventh time and I still enjoy reading it and look forward to reading some more of your fics

Reviewer: tammy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/17/2006 - 08:43 pm Title: Epilogue

I just found your work and I love it. This fiction was great!

Reviewer: Erin Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/04/2006 - 03:59 pm Title: Epilogue

This was a really wonderful twist to the original buffy storyline! Its simply perfect! Bravo! Do you think there may be a sequel?

Let me know if there is... ETBat18@aol.com

Thanks,
Erin

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/17/2006 - 03:53 pm Title: Chapter 1

Just had to nip back for another bite of the cherry.

Reviewer: vicki Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:30 pm Title: Epilogue

oh man this is an amazing story! truly unique - i can't find enough praise to heap on this one. another different thing was making giles the real villain of this piece - we don't see that too often and i liked it. i mean, i like giles well enough but it was cool to know that he was the bad guy here. i would have liked to have seen willow take much more consequences, but of course, the story was not about willow. I love how buffy claimed spike immediately when he first saw her. hot spuffy loving too! all in all, this story is a real winner. thanks for sharing it with us.

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/03/2006 - 04:44 am Title: Chapter 1

I'm gonna miss this fic, It was a really good read.

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 07:55 pm Title: Epilogue

I just loved your story and I am sorry if I did not leave many reviews. I always looked forward to the updates and I cannot wait to read another of your great stories.

Reviewer: reader Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 04:27 am Title: Epilogue

Great fic enjoyed it very much. :)

Reviewer: Laura Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/31/2006 - 12:31 am Title: Epilogue

loved this fic!! sad it's over!!

Reviewer: Opal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:59 pm Title: Epilogue

*hugs* loved the epilogue o'smut! :)

Reviewer: Elizabeth Anne Summers Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 09:01 pm Title: Epilogue

Awwww that's all???

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 07:52 pm Title: Epilogue

okay, that was so not an ending.

Reviewer: silversweet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 07:02 pm Title: Epilogue

that was a fun story, i really enjoyed it. Cordy's ceremony was really great, nice job. And I liked the variations with claims, you don't usually get that. You have my applause. ^-^

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 05:32 pm Title: Epilogue

I'm sorry that is yet the end.. but it was a good story. Loved the last part too.

Reviewer: kimbclar Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 05:15 pm Title: Epilogue

I'm sad to see it end but it was a great ride!

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/30/2006 - 02:37 pm Title: Epilogue

wonderful job! I really liked Xander in this fic, lol! and the end was just perfect! ;)

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