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Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 08:32 am Title: Chapter 2

So it was a spell that let the Scoobies forget everything. Ah! An eternity claim... I understand. *sigh* Seems as if it was Giles who did the spell. Correct little watcher, following the Council's rules. Loved the flashbacks. Wonder if Giles is on the phone.

Reviewer: kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 03:31 am Title: Chapter 2

oh wow. Another amazing chapter. I so want to read more. :) great job

Reviewer: jane Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 03:13 am Title: Chapter 1

Glad you've updated only problem is can't read it here, could you update your site?

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter 2

great chapter

Reviewer: Tamara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 10:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great story. I can't wait for the update. This means that if they Giles and Angel had left well enough alone then Buffy wouldn't have been with Angel, Parker or Riley. Angel wouldn't have lost his soul, Jenny wouldn't have been killed and the Initiative might've been recognized as a threat much earlier because they weren't blinded by the fact of Buffy's relationship with Riley. Those two have a lot to answer for.

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 2

Great story. I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: KC Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 2

I really like this story. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 2

I love their claim, I love the past, I love the fact that Dawn was already there, i like Anya a lot, lol, in a word, I just love this story so far, more and soon ;)

Reviewer: Kelsey Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 2

Really good so far. Keeping going update soon.

Reviewer: chomodog Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 01:11 pm Title: Chapter 2

I like the idea for the story.I am already looking forward to updates.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 2

Glad to see an update of the Mary! I like to plot line. Will be interesting to see what happens. I'm worried about the reversal spells influence on Angel though...did you have Willow call him Angelus on purpose? And will the reversal spell (the way it was worded?) effect his curse? hmmm interesting.

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2006 - 12:53 pm Title: Chapter 2

That would be Giles or Angel on the phone, since I'm pretty sure Oz doesn't have the number. He wouldn't know that Giles owns the shop now.

Reviewer: Apple Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 12/27/2005 - 08:55 am Title: Chapter 1

no, please don't continue.

Reviewer: Kat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/24/2005 - 05:47 pm Title: Chapter 1

oh wow amazing start. i love it

Reviewer: letitia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/21/2005 - 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

more you ask??? I can't wait to find out more of this story...

Reviewer: Kimber Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 1

It's not nice to tease, LOL.........but yes I would like to see more of this.........

Reviewer: Lu82 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh my! I jus found it and so far I looooove it, Buffy who defends Spike from her friends, the claim at the beginning and the one in the past, the very first one (awww , by the way I love halloweeen episode!!)

more and soon pleeease, brilliant job so far

Reviewer: romero Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1

Oh more please!!!

Reviewer: Shady Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 03:20 pm Title: Chapter 1

ooooo this is goooooood

More!!!!

Reviewer: sirc Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter 1

OOh.... I like :D

Reviewer: Gaia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1

okay, im kinda confused here. did that really happen (the warehose scene) in ur version of the Buffy verse or was that some alternate reality? were they like mates the entire time? im so confused. otha than my confusion thou i like it.

Reviewer: Bernardette Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/20/2005 - 04:16 am Title: Chapter 1

Yes MORE. This is a gret story. Please continue.

Reviewer: Wolfram_and_Hart Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1

More????

Uh...HELL YEAH!

Reviewer: lilpunkpixie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

more please....interested in seeing how you play this one out.

Reviewer: Jeni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/19/2005 - 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 1

Yes more! Now please?????? don't lea ve me here! *on knees begging* please? for early christmas and puppies?

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