Reviews For Some Nice Woman
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Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/30/2005 - 01:21 am Title: only

hope there is more to come

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 - 06:53 pm Title: only

it was good. id like more but you do need a beta,

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 - 10:40 am Title: only

Eh? What happened to my review? I was the first to post.

Anyway, I noticed that you've modified the chapter and made it longer.

I still like it, and I think it has potential... but I'll just say this even though other reviewers have said already... you need a beta. It's not too serious but sometimes I had difficulty understanding.

That's all. Cheers and update the next chappie, soon, yeah?

Reviewer: deva Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 - 08:43 am Title: only

I agree with the_bends. I don't usually read fics like these because I don't like the whole Buffy dates a man twice her age sort of thing but there are some people out there who like that sort of stuff but if you want to generate more readers, I suggest having this beta'd.

Author's Response: Spike is 20 and she is 17. I tried to imply it without straight out saying it. He married his highschool sweet heart and was widowed 2 years.

Reviewer: Noelle Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 - 08:40 am Title: only

good fic i hope theres more.

Reviewer: the_bends Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/29/2005 - 03:30 am Title: only

Hi. I really like the idea you have here, but I think your story could really benefit from having a beta look at it to fix up some grammar as well as the general flow of the story.

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