Reviews For Torn Between Loves
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Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 07:09 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

really interesting beginning...though i recommend you separate the story in more paragraph cos it looks too crowded... but other than that great story so far!! thanx so much! hope you update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyandSpikeForever Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:33 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

great so far

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

Good start! :) Just a note that you might want to break up the dialogue and paragraphs. Makes for an easier read. Will we get flashbacks of Spike's big reveal of feelings to Buffy?

Reviewer: MarstersGirl13 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 05:18 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

good start. just wondering..i may have missed it but how old is buffy and the gang??? hoping for more soon!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:49 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

Great chapter! I'm starting to feel sorry for Spike already. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Meagan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2006 - 04:48 pm Title: Introductions/ Arrivals

Good start, I like how you started with the "big reveal" already done, so we can see where they go from there. Can't wait for more.

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