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Reviewer: maryperk Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/11/2006 - 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 10 - Family

Hi Opal, great chappy.

Author's Response: Thanks Mary! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/10/2006 - 01:15 am Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

Seems like there needs to be a bit more story before we jump to happily ever after, but I think this is a great first step. Loved the chapter.

Author's Response: You're on to me...definitely is going to be way too soon for happily ever after. Before that happens, I have a prezzie of spuffiness for everyone first. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 11:56 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: dom Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 01:54 pm Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

good story but i think dru should come back to hrow a littel tension into it, make some of buffys dream come true.
koo story though


Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review and reading.

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 10:57 am Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

Wow! That was a good chapter. I didn't expect things to be resolved so quickly! More soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you...but don't worry things won't be "resolved" too long.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 08:57 am Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

At last Spike has his little William in his arms and Buffy at his side.This chapter is adorable.And No I think there is going to be more adventure. Update soon.

Author's Response: Lots more adventure! Lots! :)

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/09/2006 - 08:27 am Title: Chapter 9 - Firsts

Great reunion. Can't wait to hear what happens next.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 08:39 am Title: Chapter 8 - Road Trip

I love Angel and Riley interaction. It always ends up in a fight. Can't wait.

Author's Response: Damn right. It's one of the only fights that I like having Angel win.

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 08:38 am Title: Chapter 7 - Eyes of a Child

Still following though I really hate Riley

Author's Response: Riley will suffer a painful painful end! I promise

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 01:14 am Title: Chapter 8 - Road Trip

good updates

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:40 am Title: Chapter 8 - Road Trip

YAY for you Opal.I love this So Spike is right behind ,following them through the bond between him and his son.And good for Buffy at last wakeing up to the fact that Spike will protect her and little Will with his life if need be!" O I can't wait for the next update,please write it soon.

Author's Response: I couldn't imaging writing a Spike that didn't care about his son...but that would make an interesting fic (Opal kicks her muse now....). Thanks for leaving your comments and a nice review.

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:27 am Title: Chapter 7 - Eyes of a Child

OK I will have faith that your word is true.I feel for spike and his love for mother and child.And I cant wait to see what is going to happen next.I love the bond that Spike has with is son.Please update like now.

Author's Response: Thanks..I'm glad you like the bond between them.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 8 - Road Trip

Yeah light! And going to LA, probly a good idea, and we get to annoy Angel to boot. Love that plan much better than Iowa. Love Spike trailing along. Can't wait for the reunion. Fabulous.

Author's Response: Annoying Angel is almost as fun as writing stories about torching him! :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/06/2006 - 12:09 am Title: Chapter 7 - Eyes of a Child

Iowa!? Of course Walsh wouldn't think to look for them in Riley's home state that he so openly praises. Well, We'll see how that goes. Love it. Onto Ch. 8!

Author's Response: Thanks! :)

Reviewer: Tuesday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2006 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter 8 - Road Trip

Great update! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 02/05/2006 - 08:21 am Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy


I do like the story, but it isn't really realistic. And you should really go into details, explain what they're doing.



Author's Response: I'm glad you like. I write AU because I enjoy stretching boundaries with the imagination, so "reaslistic" depends on what I am writing. I do appreciate you pointing out the details. This fic is mostly written, but I will try to ensure future fics have better detail. Thank You.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 11:57 pm Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

You pose all kinds of good quesitons in your ending note, and I can't wait to read answers to all of them. It is a bit nice to see Buffy and RIley as friends. He gets made evil all the time, and my only problem with him is when he's buffy's boyfriend. Hope Spike gets to his baby soon. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I appreciate that you take the time to let me know what you are thinking.

Reviewer: LadySpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

This is great!!!! Beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like the way it is written. makes me all warm and fuzzy inside. *Hugs*

Reviewer: LadySpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

This is great!!!! Beautifully written!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 10:26 pm Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

Where is Spike,and no Riley will nt be there for Buffy and little Will,and I hate this wait,this was just 2 short.

Author's Response: Sorry for making you wait but thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: Irishwoman39 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 5 - What's In A Name

Spikes baby,and gess who is on his way,la,lalalal.Spike is coming .Spike is the father,updat please.

Author's Response: Thanks for your review!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

more please

Author's Response: No problem. More is on the way!

Reviewer: maria Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 10:49 am Title: Chapter 6 -Pondering Daddy

Opal I'll hang in there with you. I love stories that has Buffy and Spike as the parents. I'll just ignore Riley and Angel in any of the chapters. Can't wait for the next update.

Author's Response: Thank You.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 01:32 am Title: Chapter 5 - What's In A Name

Seems like some perfect timing. Love Spike keeping the boys alive by bribing the bar tender. Glad he'll be by for his baby. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/04/2006 - 01:25 am Title: Chapter 4 - Conversations

Glad Spike's got some info, but he needs to help his girl slay, at the very least. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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