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Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 11:13 pm Title: Silk or Lace?

I'm really hoping you update this. I am loving the spuffy scenes. I thought him putting on a dress for her amusement was hilarious.

Reviewer: saettie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 03/06/2006 - 09:54 pm Title: Silk or Lace?

HA! thats funny!! thats hillarious actually. and i agree w ya bout the dawn thing. i dont especially like her either. kinda a brat if u ask me.

Reviewer: Mariana Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/01/2006 - 01:30 am Title: Silk or Lace?

lol funny story though i think your pauses are a little abrupt, i mean, when you change scenes and the dialogue,s you break them too abruptly, you need a bit more fluidity when telling your story, but other than that, i like it very much. it's just healthy critisism IMHO, just so you can make your story better ;) thanx, hope you update soon!!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2006 - 11:34 pm Title: Silk or Lace?

good update

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