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Reviewer: Kerry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:59 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

absolutely loved it :D:D:D:D:D

ace fic xxxxx

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 12:30 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

They're so sweet...and can I just say, you like my writing? After reading this story that becomes so much more of a compliment than it already was...and thanks for giving us an epilogue too :-)

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 09:03 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Their first time was emotional and playful, I enjoyed the spontaneity.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 03:29 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Great ending-- I'm going to be sad to see this one go. It was a fun ride-- thank you!

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:32 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

perfect ending to a perfect story. loved it.

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 02:05 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Terriic story! I'll be waiting for the epilogue!

Reviewer: Chanel #5 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 12:43 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

thankyou for sharing that fantastic story!!!

Reviewer: Chakal Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/03/2006 - 12:04 am Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Gah, I'm sad to see this one go, definitely. But I don't think a great story such as this could have had a sweeter or more perfect ending! I'll be awaiting the epilogue! Congrats, dear!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 11:54 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Ah, that was a nice sweet ending. looking forward to the eppy.

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:22 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

Aww, that was sweet! So very glad there will be an epilogue! :)

Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/02/2006 - 10:15 pm Title: Ch 22 - Happy at last

That was so great! and so sweet. I'm glad there is gonna be an epilogue because I'm still craving more.

Reviewer: Dirktavian Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/29/2006 - 04:39 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Too bad-- It's so sad when one builds up expectations of how a thing is going to go down, that nothing will ever live up to those expectations. I hope Buffy gives him a chance to explain.

Author's Response: Absolutely. You so got that! Yay!

Reviewer: Weeza Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 05:12 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!! OMG, he better have a damn good explanation for this!! *hands on hips, tapping foot* Great story! I can't wait to see how things turn out between them.

Reviewer: Brunettepet Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 03:02 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Just read this from the beginning and I wanted to thank you for taking such care with the story and characters. The dialogue is realistic and snappy, and the characters are smart and delightful to read. The strong friendship between William and Buffy has been believable, and their attraction and subsequent romance was well paced. The young love theme is well realized, including roller coaster emotions and lust addled encounters. You're peppering in a lot of humor between these two, and it's fun to read. This latest twist was inevitable - if there's no conflict, there's really no plot.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this wonderful review. It's always a big thrill to gain new readers. To be reviewed so highly as well is a huge bonus. I hope you enjoy the end of the story.

Reviewer: Laura Liz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 10:03 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

not fun...fix it!

Reviewer: Brat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 09:22 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Trouble in paradise...damn that Dru. Unless you're evil and had Spike really kissing her...lol. Great twist!

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 07:49 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Poor Buffy! And Spike's hands on Dru's waist doesn't support his she was kissing me and I wasn't into it. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: SpikeLover213 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 02:03 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

holy crap! whyyyy???? more plz? ^.^

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/28/2006 - 12:25 am Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

can't say that i'm surprised that happened. loved it though. feel bad for buffy. drusilla is one mean homewrecker. i really cant' stand her. anyway, post soon. loved it.

Reviewer: jennybean Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 11:20 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Darn it! Buffy should know Dru's probably up to no good (at least I hope).

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 11:12 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

I knew that HoBag would screw everything up. And now poor Buffy won't let Spike explain. I know he would've pushed here away and spat out her nasty old kiss if Buffy would of come bay just 1 second later. I know he would of done that. So now we gonna have big time angst while hobag laughs her ass off at Buffy and Spikes pain? Maybe while she's laughing so hard, she won't see the big mack truck barrelling down the road just as she steps out and smaking her into a bug spattered hood ornament while taking her far far away from Sunnydale. I hope Spike and Buffy talk soon, surely Buffy knows what a manipulative bitch Dru is and will believe Spike in the long run? More please. It's most excellent!

Reviewer: sara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 10:14 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

dammit, why did you have to go and do that for? i hate spike right now, even if drusilla did start the kiss, he should have pushed her away the second it happened. please, make it better soon.

Reviewer: jennifer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 10:05 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

ohhhhhhhhh how mean! of course, things can never go right for those two, not matter what 'universe' it's in! :)

Reviewer: Suzee Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 09:42 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Not to copy gypsy_jin or give you too many reviews for this chapter..but I felt like that too...but I still say an update is necessary ;-) and hey, at least its finally being someone other than me being evil ;)

Author's Response: Too many reviews? There is such a thing as too many reviews?

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 07/27/2006 - 09:26 pm Title: Ch 20 - The perfect moment that wasn't

Oh no....that's horrible! I hope Spike catches up tp her. Don't just let her walk away. Update soon please!

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