
Date: 12/28/2013 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute and hot, even on a reread.

Date: 09/16/2012 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this! Hot and sweet!
Date: 11/14/2011 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Have no cash to buy a house? Don't worry, because it's available to get the credit loans to solve such problems. Thence take a car loan to buy all you need.

Date: 07/24/2011 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I very much like what you wrote here and not just the sex but what could be an actual good plot twist with the hole claim thing and Angelus finding out about it.

Date: 06/29/2010 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
satisfying in all the right ways! loved the detail of spike's reaction to her affectionate touches.

Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yep she told him and he is a bloody poof and peaches to understand or even listen . the story is grat relay like it

Date: 10/17/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
You probably get this reaction to your fiction a lot so I know I risk sounding prosaic here, but all my addled brain can think to say about this incredibly sexy story is WOW!!!!!

Date: 09/30/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, that was excellent!!! Nice ending, too--I like the sunshine bit with Dru, very clever. Got to love the steamy Spuffy...made all the better with claiming!!! :-)

Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was amazing! LOL...

Date: 04/18/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome!

Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories MP, they always ALWAYS make me reach for a ciggie! :D

Date: 04/08/2006 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
*gg* Buffy can be glad that Spike hadn't already bitten her as a read before she change. That would have been bad... imaging growing in size when someone has his teeth in you.. nasty wound ;-) Instead he found her neck. Guh, this was hot! Loved the end: Spike and Buffy claiming one another and Angel discovering Spike is gone and smelling them. : BTW: Do you have a LJ? I didn't find it.

Date: 04/06/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so good. i loved it. cant wait to read more of ur stuff. thanx for wtiting the story.

Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a really hot pwp, but i think it would be awesome carried on into a story. Just so we can see how angelus deals with the situation and everything, plus the scoobies.
great job :)

Date: 04/06/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1
please please please dont leave it here

Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Told you my William was going to eat the Sunshine all up."
- - Ha. HA! Oh that Dru; that was a funny one.

Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet , short and fun. Thanks.

Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mary this was so good I'm leaving two reviews. Great imagination and sweet love scenes. Nice job!

Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mary that was freakin great!!!!!! I will never sing you are my sunshine again without thinking of this..

Date: 04/05/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was great. Nice use of that episode to make it Spuffy.

Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Great episode re-write! I loved the ending, especially Dru's closing line.

Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha, that's what he gets. This was a much better ending to that episode. I've only really seen the whole thing once because I really didn't care all that much for it, but I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure how rat Buffy ended up at the factory though. Good work=).