Date: 12/28/2013 - 09:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Cute and hot, even on a reread.
[Report This]Date: 09/16/2012 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love this! Hot and sweet!
Date: 11/14/2011 - 08:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Have no cash to buy a house? Don't worry, because it's available to get the credit loans to solve such problems. Thence take a car loan to buy all you need.
[Report This]Date: 07/24/2011 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I very much like what you wrote here and not just the sex but what could be an actual good plot twist with the hole claim thing and Angelus finding out about it.
[Report This]Date: 06/29/2010 - 03:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
satisfying in all the right ways! loved the detail of spike's reaction to her affectionate touches.
[Report This]Date: 02/05/2007 - 12:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yep she told him and he is a bloody poof and peaches to understand or even listen . the story is grat relay like it
[Report This]Date: 10/17/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
You probably get this reaction to your fiction a lot so I know I risk sounding prosaic here, but all my addled brain can think to say about this incredibly sexy story is WOW!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 09/30/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter 1
Ooh, that was excellent!!! Nice ending, too--I like the sunshine bit with Dru, very clever. Got to love the steamy Spuffy...made all the better with claiming!!! :-)
[Report This]Date: 04/19/2006 - 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was amazing! LOL...
[Report This]Date: 04/18/2006 - 02:22 am Title: Chapter 1
That was awesome!
[Report This]Date: 04/15/2006 - 03:08 am Title: Chapter 1
I love your stories MP, they always ALWAYS make me reach for a ciggie! :D
[Report This]Date: 04/08/2006 - 06:00 am Title: Chapter 1
*gg* Buffy can be glad that Spike hadn't already bitten her as a read before she change. That would have been bad... imaging growing in size when someone has his teeth in you.. nasty wound ;-) Instead he found her neck. Guh, this was hot! Loved the end: Spike and Buffy claiming one another and Angel discovering Spike is gone and smelling them. : BTW: Do you have a LJ? I didn't find it.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 - 10:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
that was so good. i loved it. cant wait to read more of ur stuff. thanx for wtiting the story.
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 - 08:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
this was a really hot pwp, but i think it would be awesome carried on into a story. Just so we can see how angelus deals with the situation and everything, plus the scoobies.
great job :)
[Report This]Date: 04/06/2006 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter 1
please please please dont leave it here
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Told you my William was going to eat the Sunshine all up."
- - Ha. HA! Oh that Dru; that was a funny one.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sweet , short and fun. Thanks.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mary this was so good I'm leaving two reviews. Great imagination and sweet love scenes. Nice job!
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 02:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
Mary that was freakin great!!!!!! I will never sing you are my sunshine again without thinking of this..
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
Wow that was great. Nice use of that episode to make it Spuffy.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:58 am Title: Chapter 1
Great episode re-write! I loved the ending, especially Dru's closing line.
[Report This]Date: 04/05/2006 - 10:45 am Title: Chapter 1
Ha, that's what he gets. This was a much better ending to that episode. I've only really seen the whole thing once because I really didn't care all that much for it, but I really enjoyed this. I'm not sure how rat Buffy ended up at the factory though. Good work=).