Reviews For His Little Wife
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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2014 - 06:37 pm Title: Epilogue

Cute story. Some of the plot moved a bit too fast, some elements were a bit far-fetched, and there are a lot of grammar/spelling errors, but you have lots of wonderful ideas and have promise as a writer.

Reviewer: Misha Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/23/2009 - 07:38 pm Title: Epilogue

That was sweet.

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/08/2009 - 08:38 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part

The story has promise, but you keep sliding back and forth between past tense and present tense.

As the taxi pulled up, Buffy looked back...

Sliding into the back of the taxi, she tells the driver...

It is very distracting.

Reviewer: IT Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 09:50 pm Title: Epilogue

Great fic! I loved it. I'm sad to see it finish, though. There are still some unanswered questions - what about Dru? Why did she pop up at the end?

I'd love to see more!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 05:05 pm Title: Epilogue

Loved it!

Reviewer: ScoobyDoo Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 04:54 pm Title: Epilogue

Great story. You MUST do a sequel!!

Reviewer: JO Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/06/2009 - 08:08 am Title: Epilogue

Awww! Great finish to a great tale ,really enjoyed reading this, i never forgot about it through the long wait for updates. It wasn't easy, but nothing worthwhile ever is, tee hee. Thank you for letting us all read it.

Reviewer: v4viper Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 04/05/2009 - 11:31 pm Title: Epilogue

Thank you for finishing this story it didn't take it long to get back into the story I enjoyed very much

Reviewer: Linda Barrett Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/14/2007 - 05:15 pm Title: Till Death Do Us Part

I really enjoy reading This story. Please continue the story. I would love to know what happen next.

Reviewer: mrs.darling Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/06/2007 - 07:41 pm Title: Suprise

I am so confused I mean the story is awesome! And I really want to read more but you havent had an update since January and it says that this piece is completed but its not....

or is it...

I am so confused! Are you going to finish it or not?

Author's Response: I'm sure that I answered this question somewhere before... Not sure where though. Basically there was one chapter left to go, wrapping up the story and it didn't have a happy ending *ducks* But my muse has told me that there is another story there and that wrapping it all up would be bad! So, yeah it's kinda finished, but there will be more, only it is a whole new story.

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 05:49 pm Title: Suprise

Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 02:57 pm Title: Suprise

well this is getting more complicated and dark isn't it. Can't wait for more! Love it!

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 11:32 am Title: Suprise

Oh great, hoe bag alert!!! Great update, can't wait for more!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/24/2007 - 09:06 am Title: Suprise

No please don't take Spike from Buffy.
Would like to see more of what the Angel and Dru contectionis though. More please.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 10:35 pm Title: Fire

good update

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 08:46 pm Title: Fire

Loved it! More please!

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:11 pm Title: Fire

So glad this is on the update wagon again. More please! Love it.

Reviewer: J Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:06 pm Title: Fire

I was just thinking to myself yesterday about what happened to this story. glad to see it updated! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 04:07 pm Title: Fire

More please did they get Katie or not.

Reviewer: M Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:44 pm Title: Fire

Um, either I missed something or Spike is going to make a big mistake cause somehow I don't think the murderer would walk out without his trophies.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/15/2006 - 09:47 pm Title: Determined

So glad you are laying the ground work for Angel rescuing his daughter, but feeling disattached from her. Sounds like (I hope) that evil kid murdering trudy waste of skin is gonna be put away or taken away once and for all, with all three, Angel, Buffy and Spike after him (not to mention the FBI enforce) he's bound to be caught soon, I just hope Katie doesn't suffer any trauma through all of this. More please, I'm on the edge of my seat! Thanks!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:50 pm Title: Determined

Great chapter! Loved it!

Reviewer: smlcspike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 06:38 pm Title: Determined

Love it. more please.

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/11/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: Determined

good update

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/05/2006 - 11:24 pm Title: Brothers?

Glad that the brothers are getting things out in the open. Spike really showed his trust of Angel by telling him the truth about MI6. No they need to work together to save the baby! more please.

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