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Date: 11/22/2013 - 04:10 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Still very, very hot.

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Date: 01/03/2013 - 06:41 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Wow, so hot, I'm throbbing.

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Date: 08/31/2010 - 11:41 am Title: A Little Light Reading

Liked ur story.

Reviewer: vampsNslayers101 Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 02/24/2009 - 08:42 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Awesome one shot. I think that you should write a sequel to this. Keep up the great work.

Dani

Reviewer: buffymon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/30/2006 - 04:12 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

wow..that was...wow
I think i have to go to the library tomorrow

Reviewer: Pipergirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/19/2006 - 01:24 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Whoa... I really have work to do, but...
Man, this really took precedence.
VERY hot fic--loved it!

Reviewer: AbbyLou Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

LOVED IT!!!

Reviewer: Darling_Violetta Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 05:11 am Title: A Little Light Reading

great! Please continue this!!! it would make a fantastic story. heres hoping!
tara

Reviewer: Heidi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/15/2006 - 02:08 am Title: A Little Light Reading

Wow.... That was hot.
Really loved the chapter. Hope you'll continue with this.

Reviewer: cordykitten Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 04:44 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

I love the start of this one.. That was bad luck that Buffy was trapped there; and she managed to trap Spike too. The fire alarm was a quick reaction and did give them more time :) A hot begin. And because it isn't marked finished yet I hope we'll get more.

Reviewer: SBLuver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2006 - 01:06 am Title: A Little Light Reading

Ooh, this is a fun story! I soo wanna read more. I love how it's kind of light but still very well written. Excellent job! Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:47 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Well, wasn't that just the best fire drill ever. Damn, why didn't we have a room like that in my library in high school. Possibly for reasons similar to that. And Buffy seems to have made a new friend already. Quite the pair. Looking forward to more. Marvelous start.

Reviewer: Ari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:41 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Cool you didn't make Buffy a virgin in this, I'm assuming anyway. And she's kind of loose right? Not Faith level slutty, but enough to make her drop trou without much fanfare and resistance, .because otherwise? It's not going to make much sense characterization wise if you continue with this story. Sorry, bit of a stickler when it comes to characterization -- and I do prefer even fantasy AU Buffy and Spike to resemble their tv alter egos to a certain degree (yes even in PWP smut fics).

I mean no offense but even though I think you have potential (usually IMO the majority of newcomers are beyond salvageable) your writing, including the porn, does need some work. If you haven't read her Spike/Buffy fics already, I suggest visiting nautibitz.com and checking out her porny fantasy AU offerings.

namely " Older": http://www.nautibitz.com/fic/older/index.html

and "Crash and Burn http://nautibitz.com/fic/cb/crash01.html

If you're willing and interested in improving your skills, I think it might help to do a little compare and contrast with stories written by someone who has more experience with this kind of fic. :)

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 11:28 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Damn. Amazing chapter. Very much looking forward to more. ; )

Reviewer: blondiebear Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 08:21 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

loved it!!! wish i got greeted that way on MY first day of school!!!! lol. post again soon.

Reviewer: Crystal Pegasus Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 07:16 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

I wish Spike would've gone to my highschool (sigh). Totally hot opening chap - cant' wait for more.

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 05:53 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Holy shit, that was hott. please update soon
Thanx

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 05:27 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

Wow! Great chapter!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2006 - 04:52 pm Title: A Little Light Reading

terrific story so far please continue

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