
Date: 11/05/2013 - 12:59 am Title: Heat
Really beautiful.
My only note is to point out that you seem to have a bad habit of using the phrase "would of." This is incorrect; it should be "would have." I have noticed this in a couple of your other fics.

Date: 10/07/2006 - 01:34 pm Title: Heat
Aptly titled piece. May need to borrow one of Spike's ciggies.

Date: 10/07/2006 - 12:13 am Title: Heat
eeeek i loved it you magnificent bastard! ;) Im so happy i got this before going to bed, sweet dreams indeed for me!!! Hope i talk to you soon, love you
xxx
Linz

Date: 10/06/2006 - 09:07 pm Title: Heat
Ooh, that was hot! (teehee...yeah, I'm probably the first person to say that....right...) but truly, very awesome!!! just the right amount of plot mixed with the just the right amount of smut :-) plus, very well written!

Date: 10/06/2006 - 08:30 pm Title: Heat
Damn, that was hot...lol! I was all giddy to see something else from you. You do have a way with words. Loved it=)

Date: 10/06/2006 - 07:50 pm Title: Heat
I loved how each moment seemed transitory within the story. A very well written and HOT scene

Date: 10/06/2006 - 05:25 pm Title: Heat
cute....or better yet...HOT!!! lol. very hot. great job.

Date: 10/06/2006 - 04:50 pm Title: Heat
Steamy, just the way I like it.

Date: 10/06/2006 - 03:29 pm Title: Heat
Nice...very,very nice :)

Date: 10/06/2006 - 03:28 pm Title: Heat
Lovely ficlet! Great characterization of Buffy and Spike. I don't think Spike's personailty would have changed all that much had the show gone on and had him shanshu, so I like that his new humanity hasn't changed him other than physically in the fic. :) Great job!

Date: 10/06/2006 - 03:09 pm Title: Heat
Perfect !... and HOT !! :)