
Date: 12/23/2013 - 07:21 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Super cute, even on a reread. Only a few errors.

Date: 06/07/2012 - 05:20 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Very sweet and the sex scenes very hot.

Date: 08/12/2008 - 05:57 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
i love happy endings... :)

Date: 12/25/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Aww... I really loved this story. It was adorable. :)

Date: 01/21/2007 - 08:20 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Nice story. I enjoyed reading and watching their relationship develop.You write Spike so well. thanks

Date: 11/22/2006 - 10:03 pm Title: Chapter Eleven
I really like this story and I am fully behind wherever and whatever your motivations and ultimate reasoning behind William's behavior is, but I have to say here, at this point in the tale, that he is being very stalkerish and showing a real lack of respect for Buffy as an individual with her own wants and needs. He is just so selfish right now. A more appropriate response to her skittishness would be to woo her, but instead he browbeats her and demands she respond to his attentions as he desires rather than as she feels herself. And I understand how she would be put off by the whole 'taken in a hallway' without even dating, and he seems so inconsiderate of her need to be dated and treated like she is special and not just somehow fated to be with him because he believes it to be so. I know there's also the stepsibling issue and her past with men that stand in her way, but he just is showing such a lack of respect for her needs and issues here. Now, I'm not complaining about you writing him that way, it makes for an interesting story. I'm just saying he's being a jerk and then turning around and laying his jerkiness on HER, telling her she is being a child and running away etc when she tries to distance herself and find her own mind about all of this. It's so 'don't worry about what you think and feel little lady, I've already thought it all out for you and will tell you how to feel and what to do, you don't need to worry your pretty little head about it at all'. I guess what I'm saying is he's crossing lines here for me, and I want to smack him right now. Keep up the great work, I appreciate the way you keep writing all these stories and updating them frequently. I can always rely upon you for a good new tale to keep me going. Happy Thanksgiving. :-)

Date: 11/07/2006 - 07:21 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Aww, that was sweet.. And I'm always a sucker for Caveman Will.. Yummy.. lol.

Date: 11/03/2006 - 03:26 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
How did I miss this last chapter?? lol, I'm such a ditz. Well, anyway! Loved it! Great story. :)

Date: 10/25/2006 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Great story. I really enjoyed this one. Thanks!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 06:17 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
How sweet! I just loved it!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Really going to miss this fic! Loved it!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 05:02 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Oooo!!!! So awesome! I loved it very much!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 03:48 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Two stories finished? Indeed.. you were busy.
Awe (the flashback) that was what Joyce meant (saw) back then and thought if they could be together. Water under the bridge, huh? They have come indeed a long way since then. And the time, this last year, Buffy took it to grow up a bit. Good they are together now :)

Date: 10/25/2006 - 03:42 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Oh my... this was truly wonderful! I absolutely love it, like everything else you have written. Thank you so much for sharing!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Thanks for the great story! I loved it :)

Date: 10/25/2006 - 10:10 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
absolutely loved it ... you did another fantastic job

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:37 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
WOW, that was a great chapter. Love the banner. I think that I may have neglected to mention that previously.
I also love the Summer flashback ... they really did have a connection early on. AND early on parental approval. Makes everything fall into place.
I love the way you really wrapped this great story up. Gotta admit ... earlier on, I could not see a happy road for this couple. That is why you are the author and I am the reader.
Thank you for yet another GREAT story from you. You are the best!!!

Date: 10/25/2006 - 08:00 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Wonderful fic and I love the banner.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 04:13 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
It was a lovely and heart-warming tale !

Date: 10/25/2006 - 04:03 am Title: Chapter One
Good Story, as usual. Really enjoyed reading this, light & easy to read :)

Date: 10/25/2006 - 04:02 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Awww... what a sweet ending to the story! Loved the flashback. Thanks for the entertaining read! ~ I like the pretty banner! :D

Date: 10/25/2006 - 01:00 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Awwwww

Date: 10/25/2006 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
Another great story. You absolutely spoil us with the daily updates. I always look forward to your stories!!
Can't wait for the next one to start.

Date: 10/25/2006 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
They're so cute--and I loved the little flashback; it really showed their relationship even before everything that happened at the start of this story (and I swear I had a better point than that makes it sound like)......anyway, it's 1am and I really shouldn't be talking or typing or anything so I'll shush now and go to sleep--but I really do love this story (if me making a banner for it didn't already hint at the fact ;))

Date: 10/24/2006 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter Eighteen-Epilogue
It was a wonderful story-- I know you told the story you set out to tell, but I'm very sad to see it end so soon. Loved it.