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Reviewer: ScarlettDuck Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/30/2012 - 04:07 am Title: Epilogue: All Roads

This is an extremely lovely story. I love the way you craft the intricat plot, and grab the reader from the beginning and keep us sucked in. Characterizations are so spot on, especially Spike. Zack and Rosie are superb original characters, kudos.

My only big criticism is there are some words spelled very wrong, some really strange turns of phrase and some 50cent words that are (or sometimes maybe just seem to be) used wildly incorrectly. Also, there are many passages with a strange set of descriptive phrases that don't seem to make any sense at all. I am pretty well-read, and I honestly couldn't make heads or tails out of some passages. Made it extremely difficult some parts of the tail, but I ended up skimming theses parts, and I hope I correctly guessed the gist of them. On the flip side, there were quite a lot of words that MANY authors use wrongly that you got right, so that's a plus.

Overall, I enjoyed it, even if I didn't always love all the turns (like what happened to Buffy, ultimately). You have a real gift for plot, characters & dialogue -- I hope you are still writing!

Reviewer: laindenver Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 06/23/2009 - 12:31 pm Title: Epilogue: All Roads

This is a fantastic story! Perfect blend of romance, angst and humor. I've read most of your stories in the past few days- I can be a little obsessive- and have loved everything you've written. I really feel like you stay true to the original characters. Please keep writing so people like me can keep reading.

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Date: 07/13/2008 - 03:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings

Loved that bet, more please.

Reviewer: Kathryn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 05/18/2008 - 05:45 pm Title: Prologue - Dream a Little Dream

I have always loved this story and I always wondered about its title. So I just broke it down and I must say I am impressed. The title is quit witty, I admire your creativity.

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 01:40 pm Title: Epilogue: All Roads

ow its over, I loved it and wonder if she will ever meet back up with her family by would love to see more of the LA and Spike Buffy, with or without Angel,

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 01:17 pm Title: Chapter Fifty: Dance with the Devil

OH so they finally mated to one another.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 11:43 am Title: Chapter Forty-Nine: Here We Found Plutus, The Great Enemy

So I wonder if Buffy will really ever find them again.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 10:52 am Title: Chapter Forty-Eight: All I Need

nope I guess it wasn't, oh and I loved the hot chocolate plocie.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 09:47 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven: Bring on the Rain

Oh I hope Xander changes some tomorrow.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 07:19 am Title: Chapter Forty-Six: Ravages of Spirit

Oh I love Spikes little speech, and wonder what will happen in Sunnydale.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 06:41 am Title: Chapter Forty-Five: Tell Me Something Good

Oh that was great with Spikes singing.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 06:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four: The House's Fall

So we souled Angel and dusted Darla and I loved the little girls laid talk with her father.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 05:40 am Title: Chapter Forty-Three: Post Hoc Ergo Propter Hoc

Oh I can't wait to see what happens after the curse.

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Date: 09/18/2007 - 05:03 am Title: Chapter Forty-Two: Tub on a Flowered Mat

Oh I wonder what she will say.

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Date: 09/17/2007 - 07:30 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings (2)

oh I love it.

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Date: 09/17/2007 - 06:35 pm Title: Chapter Forty-One: Silver Satin Wings

Oh so looks like they made up.

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Date: 09/17/2007 - 06:00 pm Title: Chapter Forty: Deliverance

OH I don't think Spike will really hate her

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Date: 09/17/2007 - 05:29 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Nine: The Three Great Troubles

So Tara is there now, did she not go to England with Willow and GIles.

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Date: 09/17/2007 - 05:25 am Title: Chapter Thirty-Eight: Devil in the Belfry

interesting fight

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 08:05 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Seven: Forgiveness

So they talked well sort off.

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:42 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Six: Sacrament

I like that little girl.

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Five: Morning Song

Oh I hope they can get through this,

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 07:07 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Four: The Tower of Learning

Oh I loved Cordy in this.

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:43 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Three: Hello

Oh thank you Zangy,

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Date: 09/16/2007 - 06:27 pm Title: Chapter Thirty-Two: Lasciatemi Moiré

OH no please let her be alright

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