Reviews For DIY singing
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Reviewer: Jayne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/05/2011 - 11:30 am Title: ONE

I actually like this story, but the startling amount of run-on sentences really broke the mood.

Reviewer: platinumgoddess Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/18/2007 - 04:37 pm Title: ONE

That was cute!!!!

Reviewer: Squid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/01/2006 - 02:00 pm Title: ONE

That was really cute. A sequel would be great.

Author's Response: Thanks! i'm working on it, taking a long time tho!

Reviewer: Joyful Dayz Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/29/2006 - 01:30 pm Title: ONE

Beautiful lyrics! I'd like to hear them sing them. I also liked it that for once Willow's spell went right. Maybe because Tara was involved this time? :) Double spacing between speakers would make it easier to read.

Author's Response: thanks, although i'm pretty sure that some of the lyrics are a bit weak and are better written than sung but thnaks. i'll bear in mind the double spacing thing

Reviewer: astrodex Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2006 - 01:42 pm Title: ONE

It's a good story. The formatting and scant use of punctuation made it a little difficult to read. You would really benefit from a beta. Someone to point out when you use "of" instead of "off" and other spelling or word usage issues that will not be caught by spellcheck. They seem like little things but they can destroy a great story by making it hard to read. But the story was definitely worth the read.

Author's Response: i do actually have a beta:D i may have to get another one to check it out and repost. thanks though

Reviewer: Lynda Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/12/2006 - 12:20 am Title: ONE

That was really funny and the song were beautifully written.

Author's Response: Thank ye v much!:D had fun writng it:D

Reviewer: Pari Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 06:11 pm Title: ONE

I started reading the first chapter got a couple of paragraphs and stopped, this needs to be formatted better, with proper spacing, it all bleeds in together and makes it difficult to read. And for me just gives me a headache trying to decipher, who's talking and what's going on.

Author's Response: i have had this beta'd by the way! this is just how i write i'm not used to formatting it for the internet so how it appears to me on my computor isn't the same as how it appears on the site.

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 06:07 pm Title: ONE

sequal please..I loved the style and content. many thanks for a lovely story

Author's Response: many thanks for reading and reviewing:D trying to write a sequal

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 04:38 pm Title: ONE

sequel please

Author's Response: im trying i really am may take a while to figure what could happen next:D

Reviewer: *bite me* Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 09:27 am Title: ONE

sequal???yes plz! this story was great , plus lyrics are always good! Thanx

Author's Response: he he thanks. any ideas for a sequal?? What do people think should happen next??

Reviewer: klylu Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 11/11/2006 - 08:43 am Title: ONE

that was good! i do appreciate the lyrics a lot, and that's something cuz i usually skip them... ! lol
for once, willow's playing with magic wasn't totally irking (maybe cuz it turned out well)
biting buffy is always hot! (ok... if i had spike, i would do that too... lol)
:D

Author's Response: Thanks i was worried bout the lyrics a bit. Biting good yes:D

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