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Reviewer: jt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 07:26 pm Title: Crossing the Line

Doesn't bode well for Elizabeth if Burbank wants her brought to him. Hope William intervenes. We all know how despicable Burbank is. Looking forward to next update. You are doing such a good job with this story. Always look forward to it.

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 06:25 pm Title: Crossing the Line

Oh man. Spike's going to go ballistic when he finds out. Loved the update!

Reviewer: jamies_lady Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/14/2007 - 05:55 pm Title: Crossing the Line

i hope someone does something to that man!!
what will spike say?
looking forward to more
oh forgot to say really enjoyed it

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 08:32 pm Title: And sliding deeper still...

Ah, it's just like a cold shower, isn't it? I have a sneaking suspicion that Buffy might not be entirely safe if Spike left camp...particularly with that no-good officer out to get Spike. But at least it will give Buffy time to sort out her feelings. Great stuff, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 05:08 pm Title: And sliding deeper still...

Oh Elizabeth had an epiphany :) She's falling in love *g*

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 02:18 am Title: And sliding deeper still...

Thank you for the update I cannot get enough of this story. Really glad they've both realised how they feel about the other but with William being sent away, I don't have a good feeling about Elizabeth being left behind (if she is). I am perched on the edge of my seat waiting for more because I LOVE IT.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/13/2007 - 12:38 am Title: And sliding deeper still...

Great chapter, I can't wait to read the next one.

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 11:31 pm Title: And sliding deeper still...

oooo some interesting revelations in that chapter....hope you update again soon:):) i'm loving it

Reviewer: Kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 11:27 pm Title: And sliding deeper still...

Thank you for the surprise chapter ... I was just thinking about this story and lo and behold you posted!!! Lucky me!!

I love that Elizabeth realizes early on that she is falling in love with William instead of doing the whole denial thing. This is refreshing. It's going to make these following chapters much more interesting I think.

Great writing ... love, love, love this story !!!!!

You go girl !!!!

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 09/12/2007 - 11:22 pm Title: And sliding deeper still...

HELL YES IM SO GLAD THAT SHES FINALLY ADMITTED TO HERSELF THAT SHES FALLING FOR HIM!! I LOVE THIS STORY AND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE!! THANX

Reviewer: Xela Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 08:41 pm Title: A Changing Current

Wow, that was a flurry of chapters and happenings. I'm glad to see they're each starting to see each other as waaaaay more than just 'the enemy'. Beautiful.

Reviewer: ksd Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 10:15 pm Title: A Changing Current

This just gets better and better ... your muse must be on fire !!! I can picture every move that they are making, the environment and the emotions. She seems to recognize that he is an unwilling pawn in this war (as most individuals are). It is apparent that he regrets his involvement to this point. I'm anxious to see how he handles things in these next chapters ... one a day, right? (kidding)(but hopeful)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 08:01 pm Title: A Changing Current

ah, the river again. I wonder if that was all William was going to say, or he had more to say.

Reviewer: Darkrivertempest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 05:12 pm Title: A Changing Current

Gah! That was so awesome! I'm so glad you started writing this again, I missed it so much! Poor Elizabeth...such a confused mess right now. It's almost like Stockholm syndrome...falling for or trusting one's captor. Let's see how far it goes!

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 02:56 pm Title: A Changing Current

Enjoyed :)
I liked the chapter; it seems as if Elizabeth and William were able to talk. They live in dangerous times. And their background (the killing of Elizabeth's family) doesn't make it easier.

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 07:35 am Title: A Changing Current

As I wait with baited breath, my every prayer was answered! Loved the story development and the depth of the characters is definitely refreshing. Loved it!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 02:30 am Title: A Changing Current

Great chapter - I absolutely love this.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 01:49 am Title: A Changing Current

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: Pixiecorn Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 01:44 am Title: A Changing Current

awesome update:)......cant wait for the next one

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/29/2007 - 01:41 am Title: A Changing Current

LOVED IT!!! PLEASE UPDATE AS SOON AS U CAN, I CANT WAIT TO READ MORE. THANX

Reviewer: jjt Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 11:56 pm Title: A Changing Current

doing such a good job with this story. I know William's enemy is going to do something about the relationship between the two. Looking forward to next update. Keep up the great work

Reviewer: V Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 05:03 pm Title: Friends and Enemies

I have really enjoyed this story thus far and I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: mag-rose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 06:42 am Title: Friends and Enemies

Now Buffy has made an enemy of Lt Burbank as well as William! It doesn't bode well for the pair of them.
I hope you update soon.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 01:50 am Title: One Stormy Night

Poor Spike. Never good to be infected during that time in the world. Gotta wonder what he's running from, though. Always love these period pieces.

Reviewer: Lacey Marsters Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/28/2007 - 01:35 am Title: Friends and Enemies

Great chapter, I can't wait to read more.

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