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Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 05:23 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

good update

Reviewer: annefan Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 04:20 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

“I’ve got a girl to see about.” Great chapter, cant wait for more!

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Date: 12/09/2006 - 02:44 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

again i know buffy isn't gonna make it easy on him. she probably won't even believe that he's changed in all of one evening. and he's got some explaining and apologizing to do to harmony. great job. loved it lots. more soon please.

Reviewer: blondiebear Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 02:36 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

okay...i forgot to leave a review for this chapter so here it goes.....wow. spike is an asshole but at least he knows it and wants to change. i don't think boffy is going to make it easy for him but that's what change is about. it takes time. loved it lots. now i can read the next chapter....

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 02:27 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

Wonderful chapter! Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 02:07 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

Love love love love the chapter! Looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: turnedbyspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:42 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

I don't get it...the joke thing. Am I missing something? Excellent chapter anyway, kinda harrowing to see how dismal his life may have turned out. Time to go get Buffy!!!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

YAY! I'm so excited! I can't wait to see how he goes about telling Buffy how he feels. Whee! Good chapter! =D

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/09/2006 - 12:10 am Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

YAY IM SO HAPPY HES GOING TO GO AND TELL HER HOW HE FEELS!!!! i LOVE this story so much and am SOOOOOO happy u updated, i cant believe that buffy was going to get married to riley and that spike jsut sat there and let it happy. also i cant believe that he admitted that he loves her and i hope he goes and sees her and makes everything right. also i hope that he makes things up to harmony as well and that everything works out welll and that buffy and spike are happy.. please update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read wat spike does next. thanx

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 11:39 pm Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

I can't wait to read about this next part! I'm sure Buffy won't believe him right away. He still has a while to go! Update soon please!

Reviewer: readergirrl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

Oh, I love it -- you can't update fast enought for me! I am greedy for this one. Can't wait to see Spike woo the girl...

Reviewer: DelicateFlower Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 11:31 pm Title: Chapter Four: Ghost Of Women Future

This story is wonderful! It is the best holiday Spuffy I have read so far!

Reviewer: gypsy_jin Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 09:18 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Wow, poor Harmony! I hope Spike can find a way to make her feel better. Good chapter! :)

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Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:53 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Seems to me, that this is a fantasy fic, hense, non-canon, and well, FANTASY. For all anyone knows Tara could be a totally different Tara from the show, and even if it isn't, character portrayal is the author's choice!

Once again, FANTASY. They are fictional characters, at least to most people.

Reviewer: PennyDrdful Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:05 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

"Spreading her arms wide, Harmony the Ghost sang, 'Ghost of Women Present!'
'Oh fuck me,' Spike muttered..."

Excellent portrayal. I can picture Harmony doing that so easily, as well as Spike's reaction. One bit of characterization that bothered me a bit however, was Tara's. She seems a bit pushy and judgmental, which is rather the opposite from her function and personality in the series. Perhaps placing a character such as Cordelia in the role that Tara fills in this fic would be a better choice, simply because her character is much more demanding and confrontational. Just a thought.

Looking forward to the next ghostly visit.

Reviewer: Im_bloody_English Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 11:35 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

I had myself a good laugh over that 'fuck me' .. 'nope, not here for that' part - too funny. I forgot to menitoin too I love the title you chose for the fic, it's brilliant.
Glad to see Spike is getting his attitude knocked down and seeing himself and the present woman in the perspective that he should. Poor Buffy. I really feel bad for her. Let's hope Spike can make himself worthy of her when it comes time. Thank you for sharing this fic, I'm truly enjoying it. Kuddos sweety, can't wait for the next chapter... I bet it's going to be a real shocker.

Reviewer: Nighgirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 10:15 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

What a heartbreaking beautiful spuffy version of a Christmas Carol. I luv it!

Reviewer: gotkona Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:54 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

That was very powerful. I hope it gets to him.

Reviewer: Cobweb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:34 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Really enjoying the journey you're taking Spike on with this. Great update, great story, great writing, great writer :oD More soon please!

Reviewer: Caroline Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 07:30 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Excellent chapter - I really liked this idea of a ghost allowing Spike to see himself through his own eyes , but as a silent,horrified , sad presence.
What a lesson learned !
The scene where he watches Buffy is very moving .
And that he knows now what she thinks of him - and that it is the truth.

I love what you're doing here.:)

Reviewer: luxferi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 02:40 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Again, excellent chapter! I love it!

Reviewer: MidnightGirl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/08/2006 - 01:51 am Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

I love the way the story is playing out. Wonderful chapter!

Reviewer: PhotographyNut Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 11:18 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Loved it! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: SarahandJamesFanatic Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 10:57 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

good update

Reviewer: kw Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 12/07/2006 - 10:24 pm Title: Chapter Three: Ghost of Women Present

Great chapter just like the last two, I really like how he regrets what he did to Harmony. Unfortunately, the vampire never did. I guess Buffy is Future Ghost, look foward to more.

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