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Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 10:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

liked them both feeling each other out a litle when she first arrived at Spikes place. Shes just days from losing William and Spike is 100 plus years of wanting her something was bound to happen but how they hadle it and the choices they make with having any kind of sex will change things.
I was so excited to find you had added more to this story I love your writing.

Author's Response: I am so flattered that you do. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: Sunshine Blind Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

LOL
I loved the scoobies conversation and play by play on where they now think Buffy was. I do not think they realise what they are doing to her and since Buffy isn't really filling them in at all shes kinda to blame here as well.
My heart sinks for Spike fearing the worst for him if he doesn't make he see him for him and not the ghost of his past. If your gonna love William you gotta love who he also becomes.


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Aurorah Borealis Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 09:10 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I did not want this page to end and now I'm panting for more.
I wanted to smack Willow though but I kinda always want to.

Author's Response: lol. Yeah, Willow can be irritating sometimes, can't she? Thanks for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Kiska12 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 08:06 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Hurray...... finally, an update! please continue on with the story... very hot ending

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :-D

Reviewer: Isa Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 07:02 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

“…I just want to pretend for a while,” she sighed, as she kicked the coat away.

I can't believe it!!! How could she?!
Poor Spike...he even let her get away with "Pretending"
cause he loves her.

Thanks for the update...it was a wonderful surprise today☺ I hope the next one will be soon.

Author's Response: Buffy isn't intentionally being cruel; she's just so caught up in her own pain, she isn't stopping to consider Spike's. And you're right -- Spike let her get away with it. He pushed away his anxiety with both hands because he wanted that affection from her, even if it wasn't real. Naturally, there will be repercussions for that later on. Thanks so much for the review. I'm glad you liked the chapter. :-D

Reviewer: cordykitten Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 05:07 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Yup, you answered my question (PPD) on LJ already, TNX :)
So Willow told about her conversation with Angel but to the wrong person (I see why she did because the couldn't talk to Buffy). Willow is better with computer than me; she should have found out via the Internet. ~ Leave it to Tara to think of what had happened (even if she was wrong her); I wonder what Giles knows.
Well coming to think there aren't many people Buffy can talk too these days. Maybe Tara would have an 'open ear' but she's still Willow's girlfriend so maybe not a good choice (she would be torn to tell Willow).
Mmmm didn't expect Buffy to find her way to Spike's crypt. Buffy's I just want to pretend for a while makes me wonder if she 'saw' William there or Spike? Even if the gave him a BJ I'm not sure if she gave it to William .... or to Spike. ~ Loved the update :)

Author's Response: lol. Well, my memory is shot, isn't it? Thanks for the review. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. :-D

Reviewer: Reb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 02:34 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Okay . . . her Buffy-logic is in overdrive this time. I wish easier going for them, but if she won't fully engage, it's going to be the long way 'round. As always. At least they've stopped shouting, for now.

Thank you so much for this. It's been a long wait, but it's awfully satisfying to sink back into it. Keep on doing that thing you do so well, UB. Solid foundation and dizzying spires, that's what you've built here.

Reviewer: Reb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 02:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Okay . . . her Buffy-logic is in overdrive this time. I wish easier going for them, but if she won't fully engage, it's going to be the long way 'round. As always. At least they've stopped shouting, for now.

Thank you so much for this. It's been a long wait, but it's awfully satisfying to sink back into it. Keep on doing that thing you do so well, UB. Solid foundation and dizzying spires, that's what you've built here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :-D

Reviewer: SaundersFrench Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:32 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Yes I do not think Spike could put 2 thoughts together after that. Since it was one of Williams fantasys in the music room I think when she was looking at his eye.
I am looking forward to what unfolds from here. Very much.

Author's Response: I was wondering if anyone would remember that brief little fantasy of William's. Good catch. And thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Popcorn Papoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:24 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Buffy don't say pretend and then say “Tell me you love me,” she whispered around the frantic motion of their mouths. “Tell me you do…”

This is so mean if she then tosses him over. Spike do not let her get away with this.

This was just what I needed today I kept looking for a update.





Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-D

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:01 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

No you cannot get me all steamy on my lunch hour and just end it there nooooooooooo write more write more write more!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm writing, never fear. Thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:00 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I'm just waiting till the moment Buffy confronts her friends and says Listen or back off or something cause you can feel something coming there. Spike do not let her pretend turn the situation around on her or it will blow up in your face on you.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: mozza Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 11:42 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Hot!

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so. :-)

Reviewer: Quetzacoatl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 11:16 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Ha ha ha ha ! In a moment of passion will he call out Elizabeth! I am dying to see the nexy page in this so well done.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're looking forward to it. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: SnowyOwl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 11:13 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

I am nervous on the wording of "pretend" cause pretend is like a dream it only lasts a few moments and then its gone again. I hope Spike won't let her pretend with him and he makes her see it is real.

Author's Response: That word certainly has significance. Thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 11:11 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

It seems like she is taking the lead here I wonder how she will react when Spike responds to her and does not react to being lead so much like William did when they were together.

Author's Response: We'll just have to wait and see, won't we? ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Toni Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Thanks for the update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :-D

Reviewer: Bridget Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 10:32 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Thanks for the update. I hope this is not going to be a rehash of Season 6. Buffy should not be allowed to pretend that she is with William and not Spike when they are one in the same. It is not fair to Spike and he has been hurt enough. I don't mind a little angst but I hope that Buffy is not going to live in the land of denail forever and continue to use Spike for her on purpose. Unfortunately, Spike does not have the strength to say no to Buffy because he loves all of her.

Author's Response: I don't believe in rehashing old issues, so don't worry, this won't be another season six. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 10:30 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

It looks like the gang is starting to see a little that they screwed up even Giles.
I was like yes! be angry at Angel a little for saying anything and then her going to Spike and then not being able to do anything other then see her William in him. Please Buffy don't hurt him.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-D

Reviewer: LoVe Epics Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 10:27 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

This could be either a good or bad thing maybe she will see the William still in Spike or maybe Spike will get hs heart tore out again. Either way I'm addicted and want more.

Author's Response: That's great to hear. Thank you! :-D

Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 09:39 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

She knows he is Spike. She wants William. And despite the kisses, the yearning fulfilled when she touches him and his own disability to deny her, he should have listened well as she murmured:
"I just want to pretend for a while ....."

That word 'pretend' encompasses a whole world of pain for Spike; the hurt he feels in his heart and hands at the moment will pale into comparison. For beneath this veiled moment of passion dwells the stubborn thoughts of the Slayer:

"Of course, Spike wasn’t William. Buffy knew that; she knew he wasn’t a man. He was a demon. He was the thing that ripped and tore, the thing that killed. He was what Drusilla had left behind when she murdered William, and he was nothing to her."

She hates the coat: the coat is Spike. Where do they go, from here?

I love her antagonism , her wilful alienation of the Scoobies. Nice change, that - Buffy not allowing them to influence her actions or make her feel guilty. She is just not letting them in. Her patient concession towards Dawn, though, is touching. Her young sister acts as the non-judgmental buffer between Buffy and the almost accustory persistence of Angel and the Scoobies.

Marvellous chapter.

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Author's Response: I just love reading your reviews. Everything you said is exactly what I was hoping to convey in my writing. You really make me feel as if I am doing the job I set out to do. Thank you. :-D

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 04:36 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Buffy's going to see "him" who? Him - Spike or William? She can't picture Spike but sees William and she wants to "pretend" which is so not good and Spike wants her so badly. It's almost like Spike's duster is his Spikeness. Buffy hates it, removes it and Spike perceives himself to once again be "the stammering moron". Even in Series 7 he tries without his coat but it seems like a bit of a security blanket. Christ he still reads the same books - Buffy has to see him for who he is. She knew she could hurt William please let her see she can hurt Spike but she shouldn't. Rambling again when all I really needed to say was it is masterful work, I love it and you made me cry - again.

Author's Response: You hit the nail on the head -- Spike's duster is, to Buffy, the symbol of Spike. By removing the duster, she's making it easier for her to pretend that she is still with William. Of course, we know that in a way, she *is* still with William. But Buffy still has to learn that lesson. Thanks so much for the review! :-D

Reviewer: Ice_buffy Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 04:14 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Glad that you are back. And again you write the caracters spot on. This is exactly what Buffy would do, use Spike so SHE gets a break from the hurting. I bet after she will kick him in the head and run away, virtue fluttering. I hope not but.... Great update, hope you will be in the mood to write more soon! Now I go back and read again ;)

Author's Response: I'm hoping not to keep you guys waiting so long for the next update. Thank you for the review! :-D

Reviewer: angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 04:09 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

Aw, shit, how bittersweet.
And you´re getting the same results as the original writers: I feel so sorry for Spike although I shouldn´t do that at all. Good work!

Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :-D

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 10/23/2007 - 01:38 am Title: Chapter Forty-Seven

The more things change the more they stay the same, shes still using him just for different reasons this time. I loved it though, very well done and I can't wait for the next installment!.

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-D

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