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Reviewer: sue Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 03:56 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

You took us back to over a century ago, to Victorian England, then we travelled through the years, the bloody years, with Spike. To his first sighting of the Slayer in Sunnydale, U.S.A. A lookalike for his Elizabeth, he thought. Next stop, several years on, but with a tempered Spike, in love with Buffy and - wham! back she comes from time past and all at once he realises that Buffy is infact Elizabeth and she realises that he understands her knowledge of everything - of the unlife he was going to live, when she knew him, encouraged him, as William. Loved him? Now, they both read the betrayal in his eyes, the grief in hers. He cannot see her love; he cannot see beyond her betrayal at the first shocking sight of her, dressed as Elizabeth and wearing the gift of love from an innocent young man stifled by his demon self.

'Tis a tangled tale, and your fine tuning makes it work, so effortlessly. And now. along with the duality in Spike, as the emotions of William push to the surface - we see the same conflict happening with Buffy. The hardened Slayer veneer, her natural contempt for Spike are now seeped in the memories of yesteryear, where the girl had empathy and warmth and love for William.

I loved Dawn's carping about Willow: I never felt it was addressed enough in the Series and here we have Dawn expressing just such complaint with the clarity and candour of youth.

And as for the Angel factor ....... well. Can't you just see those chocolate-brown eyes melting Buffy with kindness so that she leans into him for comfort - all the while looking at Spike and knowing, yes knowing what lies beneath the younger vampire's exterior. And that momentary smile. A shiver at this inspired hint: a hint of Angelus still present in his soulful counterpart.

Now how is the boy going to react to the scene before him. As William, or Spike - or both?

Brilliant.

Author's Response: ****And as for the Angel factor ....... well. Can't you just see those chocolate-brown eyes melting Buffy with kindness so that she leans into him for comfort - all the while looking at Spike and knowing, yes knowing what lies beneath the younger vampire's exterior. And that momentary smile. A shiver at this inspired hint: a hint of Angelus still present in his soulful counterpart.**** Oh, you understood where I was going with that scene perfectly! That's so great to know. I wasn't trying to portray Angel as "evil"; he does care a lot about Buffy. But he and Angelus aren't completely separate entities, and his history with Spike is bound to bring out his not - so - good side. As to where that will lead ... well, we'll just have to wait and see. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 03:32 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Oh Angel always did like to stick the knife into Spike and twist it and I don't think he's done twisting yet. I like Angel I really do but where Buffy is concerned he always wants the "best" for her and if that isn't him (and it can't be) then she shouldn't have anyone - definitely not Spike. Then Spike not really thinking about the outcome but just needing to get to Buffy. Oh I love it and I'm not going to try and guess what's going to happen I want to watch it unfold as beautifully as it already has. Thank you so much for the update.

Author's Response: Yeah. I don't believe Angel is a bad person with his soul, but he's selfish when it comes to Buffy and he's never been compassionate with Spike. We'll just have to see where that leads in the next chapter. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Taylormaid Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 03:24 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Nooooooooo!!! Poor Spike! My stomach is all tied up in knots with this latest chapter. What a mess! I need more......it's like a drug.

Author's Response: lol. I'm glad to know you're enjoying it so well! I should have another fix for you shortly. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: S Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 02:23 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I hope this is cool, understanding Angel and not stupid Angel. But it seems not.

Author's Response: Angel was being very understanding of Buffy and her needs. Spike? Not so much. But then that isn't too surprising, given their history. Thanks so much for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 01:34 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Bad Angel, Though I loved the rest of it and can't wait till your next update.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you did. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Angi Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 01:31 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Well, it was clear that meeting each other in the present wouldnīt be all hugs and puppies, but this is very disappointing, especially because Buffy doesnīt even remotely consider anything of William could be left in Spike. And I donīt think it is the normal reaction, either. Wouldnīt anyone who lost what she did scrabble and search for the similarities? Wouldnīt we want to believe that we have a chance to pick of some pieces to put together? If William had simply died, there would be nothing left but memories. I donīt get her apathy and that she isnīt curious at all.
The complete lack of any interaction or talking puzzles me a bit, it feels weird. And if I didnīt hate Angel before, I would now, extremely so.

Author's Response: I'm sorry you're disappointed. But, honestly, I don't think it would be at all realistic for Buffy to believe that Spike and William are the same person. Her last interaction with him before heading to 1880 was when he tied her up and threatened to let Dru kill her if she didn't tell him she did/could have feelings for him. Also, she has always held the believe that vampires are nothing but demons inhabiting corpses; she mentioned this many times on the show, often prompted by Giles' teachings. If she *did* admit that Spike is just William with 121 years' experience behind him, then she would also be admitting that William is a murderer, which would be absolutely devastating for her. Her reluctance to accept that they are the same person also accounts for her reluctance to see him, but we'll be delving into that more deeply as we go along. I hope you keep reading and thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Gemma Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 12:32 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

This is so good. I love the last sentence - just sums it all up so well. You captured the characters so well.

Can't wait for more - thanks for posting!!

Gemma

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it. :-)

Reviewer: caia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/31/2007 - 12:05 am Title: Chapter Forty-Four

ow ow OW.

Meep.

Author's Response: ROFL. Um ... thanks? ;-)

Reviewer: Blue Bell Knoll Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Finding this page to read was the prefect ending to my night I simply loved it.

Author's Response: How sweet of you to say. Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-)

Reviewer: vampid cupcake Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:40 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Not liked I loved this update this board needs a new grading system on a story this good to check off.
Spike is in so much pain and still the idea of Angel going near Buffy at all is enough to drive him out to find her. And then the sound of her tears cut into him then seeing her with suck face Angel I hope there are words and Buffy says something to Spike or defends him.

Author's Response: You're so nice in your reviews. It's great to know that you think so highly of something I wrote. Thank you. :-)

Reviewer: B Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:37 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Three

I have been away from this story for a while, but I've finally caught up on all that I missed. I was not one of those people who didn't like the strictly Spike interlude. Matter of fact, I loved it. Thank you. I once said that you had woven such a good story in the beginning that I would follow you in any direction you wanted to take it. I stand by that earlier statement. I await your next chapter in the hopes that Angel won't bungle a bunch of stuff up. But, he's Angel. (I'm shrugging right now.) Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: lol. Poor Angel, always doing the wrong thing, isn't he? Anyway, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: DeltaNightHawke Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:36 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Talk about ackward if they come face to face with Angel there fitst Spike is already pissed and coming from a fight and now asshat sire shows up. Buffy pull yourself tofether girl and stop wearing shirts that smell of exboyfriends gone.

more please pretty please?

Author's Response: lol. Good advice, that. But we know Buffy never takes good advice. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Record Breakers Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:33 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

"If he touches her—if he motherfucking touches her—"


Go get your girl! Kick Angel for Spike Buffy


Author's Response: Buffy kick Angel? I dunno ... ;-) Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: Burns2Touch Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:30 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

I think the boys are gonna fight~~~~~~~~~~

Buffy look up look up look up girl!

PLEASE!!!!!!

What a cliff hanger

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Guy of Gisborne Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:29 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

No his hands are beyond Buffy your gonna have to punch that look off of Angels face for him. Buffy has no delusions on Angel or Angelus.
Protect your Spike-illiam

God more please and soon!

Author's Response: More is coming as soon as possible, I promise. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

That bracelet isnt going anwhere but Willow might be. I loveddddddd Spike getting angry at just the thought of Angel coming near Buffy. I hope he tears his brain stem off

Go Spike Go!!!!

Author's Response: Spike needs some cheering on right now, I think. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: serenity Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

GRRR!!! Damn that Angel. Damn him straight to hell. Oh how I wish Buffy and Spike would finally talk...about anything! This waiting is driving me insane!!! Great chappie by the way!

Author's Response: Spike and Buffy will be talking very, very soon. I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: HolyMoley Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:23 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Yes Spike sees both sides and maybe Buffy lied to protect him Dawn is very kind and sweet in this. Angel is sooo going down for touching his lady!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! :-D

Reviewer: CoH Queen Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:21 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

1 I love you
2. I hate you

this is so good but pure toture when I come to the end of the page!
Please more here I'll give you some stay awake and write drugs!



Author's Response: Mm. If you love and hate me in equal volume, I'm not sure I should be taking drugs from you. It might prove dangerous, lol. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: Popcorn Papoose Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:19 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Oh his poor hands darn poker vamps!
Buffu is not stupid she just hit her breakdown point it wouldn't matter who was sitting next to her she needs to cry i just hope Spike growls at Angel!

Author's Response: ****Buffy is not stupid she just hit her breakdown point it wouldn't matter who was sitting next to her she needs to cry**** Exactly! :-D

Reviewer: Park it Peter Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Angel die die die die!
He knows! He knows who Buffy is to Spike doesn't he!
I wanna shake the lptop screen for more!

Author's Response: lol. Laptop issues have delayed my updating somewhat, but I'm working on the new chapter now, and it shouldn't be too long. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: luridmuse Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:15 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

Noooooooooooooooooooooooo dont just end there!!!!!!!!! Ahhhh No! I'm dying here!!

Author's Response: Don't die yet! You've got to stick around to see how the story plays out! lol. Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 11:06 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

......interesting....awesome update....i hope you update again soon:):) hehe

Author's Response: As soon as possible, I promise. Thanks for the review! :-)

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 10:28 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

When Buffy went out to the porch, I was flashing back to "Fool for Love". So I thought it was Spike that was walking toward her. At least Spike didn't here Buffy say "it was terrible".

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. :-)

Reviewer: kim Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 08/30/2007 - 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Forty-Four

ouch ouch ouch

I'm wondering if Angel, with his photographic memory, is going to put 1880 and William's girl together as one and the same. He was really good at puzzles, as long as they weren't directly linked to his own decisions. I so don't want him to be cruel now!

Poor Spike....and Buffy's being a moron if she insists on holding to that Council line. But, if she lets herself consider "death", "Spike", and William's feelings if she was lost, she HAS to feel both guilt for still causing his death, and rage at Willow etc. for bringing her back. She might have been able to convince William of the dangers of the night if she'd been truthful, but she wasn't and tried alone to protect him.......and as soon as she was gone.....She did him a disservice, so of course, Buffy doesn't want to think about it.

At least Dawn has a brain in all this, but will anyone else, including our couple?

Author's Response: A lot of people think that Buffy is being an idiot for refusing to accept the connection between William and Spike, but really, I can't say I blame her for being willfully obtuse. To admit that they are the same person would be to admit that the man she fell in love with became a serial killer -- and a particularly brutal one at that. Whether she'll be able to face reality is a question that will be answered in future chapters, and I hope you enjoy them when they come. Thanks so much for the review! :-)

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