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Reviewer: Ula Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 02:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I feel like I'm reading a classic and I love it please write more soon!

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:50 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I think I held my breath the whole way throught that chapter. I was so excited to see that you had updated. This is so beautifully written. I love it.

Reviewer: Chris Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Aww...I really love reading this story, You've written the shy,nervous William so fantastically well.

I just hope nothing horrid happens - but then I expect they will ..lol

Reviewer: VM 24BFF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

I think it's so incredibly brave of him to give Buffy his words when knowing how everyone has rejected him and made fun of him in the past but he is honest with her and shows her his feeling towards her. So beautiful I want a guy like young William here it almost made me cry to see his happiness. Man I need a tissue!

Reviewer: Taras_Gold Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:04 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

The beauty of working at a call center is that I can stalk Spuffy.com hunting for your new stuff to come up and trying not to do a huge Woo-Hoo when it does. So much to like about this story but I think I loved the part best is that when he said He had hope to his Mom that she might care for him cause I think that says a lot.

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 12:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifteen

Oh how cute is that he's all like dreamy when talking to Anne abnout her at the ball. I did a girlie sign myself.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/22/2007 - 11:07 am Title: Chapter Fifteen

oh god i love it!!! its almost too sweet for words! i think i might be a sucker for william even more than spike if thats possible...hmmmm... especially the way you write him. i hope you update soon!

Author's Response: I've always had a real soft spot for William, which is why I had to write a fic about him. I'm glad to know I'm not the only one who sees him as just as interesting and attractive as Spike. Thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Golden Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 10:54 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

This is just delightful and several times reading this I feel my own heart hump for these two. This is my favorite romance on the board here by far.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you feel that way. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Nary a kiss and I am completely swept away. Perhaps such undemanding love is what's perfect... Though I wonder what comes next for them in this world. How she sees him. So very amazing.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:37 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

William leaving her there. And Archer being an ass as he is, certainly seems to have a few truths to share. Drama indeed. I love it.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:23 am Title: Chapter Twelve

How I love them. I just love it. So very sweet, how they just creep along. Wonderful.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/21/2007 - 12:08 am Title: Chapter Eleven

That Underwood girl. Can't say I much care for her in this universe either, though a chance to push Buffy and William together is an unresistable opportunity. A wonderful chapter.

Reviewer: smg fan Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Wow, I lvoe this chapter, got little butterflies in my stomach when he was telling her about his feelings, it was so sweet. Wonder weather Buffy is going back to her time or staying here :P. Hope you update soon!

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 11:41 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Nearly nothing happened, and yet everything happened. She truly cares, and she wants him to, too. I love how timid they both are. A truly wonderful chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)

Reviewer: Neptune Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 09:09 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

So beautiful a story it makes me miss BtVS all over again well done! Please add more when you can.

Reviewer: squawks Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:47 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

oh i love this story! William is soooo sweet! You write him so well! Please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 10:40 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Awwwwwww she keeps tenderly reaching out to him in little ways and she is so perfect in what she says to him because she see's how fragile he is and she shows him he is the better man and he is safe in his feelings for her. You can see she is scared to and unsure but she still wants him to be happy and comfort him. I think she lves him as well and just does not know it..
I just love this for it makes my heart jump to when I read it like you are right there with both of them and that is the skill of a very good writer. Please please add more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I always thought it sad when people mistook William's sensitivity in FFL to be a weakness. I know the script even called for him to be a "wuss" but I never saw him that way at all. I'm glad to see I'm not the only one who appreciates his vulnerability. :)

Reviewer: bguardbjb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 10:34 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I like the fact that even though William thinks Elizabeth too will reject him and his feelings he's honest with her and tells her his writing is now all about her. He may be shy and awkward at times but he's honest and it was good to see him not rejected for his honesty with her and then he would slip her his work. Really into and loving this story and hope you continue making us all your William fans here.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :) I always did want to see William rewarded for his honesty and affection in FFL, though obviously Cecily was not the woman to do it. That's why I decided to manipulate that scene somewhat to fit into my story. I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 05:24 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Leave us wanting more why don't you? I can't express how much I love this. Why not let her stay and let them be happy together. Stuff the future - this is far more romantic.

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: Serena Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 04:08 am Title: Chapter Fourteen


Loved it! Please update asap!

Reviewer: VM 24BFF Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 01:36 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

I think it's cool she's sort of choosing a life with him I just fear when she gets ripped away how it will effect both of them and I know I'll be dying to read that.

Author's Response: Not saying a word on that front, but I'm glad to know whatever happens you'll be there to read it. Thank you so much for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 01:05 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

OMG THAT WAS SO SWEET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i LOVE this story sooooo much and am so happy u updated. im so glad that he told her he loved her and that shes falling for him too. also i though it was so cute that she kised him on the neck and he called her his love. i really hope that they get together and that tehyre happy. also i hope that dru doesnt come after him and turn him, i dont buffy to go back and hate spike(even though william is spike). please update as soon as u can, im DYING!!!! to read wat happens next. thanx

Author's Response: I'm glad you feel that way. Thank you for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: Unavita Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:55 am Title: Chapter Fourteen

Superb writing and I'm hanging from my seat.

Author's Response: The best compliment a writer could receive. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2007 - 12:01 am Title: Chapter Thirteen

OMG THAT SOB BASTARD, I WISH BUFFY HAD KNOCKED HIM OUT INSTEAD OF JUST SLAPPING HIM!!! i love this story so much and am so happy u updated. i cant believe he said that and that they think that of buffy. i really hope that buffy gets to him before he gets hurt and that she conforts him. also i hope that everything works out and that buffy and william get together and are happy. please update as soon as u can, i CANT wait to read more and see wat happens next. thanx

Reviewer: Mephisto Walz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/19/2007 - 11:11 pm Title: Chapter Fourteen

Ackkkk! I fear that if Elizabeth tells him her feeling he will have a moment of happiness and she will disappear and go back to her time and he will be devastated. Its like I want her to go back to Spike in her time and see what happens and at the same time I don't want William turned into a vampire and you know sooner or later it will happen to him. I think in every review I do I say I love this but I do it is the best story of Elizabeth/William I have ever read. An I cant resist wanting o read more.

Author's Response: That's okay Mephisto, you can just go right on saying it. lol. Really, though, I do appreciate your taking the time to review. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

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