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Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 09:09 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Lots of turns in events going on I'm curious as to why the visitors sent William into a panic and he needed to compose himself. Was it for Cecily turning up at his house or was it just from it being with Elizabeth alone in the library and she touching him? If they are family friends I could see William having a long time crush on Cecily and her checking out Elizabeth out just cause she likes William crushing on only her. Sooooo the ball invite would be a way for her to try and step on Elizabeth if she sees William happy with her. Humm this story has got me wondering what all will happen next. I look forward to the reading. Excellent Spuffy story telling. I keep wondering if Buffy is thrown back into the future will she still have the bracelet or will Spike. For her it be sentimental and for him it be longing. Heheeheh only time will tell.


Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story and I hope that continues. :)

Reviewer: BloodRoses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 05:05 am Title: Chapter Eleven

“Well!” said Anne, after they had seen their guests to the door. “That was quite a nice visit, wasn’t it? Very kind of them to stop in.”

Since neither woman had been overly friendly to her, Buffy’s response to this cheerful observation was less than enthusiastic. However, she was surprised to see William frown also.

“Yes,” he said thoughtfully. “I suppose it was…”



( I could be wrong here but Will was having a better time before they all showed up there. And I wonder why hasn't he asked Buffy more about herself.)

Author's Response: I'm sure William was having a better time when he was alone with Buffy...but his reaction to Cecily's invitation is something else altogether. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 03:50 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Another fabulous update. William is so endearing. I love this so much and can't wait for you to post more.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm trying to update on a regular basis so just keep checking. Thank you for taking the time to review and I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Mselfie Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter Eleven

We see so much of Buffy's thoughts I wonder what he is thinking. For Buffy must throw him for a loop and yet you know he is watching her all the time it was so sweer to see him talking to her and telling her about himself in the library cause I don't get the impression anyone ever has once again this fic delights me in its storytelling and I look forward to the ball

Author's Response: There will be some slight shift in POV, but I will say that the first part of the story will be pretty much Buffy's with only a glimpse into William's thoughts here and there. The second part will be William's. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Taras_Gold Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:29 am Title: Chapter Eleven

This story sucked me right in and I'm hooked. William is going to love being Buffy's escort unless.......... He already had plans to woo Cecilly. It could go either way and ow I will toture myself thinking about it till the next new post.

Author's Response: Lucky for you I'm updating feverishly. ;) Thanks for reading and reviewing. I hope you enjoy Chapter Twelve.

Reviewer: Mephisto Walz Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:22 am Title: Chapter Eleven

It's nice to see they are getting more relaxed around each other and I can't wait for Buffy to go to the ball either in her X-mas dress and bracelet or something else for she will blow Spike er...William away and make old Cecily look like a potholder next to her lol.
I thought it cute William is sneaking in things in conversation when he thinks Elizabeth does not know what he is saying. He is sort of hard to figure out now with Miss Underwood popping up sort of makes me wonder if William had a interest in her before in this story or what will happen next.
Cannot wait for more.

Author's Response: Potholder? lol. I love that. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:16 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Oh yes!!! Updates! Wow so much going on and you see Buffy following William more. I love the piano scene in the past chap. and I loved Buffy's reaction to noticing William noticing another woman. This story is so good but I do not trust Cecily or her ball about as far as I could throw her. I'm not sure if she's trying to expose William or out to embarrass Buffy in front of her friends.
As always I love your writing style and crawl on my kness begging for more of this story.


Author's Response: Begging with get you everywhere. I hope you enjoy Chapter Twelve and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Arabella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/18/2007 - 12:11 am Title: Chapter Eleven

Ah a ball and at the same time I'm worried for William he will get bitten at this ball. Take heed William girls in curls can never be trusted!

Author's Response: Could be...my lips are sealed. ;)

Reviewer: sarah g Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:08 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

WATS WITH CECILY, SHES ACTING HELLA WEIRD!!!! i love this story and am so happy that u updated. im so glad that buffy and william are growing closer and that shes starting to like him as well. i really hope that when she goes to this party that cecily doesnt try to embarrass her or do something to upset her. also i hope that buffy saves william from dru, even if it could mess up the future. please update as soon as u can, i cant wait to read wat happens next. thanx

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I'm updating as often as I can so hopefully you wont' be left in suspense for too long. :)

Reviewer: synonumous Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 07:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

that was amazing! i love it! like im blown away and its like hard to blow me away trust me. Ive read million of fics but this one is up there. its amazing please update soon! pleease!
love
syn

Author's Response: Thank you so much; I'm so flattered you feel that way. I'm trying to update every day or two, so just keep a lookout. And thanks for taking the time to review. :)

Reviewer: bguardbjb Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 05:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine

This is just so heartwarming and well written. Every gril thrown back in time needs to meet a William. I need another chapter this is a a page turner.

Author's Response: I just posted Chapter Eighteen. I hope it lives up to your expectations. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 05:16 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

Yes, I am sure that William will be delighted to escort our Buffy to the ball!

Oh yaya!!!

Author's Response: Well, you never know... Thanks for reading and reviewing. :)

Reviewer: daydreamer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 05:09 pm Title: Chapter Eleven

more please :)

Author's Response: Wish granted. I hope you enjoy it. :)

Reviewer: smlcspike Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 05:01 pm Title: Chapter Ten

Love it, was he going to tell her he was into poetry before Anne started to cough.
More please.
Wonder what her friends are doing.

Author's Response: Yes. He's very shy about the poetry, but she was being so encouraging I think he probably would have told her. Thanks for continuing to read and review. :)

Reviewer: Jenna Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 04:38 pm Title: Chapter Ten

I love this story! OH!!!!!

Please update soon! I am sooo hooked!

Author's Response: Wish granted. I hope you enjoy Chapter Ten and thanks for reviewing. :)

Author's Response: Sorry, I meant enjoy Chapter Eleven. I see you've already read Chapter Ten. ;)

Reviewer: Belfry Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 02:51 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I came across this story last night and I've been sneaking reading it at work and I have to say it is my current favorite story going. It has a sweetness to it and yet you know at some point she will go back to the present time. You have a great hold on me as one of your readers I am dying for the next update.

Author's Response: Loyal readers are definitely of the good. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I hope you continue to enjoy the story. :)

Reviewer: BloodRoses Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 12:19 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Ok this wine-colored dress and William braclet need a outing :)

Author's Response: Could be.... Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Tears of the Moon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 11:06 am Title: Chapter Nine

I'm just waiting for these two to crash into each other or Buffy to fall off a ladder in the library and for William to lost just a bit of his resolve for a few seconds and kiss her. I am just in love with this story hope you add more to it soon.
And Go William! Forget your rules for 2 seconds and kiss the girl!

Author's Response: lol. Well, I'm not saying one way or another about that. You'll just have to keep reading (and reviewing!) to find out. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Sam Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 05:34 am Title: Chapter Nine

I love this story.


Author's Response: I'm so glad you feel that way. Thank you. :)

Reviewer: anon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/17/2007 - 03:18 am Title: Chapter Nine

love it love it love it. love that last little encounter. read through this when it was on your homepage, which i hadn't been able to find recently. excited to see that you've updated as far as you have on ff.net. will the story be on track to be finished? it's been on my list of favorites for a long time. you're an exceptional writer, and your characterizations are wonderful.

Author's Response: Yes, I got tired of trying to maintain the website and since I don't really have a web designer's eye (or patience) I just decided to let it go. This story is definitely on track to be finished, but it is turning into a much longer story than originally intended (4 parts instead of 2) so it might be a while before the end. However, I am trying to update much more frequently. Glad you're enjoying it and thanks for reviewing. :)

Reviewer: DebsSpike Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 11:52 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I am curious is William just blushing a lot or is he flushed? Buffy has noticed a few times he's incredibly warm and with his Mom being sick and the doctor yelling at him in the other room it makes me wonder if Williams health is ok.
I just love this fic it's so elegantly written and your handle on Buffy and William aka Spike is really right on in how they seem to stumble when they are together with their attraction. Please add more soon I'm dying to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Could be ill...or could just be a reaction from being near a pretty woman. I'm not saying one way or another. ;) Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: MadBrillianT Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I am absolutly loving this! this was an inspired idea.i can't wait for you to update!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 11:28 pm Title: Chapter Nine

I love that he really likes her. And Matthew giving her the low down, perhaps ignorance really is bliss. I wonder if she may win a game yet. Another wonderful chapter. Looking forward to the next.

Author's Response: Poor Matthew had only the best intentions but he did almost cause more harm than good. I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for the review. :)

Reviewer: Dj Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 11:20 pm Title: Chapter Nine

Awwww William he try's so hard and Buffy doesn't know how to read him. It's so romantic watching them stumble into one another. I love this part and yet I am dying to see what happens between now and when she gets back to her own time and faces Spike and how he will handle it and her and see if he shares the same memories.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. :)

Reviewer: Arabella Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/16/2007 - 11:17 pm Title: Chapter Nine

This is so touching the way they both dance around in a romance. I loved the bracelet part and how you just knew he gave it to her but didn't. This whole story is just so lovely and different. I like the fact William likes Buffy despite convention and in small ways he try's to be near her on the steps outside and wants so desperately to know he chose the bracelet for her himself but he cannot say it and only ever so often can he risk paying her a compliment. I cannot wait to see what happens in the next chapter.

Author's Response: The conventions of the day are so hard on someone as passionate on William, aren't they? I'm glad you enjoy the story. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. :)

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