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Reviewer: redangelteflon Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 11:22 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Could not resist reading this tonight and fell in love with the way you write. Dawn is cool and Spike makes you love him in his transforming ways it made me have high hopes for the Buffy and Spike romance and this does not let you down. Solildly written you take the fanfiction writing to new heights.

Reviewer: fatale noir Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:56 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Beautiful story took me a while to read but really beautiful. Giles seems to have a anger vibe like he knows B is sleeping with the enemy and I think Spike might do something crazy like sell alien demon eggs at a easter parade
LOL

Reviewer: riddlemespinx Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:48 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Hott story not what I exected at all and a great surprise in reading. If you were not a S-B fan you would be after reading this.

Reviewer: xx_mayday Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:45 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I love this story and how you show them falling in love and it is so pretty and then when she leaves how hard it is on him and how lost he becomes in being Spike really a compelling story to read I'm really glad I came across it and hope to read more of it soon

Reviewer: doRaExPlorDer Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Hum......................Money easy got could be a good or bad thing cause with Spike it could mean by crime or by his William side and he still has his old funds.
I like your spin on Willow so many writers always make her so goody goody and you made her more human and kinda blind to her friendship with Buffy it will be cool to see how they both grow up a littl in thier friendship when money and adult problems force them to.

Reviewer: Snowyowl Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:39 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

The potent and most telling part of this page for me was with Spike spilling the blood and Buffy being grossed out but then goes about to clean the shirt like a normal girl and then when she breaks down and he holds and comforts her.

Reviewer: Breath-me_In Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I am loving Dawn and frustrated with Willow and usually that's reversed so I wanna see if there is a Willow / Buffy argument coming on soon

More more more more more =P

Reviewer: Jahled Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:14 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I had such a laugh at picturing Spike in a store buying club soda in my head I mean visually that has got to be the funniest thing ever. Thank you for such a great fic to read i love it.

Reviewer: You_Gotta_Love_Bite Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 10:12 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I'm glad Buffy got to fall apart a little with Spike she so needs him right now for some strength but I'm worried with his saying about money being easy to get. Please more soon I'm biting my nails wanting to know!

Reviewer: Cryns Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 09:59 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

(( Three hours, maybe, but not more than that. Surely, not more than that. After all, she had seemed almost reluctant to leave that morning; she must be eager to see him, to be with him. She wanted to be with him.
She did.She did.She did.))
Awwwwwwwwwww its like he is trying to convince himself that Buffy loves him and will show up. And then awwwwww too was her wearing a light floral perfume like she had in their past just for him.

Reviewer: BuffyRat Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 09:11 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

No question that he wouldn't step in and take care of her. Though I still wonder what Giles exact role in this whole situation is. He said nothing, but that really does little to either confirm or deny his support in Willow's ways of handling things. Really don't understand why the witches never bothered to pay any rent. Down right decent thing to do... Always looking forward to more. Please, update soon.

Reviewer: gdo Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 08:57 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Well, last chap. sounded more dire, about the job. Though Willow and Tara must have been paying for something, I imagin. Also, Buffy getting blood on her was interresting. I don't know where you are going wit it, or if it's just a one-time deal. Can't wait for next chap.

Reviewer: quirks Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 06:42 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

So happy to see this updated! I'm really liking the complexity of the relationship between Spike and Buffy. He's challenging her to be a better person in a way that William might not have dared to do. Thanks for the great development! - q (aka sus)

Reviewer: Celia Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 05:38 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Nice chapter, I was going to write more but when I got going along the way it stopped making sense so just I liked the update and please keep 'm comin' .

Reviewer: secretguest Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 05:36 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Spike's completely right!!! Willow and Tara need to get a job too and pay rent. They live there and use all the electricity and such so they should pay their share. How selfish of them, loading it all up on Buffy who just came back. Why bother having enemies with them as friends?!? Hope Spike gets Buffy on the right track and keeps the Scoobies from taking advantage of her, which they seem to do alot. Can't wait for more!!

Reviewer: Nicka Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 04:00 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

I love this story so much, its my favorite. I can't wait to see how this goes. Please update soon.

Reviewer: u2fan2005 Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:49 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Still things seem so unstable. Heres hoping it will get better. I'm a little nervous about Giles all of a sudden. He's a bit of walking mystery box so to say. What ever is going on in his head can't be good for our favorite couple.

Reviewer: anabel Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:45 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

he's making an great effort , wants to be good for her, but it's very dificult to after of so many years of blood bath
I hope that he does not make something really stupid to help her, something that she is going to blame him for it

Reviewer: Veronica Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

THANK YOU for saying that Will and Tara could pay rent. I always thought it was so unfair of the Scoobies to bring her back and then expect her to take care of them. I mean, it never even occurred to them, which is just plain unsettling. Thanks for a great chapter, as always.

Reviewer: becky Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:31 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

i love the fact that this story is really fitting to the characters. Spike holds up his end and isnt all nancy boyish only a little but he still has that badass thing going on. update soon!

Reviewer: Sotia Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/30/2008 - 03:28 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Three

Oh God, please don't let him mean stealing and please don't let her think he does and lash out on him!!!!

This was amazingly beautiful! I love your story and your writing and cannot wait for more!

*keeps fingers crossed that Buffy will stick with the 'not hurting each other anymore' plan*

And why, oh why, couldn't he just stick to the 'boyfriend' part of the phrase that upset him?!?! *sighs*

*hugs*
PS. I also love your beta for being so fast and having this ready today:P

Reviewer: Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2008 - 02:32 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Two

Reviewer: pixiecorn Signed Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/26/2008 - 03:54 am Title: Chapter Fifty-Two

as always an excellent update:) i cant wait for the next one....i'm loving this story:):)

Author's Response: The new update took longer than I'd hoped it would, but I hope you enjoy it. Thanks so much for the review. :-)

Reviewer: Kalahara Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 01:25 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Two

I might need a fan to fan myself from the hott-ness of the opening chapter if it was not freezing out here. You have really outdone yourself with this on with the up close moments between these two. And then with such possessiveness Spike wants to know if she let Angel touch here I was again feeling the steam. I especially liked the part where they almost exchange vows in telling the other that they are "Yours" and then this “I love you, Buffy. Let me love you.” was just the exact perfect William/Spike thing to say. As always I love your writing and this story and wanna get down on bended knee myself and beg for just a little bit more.
Looking forward to your next bit.


Author's Response: The "I love you, Buffy. Let me love you," line was actually Spike echoing Buffy's words to him back in chapter seventeen (when she seduced him). But I don't think most readers caught that, because it happened over a hundred thousand words ago, lol. It's nice to know that it was touching the second time around, and that you enjoyed the chapter. I really appreciate your taking the time to always review. It really makes my day. :-D

Reviewer: Edwiges Anonymous Liked [Report This]
Date: 01/20/2008 - 01:15 pm Title: Chapter Fifty-Two

I love how you ended this I can just picture Spike throwing back his head and laughing with Dawn telling him this. Much cuteness with Dawn waking in on Spikes place after Buffy had gone and their reactions rto one another. I'm in love with this story and can't wait to read more



Author's Response: The Dawn/Spike scenes are always so much fun to write. For some reason, I find that I really "get" Dawn in this story ... that it's very easy to slip into her voice and mind set. I'm glad to know that you think I'm doing a good job. Thank you. :-D

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